Sentances are so un-cool/

Discussion in 'The Whiners' started by lover/young_peace, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    An so i say to you now, "May I please have some of that fine Italian dinner" because i've been t every house down Main Street an not a one of them is offerin. / an i leave your house with noodles down my vest/ an i agree with the great philosophers just like ev'ryone else/ they must feel sure/ an i do attempt these kinds of thoughts because i do not feel sure/ disorientation no longer exists to me/ the time t be frustrated is thru/ now's the time t watch/ sit an watch and observe an be entertained by it all/ watch the silent beautiful strangers/ you can see thru them, all of them immediately/ once you get familiar with them people are quite boring/ their motives obvious/ so obvious all the time it's tempting t become frustrated/ but i don't and won't do that.../ ... i know what i need/ somebody needs t buy me a house all alone/ not a big house/ it can be a shack as long as it's isolated/ an leave me there for a week/ so i can paint the ceiling an tell stories to the wall/ dreams 'll keep me company/ i know no loneliness anymore/ an i can stay there with my visions/ then set fire t it/ it'd be a sight t see, that house goin down/ anyway, i wish no harm upon those with obvious motvies, nor do i condemn them, i simply wish not to be spoken too/ that's all/
  2. prism

    prism :o

    I am getting/fed-up with you/and your fucking poetic slashes/VIVA sentences.

  3. Lucifer Sam

    Lucifer Sam Vegetable Man

    You spelled "sentence" wrong.

  4. prism

    prism :o

  5. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    fuck / you / asshat/

  6. Lucifer Sam

    Lucifer Sam Vegetable Man

    Yeah / ok / stop / with / the / slashes / right / now.
  7. andcrs2

    andcrs2 Senior Member

    Why/when did they start?
  8. Lucifer Sam

    Lucifer Sam Vegetable Man

    I don't know, but they should have never started in the first place. [​IMG]
  9. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    you can't do it right.../ an if you'll excuse me for the most miniscule second i must go t turn off the radio/ m'kay/ i've returned/

    don't be jealous/

  10. prism

    prism :o

    It's a "poet" thing...all great poets & lyricists know that....
  11. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    don't / be / jealous

  12. Lucifer Sam

    Lucifer Sam Vegetable Man

    You better stop... you're making HippyCor$ter look good.
  13. prism

    prism :o

  14. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    do not hate Cory because he cannot spell or punctuate/ hate him because he's an asshole/ there was a point to this origanal thought that went further than how I chose to punctuate it/ besides, I like the slashes/ they look more like thoughts/

    Do your thoughts come out completely in sentance form? Maybe they do, however mine most certainly do not. Mine come out disoriented and confused, and so I would like to record them as such.
  15. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    It's alright, Katie. I'm the only one who understands your sense of humor. :D
  16. Lucifer Sam

    Lucifer Sam Vegetable Man

    Can't I hate him for both?

    Do what you please...
  17. lover/young_peace

    lover/young_peace Senior Member

    Ahahaha... no. :p As long as the idea is communicated, the spelling is not very important.

    That being said, a boy of his age should be able to spell the word "great". :D

    Ahaha... :D I'm not being serious. :)

    Anyways the slashes are hard/ to use/
  18. loveflower

    loveflower Senior Member

  19. MoonjavaSeed

    MoonjavaSeed Yeah, Toast!

    aw/katie/i love/your new found/nakedness

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