Street Poetry (freestylez)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dogfood420, Dec 31, 2004.

  1. I’m gonna write this rhyme
    But my fingers are to slow for my mind
    jumping ahead, speaking the tainted words that crawl
    from my bed, and forth into my dreams
    for a second it seems real
    but then i feel the orange peal, what the deal?
    oh man thats wack, stop this track
    and wrap it back, cause i dont think i dig that!
    but on the last night of your life
    You said it was him that ran into your knife
    then you drop down on the ground not making a sound
    and that’s when u have figured out humanity and its corrupt insanity
    speaking with out words
  2. thetaintedfae

    thetaintedfae Member

    *chuckles* [​IMG]
  3. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

    Are you saying I'm stupid?
    I can't freestyle
    That wasn't no freestyle. Admit it, it took you half an hour. I didn't talk any talk. I insulted you, not boasted about myself.
    You're a poser
    I ain't ignorant
  4. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

    I ain't saying it was bad, I'm saying that it wasn't freestyled.
  5. I know it was freestyle! I sat here watching him write it.
  6. dogfood420

    dogfood420 Member

    It was written from the top of the dome. I didn't say that you did write which you obviously don't because you were called out and didn't even make an effort to respond to it. Yes you tryied to insult me but like I stated before, I believe you to be an ignorant asshole, who doesn't know what or who he is talking about. I started a forum for a for a free speaking style and when it was spelled with a z that angered you. I don't know why, but it did. When I truely freestyle it is never written with a keyboard it is spoken in a open real time forum of poets who come off the street and speak. As far as being a poser....who the fu** are u to say something of that nature. To correct someone is different then insulting them, and when you try to insult and correct at the same time it seemed your thoughts were alittle fuc***. Anyway, peace,pot, microdot......
    Nothin but love............
  7. Duck

    Duck quack. Lifetime Supporter

    Let me end this now and give you benefit of the doubt (I still don't believe you). Sorry if it truly was a freestyle. Don't replace 's's for 'z's it just makes you seem like a poser that thinks it's cool.
  8. Duck what the fuck u had no right to say!
    and when u tried to eat the food
    that dog came barking back to attack
    you gave him a smack and now you just talk back
    But please dont give me that flaq.
    you should just let it be
    and see and the true beauty between you and me
    and the slight cry from the east from the children that weep
    who have less but. no no no your just hear to diss
    so put your guard down sit down
    take toke let off the choke
    let the inspiration inflate your lungs
    it may seen fun
    but then run from truth, run from your youth
    Slow down its way to profound
    to be right standing up with your might
    please listen to my insight
  9. Spastic_Monkey

    Spastic_Monkey Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

    Wow, even if I wasn't stoned that would be awesome...
  10. wideyed

    wideyed Member

    for bettrer or worse, we got a live one
    its a sit right down and get youself high one
    burne3d to the end and you might die one
    sure as shit you gonna fly one

    dogs and ducks and monkeys and guys with wide eyes
    spittin splutterin blusterin accuse and back off
    attack "no you're whack" better than 8 track
    for entertainment purposes give us angry cold hard verses.
  11. Hahaha oh yes, i rest with the best
    and look at this mess! that i detest
    oh and over there in the corner
    the guy thats a loner, he from kelowna
    and drinkin his corona
  12. But wait sorry it sounds like such a diss,
    i missed the purpose of this..... kiss
    in my mind i fly to a new level of complexion
    i reject words,
    dissect the verbs that flow and grow
    im getting kind of lonely,
    it may sound phony but aliens control me

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