So I don't know if this would be the right place for this but I'd like feed back please. They were laying there in bed her head on his chest and her hand running up and down his stomach. "Tell me about one of your sexy encounters baby." Bryan asked Lexi. He loved hearing about her past sexual experiences. "Whichever would you like to hear about?" She asked. "I don't know, a hot one with anyone." She usually only talked about her boyfriend right before him because he was her favorite other than Bryan. "Alright. Are you ready?" Lexi grinned. "Oh boy yes!" He knew she had a good one in store for him seeing that smile on her face. "Well this one is when I was younger and not with a boyfriend." She went on to tell him how she was over to her best friends house Rob's house. That's where everyone would hangout when they were younger. They had been friends since he moved to town when they were little. She told him the first time they brought their friendship to the next level. They were out mud bogging and mud wrestling. When they got back to the house Rob jumped in the shower but Lexi wanted to shower too so she went on behind him. They both jumped in, in their bathing suits of course. They started off just washing up, Rob first then Lexi helping him get his back for him. Then Lexi with Rob helping her with her back. While he helped her get her back he couldn't help but pull her bikini string making it fall releasing her perfect perky breasts. "Umm Rob!?" She exclaimed quickly covering herself. That's when she felt him press himself tight against her. She could feel him growing agains her ass. "Rob what are you doing!?" She quietly yelled at him as she spun around trying to gather herself. He grabbed her head and pulled her in and kissed her. She didn't resist, she moaned slightly and kissed him back letting her bikini top fall back down again. He grabbed one of her tits and squeezed gently as he kissed her neck. She began to start kissing him starting from his neck working her way down his toned body. She reached his swim trunks, she could see he was getting hard. She slowly untied them and pulled them down slowly. His cock sprung from his shorts. He must have been eight or nine inches long and thick. Almost hitting her in the face as he fell out of this shorts she was extremely surprised. "Oh my god Rob! Your cock is huge!" She grabbed him with both hands and began to stroke his huge dick. She stuck him in her mouth and pushed him as far back into her throat as she could. He was grabbing her tits and pinching her nipples at the same time. Then he grabbed her and flipped her upside down with her legs on either side of his head and her pussy in is face. He began to lick her club while she sucked his cock. Lexi saw her husband getting hard from hearing her story so she thought it would be fun to jerk him off while she told it. She continued on with her story. He put her back down and turned her around. Her tits pressed against the door she awaited him. He took his cock and rubbed it up and down her clit. The anticipation was killing her she was dripping wet. He started to slide his dick inside her slowly. She lets out a loud moan feeling his big hard thick cock start to enter her. He pushed as far in as he could go, about half the length of his shaft. He started fucking her against the glass door. It was the biggest dick Lexi had ever felt in her life. She screamed from the pleasure and slight pain he was giving her. He fucked her faster and faster, he cock pushing further and further into her dripping pussy. After about five minutes of him fucking her against the glass he was able to slide his cock all the way into her pussy. He stopped and pulled out. She dropped to her knees to regain herself. She looked up at him standing there it huge cock dripping with her cum. She had cum twice just in that five minutes. "Does your pussy want a break?" He asked holding her head still as he guided his dick into her mouth. After a few minutes of sucking his cock while stroking him with both hands he picked her up quickly and she wrapped her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck. He slid his cock back inside her pussy and grabbed her ass with both hands and began to pull her hips in and out. Guiding her back and forth onto his cock she screamed as he pounded her pussy. She came twice more before he picked her back off of him and placed her on the seat in the shower. She grabbed ahold of his throbbing cock and began to vigorously jerk him off until his huge cock was spurting cum all over her tits. He shot six or seven loads of his cum all over her chest. It was just then when Lexi was done with her story Bryan shot his load into the air making a mess on the bed. "I love when you tell me your stories baby." He exclaimed. "And I sure do love telling the. To you!" Lexi replied.
As a self-confessed grammar nazi, I'd like to offer a suggestion. It would be much better if you wrote your story offline first and then copy-pasted (or uploaded in some other fashion) it to the forum. That way, you'd have plenty of time to proofread and edit your work before presenting it to a reading audience. The typos, sentence fragments, and punctuation errors in your story make it very difficult to read and enjoy.
I'm not much of a writer. I just have a lot of stories from my wife I have heard so all names have been changed and most stories are of what she as told me.
A qutie good source I would say - try to listen to her as much as possible, seems quite a bundle of stories! Liked that one so far - you should go on!
