Wow - is that someone you know in the picture? Great job, you are very talented...I've seen some of your other stuff.
his? or the drawing hand? if its the drawing hand it was meant to look that way for cartoon like(read my descrption of what i was drawing) if its his that can fix
how much will you pay me to say its good? ok I'll do it for free it looks like the "Take me on" video from the 80's
its good but the hands arent so great - but hands are hard to draw. you should go take classes it will really help.