I like the second one alot, but something about the women just seems off, I dunno what, but it just doesn't seem right. Of course critiquing art is hard to do, but something about the form of the women just rubs me the wrong way, it doesn't seem as well thought-out as the rest of the painting, almost like it was an accident or an afterthought.
yeah i know what u mean...i think she looks dead, one day i really wanted to paint & i had no canvas so i painted on a green sheet....turned out ok.