THE VISIT It was a Friday night Bryan knew he and his wife had the house to them selves. No kids no dogs just the two of them. They don't get that kind of time anymore. He went into work early and told Lexi he was going to put in some over time. Little did she know he was going to surprise her by coming home a few hours early. Bryan talked to her on his lunch break but she insisted to talk over the phone rather than FaceTime that night. He didn't think anything of it but thought it was a little strange that she had kept giggling over nothing while they chatted. So he asked her what was so funny. Turns out she had just smoked, he knew she did from time to time and she always got really silly. He loved that. Bryan punched out 3 hours earlier than normal and began his drive home. He hated not being able to tell her he was in her way, they always made sure they did just incase something were to happen. But he wanted to surprise her when he got home so early. When he arrived at their home he noticed all the lights were off except the bedroom. Which was strange because she never liked being home alone so she always kept most of the lights on in the house. Bryan thought she might just be in bed because she always got really tired after she smoked, that was the biggest reason see did. He entered the house and quietly took his boots off. As he started up the stairs he had noticed another pair of boots that were not his. Then he heard strange noises coming from their bedroom. The door was cracked open just a tad so he slowly walked up and peeked in. There he saw a man sitting in the love seat they had in their room and his wife kneeling in front of him, both completely naked. He stands in the doorway thrown back at what he's witnessing. He watches has his beautiful wife's head bobs up and down, listening to the sound of this mans cock going into the back of her throat. Bryan looks again to see if he can recognize the man who's dick is in his wife's mouth. He does, it's her ex boyfriend Jerry. Lexi and Jerry have always had a great sexual chemistry together. Bryan always thought the stories of their encounters were extremely hot. Bryan mentioned to Lexi his fantasy of her fucking him again but he never thought she would do it. Bryan saw he had been spotted in the doorway by Jerry. He walked in "what the hell is going on in here!?" He asked without anger in his voice but with confusion. Lexi stops and looks up at him. " babe!? I didn't think you'd be home for a few more hours?" She questions worried he would be upset. "No I left early to come home and surprise you, looks like I'm the one most surprised." He answered. "Well we had been talking about me fucking Jerry again and he came over to hangout and one thing lead to another and it just happened. I'm sorry." "Don't be sorry Hun. As long as you were going to tell me when I got home then it's ok." Jerry was sitting there with thick hard cock hanging out wondering what's going on. He started to pull his pants back up. "Well aren't you going to let her finish atleast?" Bryan asked. "What!?" "Well no sense in you leaving with blue balls." Bryan laughed as he went into the bathroom. Lexi sat him back down and shoved his dick back into her mouth. "Are you sure this is ok? It's weird right?" He asked Lexi. "No it's not weird. We have a strong trusting relationship and he knows how much I love fucking you just like I love fucking him and that's just it. We're just fucking." She answered. "Well if your alright with it then get over here!" He pulled her up and laid her in the couch so he could return the favor. Bryan came out of the bathroom and went over and gave Lexi a kiss who was moaning so loud now. Jerry was swirling his tongue around her clit while he fingered her tight wet pussy. She let out a slight scream as she came hard all over his fingers. She grabbed Bryan's belt and pulled his crotch to her face so she could in button his pants. "Since you came home early to surprise me I feel bad and don't think you should have to go without baby." She reached in and pulled out his glorious cock and began to stroke him. She stuck him into her mouth and began to suck on his cock slowly from the tip pushing it all the way in until she reached the base and groped his balls in the most delightful way. Bryan reached down to squeeze lexis perfectly perky tits as he leaned his head back with enjoyment of what she was doing. He then looked down to Jerry who was getting to his knees to get ready to stuff his cock into her dripping wet pussy. Bryan looked into lexis eyes. "Do you want to watch him fuck me baby?" She moaned as Jerry looked at her rubbing the head of his penis on her clit. "Yes baby I want to watch him fuck your pretty pussy." Jerry then not wanting to wait any longer shoved his whole cock into her with one swift movement. She released her mouth from Bryan's dick to let out a loud moan. Jerry is fucking Lexi with so much force. He's going harder, faster and as deep as he can go his balls slapping lexis asshole with every thrust. She screams again "oh god I'm cumming!" Bryan looks down to watch as Jerry's cock starts to slow his motion. He can see lexis cum glistening on him. "I want you to fuck me baby." Lexi demands. Jerry pulls out and sits on the couch next to Lexi as she gets up and bends over in front of him. Bryan gets off the couch and stands behind her, she waits for him, wanting to feel his thick throbbing cock inside her wet pussy. Bryan slowly slides his dick all the way in until his balls are pressed against her clit. Lexi lets out a moan again as she grabs a hold of Jerry's cock and begins to stroke it while she massages his balls. Bryan reaches around to rub lexis clit while he fucks her hard and slow. Lexi loves this, she loves how she can be fucked hard, fast, rough and slow and intimate all at the same time. She lets out a slight scream as she cums for a third time. Jerry puts his head back as Lexi strokes his cock squeezing it just slightly and spits on it to keep it wet. He's going crazy, she rubs her hard nipples with the tip. It's just then He lets out a moan and cums so hard he missed her tits and came all over her face, but she doesn't stop jerking him off. She wants every last drop out of him making him go completely crazy. Bryan watches as his wife jerks Jerry off making him cum all over her. He starts fucking her harder and faster grabbing her hips to keep her still and close. He gives two more thrusts before he pulls out and finishes all over her sweet ass shooting up to her sexy shoulder blades. "Well that was a lot of fun but I think we should keep what we do together just like that, with only each other." Lexi tells Bryan later in bed while they cuddle. "Yes I agree that was a lot of fun and if that's what you want baby that's fine with me. I just hope you will come home and tell me all about it after." He chuckled. "That sounds fair enough to me babe." Lexi agrees. They give each other a goodnight kiss and tell eachoether how much they love each other and how happy they are and fall asleep.
