sweet wonder

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by kayatree, May 8, 2004.

  1. kayatree

    kayatree Member

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    sweet wonder in control everlasting, behold
    contempt shall brew and anger rule
    hate seeking vengeance beneath the placid blue

    pale skin peach hair fingers long with tempting flare
    unearth a beauty in disguise
    eaten from the outside retching to subside

    white lace gown, this ironic patience in a frown
    crown of light, a simple fight.

    hollowed trees compose songs of the past
    archaic frequency whistling hard and fast
    agonizing sorrows groan deep inside
    echoing the lost and forced to abide.

    closed eyes the wrath unfolds tear drops forming behold
    a lost soul withering on the grass
    despondent blue emit an iridescent flash

    guidance an earthly one unity yet become
    wrapped warm and deep in delicate leaves
    young branches lift her gently to her knees
    petals swarm and innocently find her ear
    and together they whisper, “i am here”
     
  2. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    deliciously existential.


    much love :)
     
  3. kayatree

    kayatree Member

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    hehe... excellent response friend. :)

    with love,
    kayatree
     
  4. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    i hope with this new forum comes more from you.

    cheers, mate... hope yer keepin' cool, aye.
     
  5. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    beautious! i always read your poetry at least twice when i come across it.

    exquisite!!
     
  6. kayatree

    kayatree Member

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    Hey sweetness! Good to see ya around...

    luvin' u,
    kayatree
     
  7. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    Wow, this is very beautifully written. Unfortunately, it seems like the author is no longer active but that does nothing to take away from the beauty of this piece. I especially like the rhyme, it's not very strict and still allows the poem to flow.

    Thamks Samhain for digging this up and putting it in the spotlight. I wonder how many more gems there are hidden in the histories of Hipfoums. If I ever have the time I might have to do a spot of browsing.

    Peace,
    A.
     
  8. Jack Maundrell

    Jack Maundrell C.A.P

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    I even read it twice. it seems very interesting
     
  9. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Excellent ~~*
     

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