Soul Sista Versus Soul Brotha

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Zion, May 5, 2005.

  1. Zion

    Zion Member

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    The Blank check with no regret
    is a set of monolet
    I bet you of people
    can understand
    the steep hole
    created by the deep whole
    One love one heart lets get together and we'll
    soul be alright
    or All Right
    theirs always a question
    So theres always an answer
    or For every sweet deer
    theres always a panther
    Its the food chain
    never rude games
    just the truth thang
    Something even you sang
    so why use my unforseeable slang
    cause the cosmos rang so high
    that even you hang on to
    belong to
    and must be stong to admit it
    But the universe is yours
    Forget it
    Bet it and gamble if you really want to
    But the blank check is a sybol of the universes reflection
    empty whiles infinte in all driections
    to say I see what you say
    But the world see much more
    So whatever could be sore is always ready to soar
    For sure
    I agree just which you, and Im sorry I bit you
    No Ill never forget you
    Im glad were just friends so we finally set true
    Much love peace and LIfe to you.
     
  2. Zion

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    spin it..
    im spinning
    fabric of my skirt spins
    like the fabric of my soul
    spinning a reggae dance
    spinning out legs flying
    spinning sending sparks out
    expanding dispersing bouncing together away
    the energy of my love these days
    spinning
    the world around
    the kinetics of the love dance i have found
    the motion the power the strength
    to spin our world around
    joy of light and sense and sound
    spin it
    just spin.





    ~ELODY
     
  3. Zion

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    She's winning
    and fitting
    into world in which shes spinning
    becuse shes living in the the moment the slow spin
    so closely ingrossiing
    the most been
    liven on the post man
    who shows me
    the shows man
    listen close man
    life should be the only one we chose man
    not boasting
    their roasting
    they just didnt want to host then
    they lost track of their only coasting
    rolling wave or the way that theyv'e been saved
    from nothingness to somethingness
    the earths beauty and her humbleness
    so rest assured that the rest will be a sure
    example of GOD's holy anthem
    and no matter where it plants them
    they'll have to take a holy stance man
    infinte chance man
    impossible at a glance man
    the universe spinning as she dance yeah

    ~KWADJO
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Cool, face paced, like a rush to the head.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    So many beautiful twists and turns.
    Holy and natural, like a whirling dervish.
     
  6. Zion

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    Yeah! ELODY is a geneius... Artistic and scientific. Who ever settles down with her could be a very lucky guy.
     
  7. etherealeyez

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    Reading this poem was addicting once I got started I just couldn't stop. Loved how the train of thought built and went through so many emotions, anger, repentence, frustration, etc. At least that is how I heard it. But yes, hearing it out loud would no doubt be amazing as I can only imagine the power it would add to the meaning.
     
  8. Zion

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    I think
    its
    apparent and obvious
    that I'm not the
    snobbiest
    were a pair
    anonymous
    with no care for
    the odds heed us
    to stop being
    sloppy
    follow your heart beat
    you'll find that its not me
    its easy
    your not my copy
    cat
    as a matter of fact
    i don't enjoy being smacked
    so step on back
    and get back on your track
    cause Im not your exact
    this could only lead to life lacked
    Im sure you feel the same way
    So no need for a shame day
    good friends we became today
    and saved the day
    from any violence
    the noise you make when you respond in silence
    Its killen and drill in me
    a hole lota noo-sense
    since you seem to be my only noose hints
    I speak of the earth and all of its Worth
    from the moment of birth to day of desert
    Then you say "yeah..."
    I think you would make a good friend to me
    so lets stop playin pretend to be
    just lend me a hand shake
    and forget all the planned fake
    taught me how to make pancakes
    and to always take double takes
    cause first glance
    people arent always
    the sounds their band can makes
    which is your not problem
    or
    a problem with you
    its a problem thats created when
    we're supposed to make two
    Im a city cat
    stuck in the blaze of cool kind rave
    while your an elitists defeating neediest
    planting you seed to bust
    finding who you need too trust
    Yeah your right my friend when you climb to the end of your mountains
    all be sitting staring reading the fountains
    spouting bout the found things
    preaching bout the up not down things
    so while you save the physical world
    me and my girl will teach people bout the inside out things
    so when your peaceful world is ready
    I made the people steady and stable
    more over willing able
    to balance on this cable
    you elody I wish the finest of tables
    sit and eat somethin sweet and share with others
    cause happiness is the only things needed by our brothers
    like a mothers love
    and sure the mothers glove is good for the discipline
    but with out giving kindness whos goin be listenin
    so once again
    I wishin when I see you again
    the world will keep spin and
    peace and truth will keep you a friend again.

