send me

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Fierce_Flawless, May 15, 2004.

  1. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

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    drifting listlessly
    from the edge of a cliff so high
    here am i
    here am i
    send me

    i wanted so badly
    to feel the sky
    here am i
    here am i
    send me

    i offered my body
    to give temperence a try
    here am i

    here was i

    send me
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    this is a brilliant piece
    this is how i felt after reading ...what a verse to represent so much...
    <to me i feel like taking that leap of faith >
    and being free of all i fear

    thank you
    love n peace from saff
     
  3. Applespark

    Applespark Ingredients:*Sugar*

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    That was really beautiful. ;)
     

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