The Bar

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Major Peacenik, Jan 7, 2005.

  1. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    Jesus bribes
    the drunken Matador,
    his flesh frame purple against the
    deepening wall of vibration.

    Who is playing, who is playing?
    It is he, ranting sleepily
    against hustle and greed.
  2. OneUndone

    OneUndone Member

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    Good poem. It avoids some of the problems of most short poems, giving us some vivid images and unusual turns of phrases with little fluff.

    Very enjoyable read, thanks for posting it.

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