Star Wars Fanfiction

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  1. What really happened...

    LUKE SAVES, even Empire technology overcome by
    power of force.
    Imagine how fiercely Luke fought against impossible odds. The Emperor AND Darth?! How he beat them?!
    Luke rage
    against the dying of the light, fights with all his might. Father look at Luke, father look at Emperor. Father throw
    Emperor down the well.

    Hm...what happen?

    k...Darth Maul fly by Tattooine pretending to be inconspicuous. Knows Jedi monitor the planet.
    He sense goodness coming from planet. Knows there must be cause of goodness. Go down to planet to hunt cause,
    knows cause is alpha male. Anakin sense Darth Maul sense him from space, but keeps self hidden. Anakin young boy,
    blonde or black hair. Like the idea of a dark haired cowboy with a lighthaired cowboy (Anakin and Obi Wan. Buddies.)
    Anakin track Darth Maul. This plot of movie. The Phantom Menace. Anakin think he figure Darth Maul out,
    Anakin decide to confront Darth Maul in Mos Eisley. Anakin realize after getting too close to back of hooded figure he
    cannot defeat him, Anakin knows is sensed, sneaks out of...Mos Eisley? Got this right. Where worst scum and
    villainry hang out.

    Darth Maul turns slowly around. Sees Anakin just as Anakin sneaks out the room, possibly even just a scene
    of Anakin's boot disappearing behind a door. Anakin, knowing is sensed, flees as fast as can to speeder bike. Super fast.
    Darth Maul has a special vehicle. Speeds after Anakin. It is better than Pod Race scene. Eventually
    Darth Maul overcomes Anakin in canyon. Knocks off speedbike, Anakin unconscious. Darth Maul
    approach stealthily, light up red saber (just half of it.) Goes in for kill...Obi Wan springs.
    Pins Darth Maul lightsaber to the ground. Battle begins. Eventually sand people come and help Obi Wan.
    Sand people were made to feel special by Anakin's goodness from afar. Were given hope in a weary world. Maybe
    you can't understand how Sand People are people but Anakin can. As seen in A New Hope they hold a grudge against Luke.

    Obi Wan take Anakin home to mother. Qui Gon shows up, or talks on space phone, something. Wonders, "Is
    everything okay?" Obi Wan had been following Anakin quite closely. Suppose all Jedi were.

    Scoundrel Han on wookie home planet. Goes there just to see what's going on, daringly. Wookies known
    for hating humans. Han rejected by woman probably. Expects wookies understand. I mean, we're all
    just wookies. Wookies no understand. Wookies gon kill Han. Funny idea, Wookie about to rip Han's arms off.
    Funnier idea, wookie about to rip Han's arms off is actually named "Wookie". We're all a bunch of wookies.
    Chewbacca come down in Millenium Falcon, rescue Han. Millenium Falcon wookie technology (read on).
    Chewbacca understands Han, actually. Notice how Chewy is always fixing the spaceship. The
    humans call it a hunk of junk. Why wookies hold a grudge against humans. Their technology is seen as
    inferior. May not look like much, but it's the fastest ship in the galaxy.
    ... What movie? Dunno. Not saying in trilogy.

    Anakin on lavabed. What you should understand is that Anakin most good natured guy in the whole world.
    Wouldn't kill a fly type. Not girl like may think. Or pretentious or bratty. Old fashioned.
    Everyone likes Anakin.

    Anakin and Obi Wan away with Padme, keeping her safe from Coruscant, where master Yoda suspect something
    very dark is occuring. Anakin returns to Coruscant in the midst of the Clone Wars, beckoned by Palpatine, who has terrible news.
    Anakin is told clone Padme has been killed by the Republic. She was publicly executed for crimes against
    Anakin. Like I said, everybody likes Anakin. Palpatine says she had been with Obi Wan.
    Shows hologram of Padme and Obi Wan together. Obi Wan is sitting across from Padme,
    holding Padme's hands. But this is occuring at that very moment, with Obi Wan consoling Padme
    who is deeply concerned about Anakin, because she is being told how dangerous Coruscant is.
    Anakin falsely believes real Padme is clone Padme, because real Padme would never be that vulnerable
    to Obi Wan.

    Anakin decides to kill Obi Wan. Chases down Obi Wan and Padme's ship. Obi Wan knows he cannot defeat Anakin
    in a dog fight, goes to nearest planet, volcano planet. Obi Wan gets shot down on the planet. Padme is dead.
    Obi Wan climbs out of the wreckage. Obi Wan and Anakin fight.

    Anakin ends up lump of burned up human, like hot dog on a grill. Fury. Seems to simply lie on his face, legs
    missing, arm missing, hair burned off. But Obi Wan knows he cannot be dead. Obi Wan cries just like in bad
    prequels. Says you were supposed to bring order to the force not destroy it, etc.

    Anakin head down, boiling, menacing. Tries to use force to kill Obi Wan, but something is missing: the fact that Obi Wan would
    never betray Anakin like that. Obi Wan adores Anakin. Nothing Obi Wan can do. In tears, leaves Anakin lying there.
    Empire drone ship watching on. Anakin taken into room with robot like Luke's hand scene. Circuits attached to base of neck.
    Helmet put on.

    THX-1138 code name for empire/Sith clone project. Clones look like regular people. Clones servants of regular
    people, though. Seem to know what regular people want. Coruscant. Yoda soon realize how evil to cheat people
    out of having chance to make things brighter for themselves. Maybe you don't know how black that is, but Yoda and Mace
    have a fight on their hands. The Clone Wars, begun they have.

    Vision. Anakin and Obi Wan like cowboys lost on dusty planet, think it's funny that no mission when
    sent on mission by Palpatine. Think genuinely funny, find it funny that they are sitting around a fire
    in the middle of nowhere, genuinely like two lonesome cowboys. Fire? They can't even
    comprehend that. Likely Sith leave fire to insult Obi Wan and Anakin. Obi Wan and Anakin lose ship
    in space battle with Sith ships, or somebody ship. Sith create false mission to keep Obi Wan and Anakin away.
    Away from Coruscant. Know that if Yoda, Obi Wan, and Anakin are together on Coruscant they will make quick
    work of the clones. This scene should be ending scene of second movie I suppose, Anakin and Obi Wan living it
    up on the open range like three amigos.
     
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