Skinny's thread

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by littleskinny, May 31, 2004.

  1. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    I can't help but smirk a hearty chuckle, as I think: "Pasiphae".

    much love :)
     
  2. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    You seemed to have the whole thing weighed off.

    We sighed on entering, while browsing, and departing,
    into the warm breeze, that carried you a view of the succulent sea.
    We listened to the lap-lap of caressed shingle and the tabby's morning groom,
    shaded our eyes from the glare of whitewash, and revelled in the arms of your shady cave.

    We wrapped and unwrapped trinkets,
    left our dirty, city thumbs on the crime novels and romances doing the rounds.
    We held shoulders by antique erotica and dashed to discover herbs and wartime heroism.

    The postcard rack was a montage of paradise.
    Our envy bounced off the spine of your Clancy, ran groundwards down the leg of your chair.

    We asked you something.

    You, who had it all weighed off.
    You, Houdini from the sceptred isle rat-race.
    You in the wisdom of your sunsoaked retreat,

    knew nothing.
     
  3. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Here's a ballad to arousal,
    my fanfare to long lost feel.

    But - alas!
    Can't sing!
    No melodic partner for my clumsy footwork.

    Perhaps I'll plot the return route in champagne corks
    and we can stumble around in the dark together.....

    I am too busy planning your welcome home,
    to notice you when you are here.
     
  4. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    There is fluff in the Southern distance
    but the turquoise scars scored there
    are not Aegean promises.
    They are summer scandals
    pausing for effect
    over the naked shouldered paparazzi,
    soon to blow over Westminster, and be forgotten,
    as quick as every English summer.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Oh, these winds of heaven, dancing to the pulsing heartbeat of a beloveds' return. Growning, hither, in silent arrangement of hair and a smoothing of the gold satin sheets. Gathering a absent longing for your presence. These lilies draped, over a crytstal clear vase, spread my perfumed longing.
     
  6. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    erm...double posted...trying to delete....la la la
     
  7. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Opprobrious monuments
    remind us of lost Gods,
    of our need for succour, through
    birth to death.
    Only Man, the Intellect, has pillaged truth, made
    raindrops of venom fall and scald pine needles.
    Oily, poison clouds of arrogance
    unveil the
    serpent's truth.
     
  8. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Maudlin air
    in this carriage. At the next
    station I'll change, swap over, run to the end of the platform, regroup.
    At Morden lies freedom and breeze, the chill as the escalator claws upwards, but for now we've
    no air, no space, just sweaty collars and nostril hairs scared.
    Tin of fish. I'm a haddock.
    Heat and fish don't mix. Seriously, this
    rolling stock isn't fit to send calves
    over to the continent. You'd never be allowed!
    Politicians say it is improving.
    Yes. Of course it is.
     
  9. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Naked, clutching curtains at my throat
    I wave goodbye to the taxi's rearlights.
    Night time is lonely.
    City lights
    open up evening secrets through their
    morse code.
    Pressing my face against the glass,
    oval smears that vanish quickly. Fascinating.
    Orange street helps
    pass the hours. Forehead against the pane.
     
  10. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Darling,
    Ever wonder why obsession comes so easily to me?
    Velvet between my
    open thighs is part of the answer.
    Under you,
    reality takes a nap and I am
    evermore in
    Dreamland.
     
  11. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    The editors at Skyline have chosen one of my poems as a finalist in their autumn poetry smash, so here's some shameless begging that you click on the link below, register and pick "That Dolphin is Just Like my Heart" as the clear winner!! Puh-lease....?! [​IMG]

    http://www.skylinemagazines.com/phpBB2/
     
  12. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I really liked devoured mucho; it was simple, erotic, and one image that lets your mind roam free with the story between the lines. Two thumbs up from me!

    Also, That Dolphin is Just Like my Heart was wonderful! Ya got my vote...
     
  13. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    Noxious fumes of reminiscence
    linger after the mist of revery,
    wondering just what it was that

    changed.

    Formulate a morphogenetic bliss?
    To insist upon one more kiss
    and find you have wasted your

    time.

    Move on with the world,
    before the world moves on
    without you, absent within you.

    much love :)
     
  14. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Thank you Fulmah!!:) :)
     
  15. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I love the scope of this work. On the third verse I see "who opens the curtains each morning, whistling." tell me about your choice of 'knocks on."
     
  16. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Thanks Sylvanlightning....I chose knocks as opposed to opens for two reasons :

    1) because the morning sky does not open your curtains for you, you open them when it/she comes a-calling. I like the image of the workman arriving, marking the start of a new day, either knocking on the front door or ringing the doorbell, and someone blearily letting them in....that's what I wanted to protray with that line.

    2) I can see you might have concern about the sound and physical nature of "knocks" , but I intend the curtains to be representative not just of fabric drapes at the window, but also the hangings of sleep inside your head...the morning sky is the alarm clock that penetrates your skull to wake you.

    Does that help? Thanks for reading!:)
     
  17. littleskinny

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    I can see myself - look - just under the surface!
    My face is distorted because we can't stop laughing -
    My insides are lined with pebbles!

    How the sun smiled,
    when Marj spilt tea on her cornflower frock
    and the Italian sergeant helped mop her up!

    There are daisies here, tall as cattle, and
    grass seeds that stick to your hemline and stockings.

    And the lake! Standing on this fragile bank, I see
    fine-boned girls in fine-boned boats,
    their parasols flirting with this playful breeze,
    the buttons on the uniforms of their companions
    furiously signalling to space:

    all is well, or
    mission complete.

    We must join them, Marj, on the boats.
    Bring your Italian, quick, and let's be pirates!

    Is there an ettiquette, an order of procession
    for embarkation? A way of stepping in modestly
    in this breeze, and around the grasping hands of this infantryman?!
    We're in - don't wobble! Giggled screams
    and cast adrift.

    To the island! We're Crusoe, perhaps!

    The Italian and Marj are getting cosy, so I'm left to row.
    We need a flag.... and rum.... a parrot.
    I'd like a line. We could fish for sharks
    and when washed up, light a fire and live forever on the beach!
    We'd build a shelter from leaves and twigs, and wear grass in our hair,
    sleep under the stars.

    The searchlights wouldn't find us there beneath the trees.
    No more bump and burst of shells, or rattle of disturbed mortar.
    No more wards and beds and the screams when
    the ambulance headlights pause outside the window.
    We could keep the Italian whole and the bandages white.

    Shake these thoughts away! Time is not ours to waste.
    Now we've reached the island's shore,
    young lovers, recently acquainted, browse bushes for a patch of silence,
    and I smile, content.
    And the summer house is lit and lively!
    Come on you two! I'll race you to the tea and figs
     
  18. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    I love it skinny!! :) :)
     
  19. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    "I have carefully burrowed myself
    into the sand and scrub,
    I am well dug in, camouflaged, comfortable.
    I have allowed the elements to give my armour a tan."


    the comfort of protected isolation.. so real and immediate are your words.
     
  20. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

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    Inspired by a derelict abandoned tank...hence the title
     

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