Shoot Forth Tunder

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Colt, Jan 10, 2005.

  1. Colt

    Colt Member

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    Liquid Awareness

    the liquid hit me as i remembered i had been here before
    rushing upon me as energy waves upon a tryptamine shore
    consienciously aware
    awaken to a shifting atmosphere
    loading a pyrex piece, a brown haired girl
    "let's do more".

    I'm new in this forum, but I like poetry and enjoy good conversation so let me know what you think. Constructive criticizem is cool as well.

  2. EternalHunter

    EternalHunter Member

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    "Let's do more" what I wonder....

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