    Were far to differnet to try to act same
    I wish you were mine but Im just far too kind
    and Your far too mind
    But as brother and sister just like everyone else were gonna make great friends
    LOVE... my sister... LOVE...

    Wishing I were yours
    ~Kwadjo Osei
     
  9. Zion

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    deserving why a cry for sigh oh my
    truth hurts a little sometimes
    no use pretending
    come to times
    to terms
    to find my ferns
    in kind with turns
    but ouch...
    honesty necesity
    pave the way incescently
    to relief intertwined with greif
    to twist around then let go and float away
    with the sea breeze a clear day
    running on my clouds that run along
    underneath me and above matching my speed
    in sunshine and thunderstorms with
    my mind and heart so clear and free that i can let go of the thought pulling on
    my heals like heaviness of the water my legs push through as out to sea i dive
    the thought that i miss you so much, but
    really i have nothing to say to your words execpt
    thank god we will henceforth
    be enternal freinds and no more
    our conversations through wall of space between us
    step back the from the personal ache between us
    and relax into ourselves
    a break from my soul analysis
    because ouch enduring is not needed
    mind heart soul thought must be heeded
    so yours to your and mine to mine
    those storm clouds looming
    not so much a storm as a break
    stick to honesty it is easier to belive than those words spoken that constrasted
    so sharply with what had always been broken
    from the truth
    mind never fully tricked into beliveing those words questioned them but the
    agreeable would not let you do this sooner
    i always knew i was not for you and i knew it was tearing at you
    i always knew our connection was friendship
    i wanted nothing to do with games, playing games with future, with potential
    lives that haunted my dreams but thankfully that premonition did not actualize
    to new life growing in my body
    to me breaking personal space was being petted and stroked like a kitten,
    rolling a wrestling like a kitten nibbling and playing like a kitten
    but to you that led to arousal meant for someone more to you
    and to me it was the extent, wanting no more from you
    so i'll step back and let you your space
    and you will not be tempted to invade mine
    our walls are differnet distances from ourselves
    and that is the least of our differences
    as i ran on the beach this morning both over and under a tumulous sky, it was
    myself reflected beneath me, my own feat i was bouncing off of, and i was alone
    me and i myself alone suspended in a vast sky and bittersweet love released
    from me and finally i can sink into satisfaction.
    no more judgement no more guilt no more imbalance release release release
    find mine

    find mine

    find mine


    so thank you cat, for being you
    i think i learned a lesson or two
    and though succumbing to teptation was not meant to be
    i have yet no regrets
    i harbor no regrets
    and to you relax, no worries and please no regrets no blame no guilt either.
    much peace and love,
    elody gyekis
     
  10. Zion

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    Alrigiht alright now its time to have fun
    Soak up the sun cause we only have one
    Something sipmle and happy
    like the beat of a heart beat
    sparkling starts me
    for for its on life the were embarking
    parrdon me for parking my style from from a spar king
    And yes your right my style should shine its own light
    so its O right O right
    Like a logical fight
    that bite through any intimidating dynamyte
    like flight through night
    kick through dim light
    burnin the self bright cause were surrouonded by
    Might and thats a might be maby
    so lifes never truly shady
    true a shade be
    but shade is a fade seen
    in the spectral system
    all top to bottom when you list 'em
    so even zero light can glissen
    if you listen correctly
    and show some respect see
    your light shall forever protect thy
    the same comes in humans
    so no shame to you man
    cause every stars connected by light and darkness
    its somethin we all share
    so spark this
    understnading demanding
    where no one is commandiing
    of one and them other
    cause your just as free as your brother
    For we all saved my our mother
    dont bother mention fahter
    cause with out one another
    the world is owned by Sargent Slaughter.
     
  11. SpliffVortex

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  12. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    soul sistah vs soul brotha.....was excellent...very intense and pulled me in wanting more...
     
  13. Zion

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    Yeah Im sorry I had to burden any of you with these bogus poems of two stupid kids. I hate soap operas. I vowed that I would never be in one. But umm. Never say never, just don't do it. Right?
     
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