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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by littleskinny, May 31, 2004.

  1. littleskinny

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    Dozy eyelids
    twitch with passing buzzes.
    No breeze to
    play with those straw strands.

    Besides
    they're too busy romancing
    regal emerald blades
    behind your ears.

    I wish
    there were a breeze.

    Not just
    to move a little of this azure sky.
    Not just
    to chase the beads of sweat downhill.
    Not just
    to make the sycamore conversant.

    Perhaps, too
    to lift
    that patchwork modesty
    a little.
    Perhaps, too
    to balloon a little cotton round
    your thighs.

    Perhaps to whisper nothings in my ear,
    to compliment
    the stolen preview.

    Dozy eyelids
    twitch under my scrutiny.
    Those straw strands stay still
    defiant.

    There is no breeze,
    and yet you still have helicopters on your blouse.....

     
  2. Fierce_Flawless

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    i liked this one. it reminded me of a story of a greek guy seducing girls over the internet that i saw on 48 hours.
     
  3. KittenX

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    Hey skinny, I couldn't find the poem you said got published...it wasn't anywhere on fictionpress.
     
  4. littleskinny

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    Ok - here it is:

    THINGS I HAVE MISSED THIS FORTNIGHT

    I miss the smell that used to linger
    at the top of my thighs till mid-week.

    I miss my cupboards being full up
    but I don't want to cook any more.

    I miss the fresh smell of my bathroom
    without weekend arousal man-potions!

    I miss the times we had nothing on
    and were bored and catty and children.

    I miss gorging to the point of pain
    Until we couldn't laugh or walk home.

    I miss waking and finding your arm
    turned blue with the weight of loving me.
     
  5. Fierce_Flawless

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    .....................:D word!
     
  6. Fierce_Flawless

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    sweetpea curtsy, sunflower tall
    :D beautious!!
     
  7. littleskinny

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    *grins tickled pink* :)
     
  8. littleskinny

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    Shotgun glance
    under the lid
    Heart beat: Yak Thump
    and over.

    All the news that’s fit to print.

    All the news I need to know
    like lightening.
    One shot. Confetti.

    Now that’s more like it.
     
  9. littleskinny

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    Gerald lit his cigarette
    and wandered through the rows of books
    and we girls scratched the desk tops;
    followed the smoke.
    Resting gently on Polidori
    -so unlikely! – his nails laughed
    en pointe.
    And when his tweed back descended
    we swooped
    upon Byron’s companion
    to analyse the marks in the dust.
    Then, conspiratorial blossoms, we
    followed Aristotle’s Man
    one by one, to the lower floor.
    He stubbed his cigarette by the entrance,
    to a swoon,
    and considered Homer’s jealous Gods
    in the muddiest study by the rack.
    Then
    We see him blink,
    come to life once more. He turns,
    and sees the crowd of Semele shrink.
     
  10. StarGateKeeper

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    Skinny,

    U amaze me! your poetry is so multi-dimensional... its like reading a rubic's cube as u solve it... U put the deep in DEEEEEP, Baby... the deeper I look into your thoughts, the deeper I see into my own...

    Whoo Hooo! No stops the Skinny train!
    :D
     
  11. littleskinny

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    Stargatekeeper- you're soooo good for my ego...thankyou for reading.... i love you!:&
     
  12. littleskinny

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    can't get the spacing quite right....sorry :mad:

    Yeah...
    I can hang around for one or two.

    over the road? Mine's a cold one.

    Yeah...
    flick ash at me!
    I'm steel strung, baby,
    and the humming just hangs.
    I buckle this bubble, here. Me, yeah.

    Can you hear me?
    I can hear me. You need to hear me.
    So here's louder.
    Don't look at me.
    Tosser.

    No...
    I don't know who it was.
    What do I know about number 1s in '62?
    Somehow it's my fault the coins aren't bowing to your kneecaps

    Yeah whatever.

    I'm going now.
    I don't want it!
    Oh ok, one for the road.
    One more.
    Don't like
    the way the Marriott is putting suits in my way.
    Why are they dancing? Posh wankers
    Huh...penguins!
    Don't like
    the way that bus is looking at me.
    Bastard nudged my shoulder!!
    Shouldn't even be on the sodding pavement.
    stupid daylight rainbow noose
    making me hack up shitty lungs.

    Really
    don't like
    the ceiling falling on me
    -look!-
    always bruises the inside of my skull while I'm sleeping.

    always. without fail.
     
  13. Musikero

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    Need I say more?
     
  14. littleskinny

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    Bouncing on my skin, the wind
    reeks of street corner; of
    every garbage can in New York City.
    Ammonia, courtesy of that sleeping man
    tastes vile hitting the back of my throat.
    Heave, lungs! Respire!
    In spite of the putrid air,
    no other essence
    guarantees my existence so delightfully.
     
  15. KittenX

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    Yeeesh...hard to breathe indeed!


    Heyyy I just figured out that it says BREATHING...duh...lol
     
  16. littleskinny

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    This princess
    enveloped in duck-down
    on a tower of mattresses
    sleeps calm.
    The pea no intrusive irritant
    with cold steel comfort
    under her pillow.
     
  17. Musikero

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    Interesting twist on the old "Princess and the Pea" story. It's like: Yeah, I'm a princess, but don't fuck with me cuz I have a gun. Pretty cool.:)
     
  18. Musikero

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    I love this! Especially the one about the wind reeking "of street corner; of every garbage can in New York City."
     
  19. littleskinny

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    Some steps
    in this mortal dance
    teach new things
    about rhythm and rhyme.

    The teeth that flashed
    in that stranger's smile
    lacquered my eyes in sunshine.
    The cigarette hung lackadaisical
    from fingers, pointed Venus in my direction
    then left, as fast as it had arrived.

    And then there was the foxtrot
    of the hands-on-hip whippet.
    Uncoiled like a sunning snake
    she preened before her laddish audience,
    playful, promising mosquito kisses,
    to irritate them later
    beneath their lonely sheets.

    But by far the most satisfying twirl of today
    was the vamp, alone.
    Powdered cheeks told of promises,
    of illicit meetings arranged but yet to come.
    Shawl exposed ivory shoulders
    aching for lips, tassels tickled hips.
    Dark lashes licked the pavement
    in anticipation.

    They were all plain dancing partners
    in the Unmeetings of today
    but all fired up like peacocks,
    they were beautiful.
     
  20. littleskinny

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    I spent Saturday
    inhaling bad luck at the bookies.
    Horses fell, no-one scored, and the odds were too steep.

    Where green paper flutters and kisses when winning,
    handing it over
    cuts deep.
     

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