Street Poetry (freestylez)

I’m gonna write this rhyme
But my fingers are to slow for my mind
jumping ahead, speaking the tainted words that crawl
from my bed, and forth into my dreams
for a second it seems real
but then i feel the orange peal, what the deal?
oh man thats wack, stop this track
and wrap it back, cause i dont think i dig that!
but on the last night of your life
You said it was him that ran into your knife
then you drop down on the ground not making a sound
and that’s when u have figured out humanity and its corrupt insanity
speaking with out words

 

*chuckles*

 

Are you saying I'm stupid?
I can't freestyle
That wasn't no freestyle. Admit it, it took you half an hour. I didn't talk any talk. I insulted you, not boasted about myself.
You're a poser
I ain't ignorant

 

I ain't saying it was bad, I'm saying that it wasn't freestyled.

 

I know it was freestyle! I sat here watching him write it.

 

It was written from the top of the dome. I didn't say that you did write which you obviously don't because you were called out and didn't even make an effort to respond to it. Yes you tryied to insult me but like I stated before, I believe you to be an ignorant asshole, who doesn't know what or who he is talking about. I started a forum for a for a free speaking style and when it was spelled with a z that angered you. I don't know why, but it did. When I truely freestyle it is never written with a keyboard it is spoken in a open real time forum of poets who come off the street and speak. As far as being a poser....who the fu** are u to say something of that nature. To correct someone is different then insulting them, and when you try to insult and correct at the same time it seemed your thoughts were alittle fuc***. Anyway, peace,pot, microdot......
Nothin but love............

 

Let me end this now and give you benefit of the doubt (I still don't believe you). Sorry if it truly was a freestyle. Don't replace 's's for 'z's it just makes you seem like a poser that thinks it's cool.

 

Duck what the fuck u had no right to say!
and when u tried to eat the food
that dog came barking back to attack
you gave him a smack and now you just talk back
But please dont give me that flaq.
you should just let it be
and see and the true beauty between you and me
and the slight cry from the east from the children that weep
who have less but. no no no your just hear to diss
so put your guard down sit down
take toke let off the choke
let the inspiration inflate your lungs
it may seen fun
but then run from truth, run from your youth
Slow down its way to profound
to be right standing up with your might
please listen to my insight

 

Wow, even if I wasn't stoned that would be awesome...

 

for bettrer or worse, we got a live one
its a sit right down and get youself high one
burne3d to the end and you might die one
sure as shit you gonna fly one

dogs and ducks and monkeys and guys with wide eyes
spittin splutterin blusterin accuse and back off
attack "no you're whack" better than 8 track
for entertainment purposes give us angry cold hard verses.

 

Hahaha oh yes, i rest with the best
and look at this mess! that i detest
oh and over there in the corner
the guy thats a loner, he from kelowna
and drinkin his corona

 

But wait sorry it sounds like such a diss,
i missed the purpose of this..... kiss
in my mind i fly to a new level of complexion
i reject words,
dissect the verbs that flow and grow
im getting kind of lonely,
it may sound phony but aliens control me