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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Mrpalmers$1000?, Jan 30, 2005.

  1. good times are few and far between,
    and because we cannot reshape the past, i was hoping to mold the future.
    mold the future into a thing of beauty and moments that would far exceede the sands of time.
    while i wish to have part in the shaping,
    i now know its time to let nature play its course,

    i just wrote this, lemme knoiw what you think
    its a work in progress
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

    nice beginning stanza, keeping working on it.
     

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