Seatbelts Fastened?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Billy Brown, Jan 21, 2005.

  1. Billy Brown

    Billy Brown Member

    As a child

    I would sometimes fantasize

    About my parents dying in a car crash

    Leaving me all alone

    In this world of which I knew little about



    As an adult

    I sometimes fantasize

    About dying in a car crash

    Leaving my parents all alone

    In this world of which they know little about
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    this was great! I really enjoyed the circular process you took with it, and the thought process behind it was intriguing as well... thanks for sharing it :)
     
  3. browneydgrl

    browneydgrl Member

    short and sweet and dripping with meaning. and isnt it true that generations just dont understand each other.
     
  4. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Damn...:eek:
    gave me shivers as I think of same things....
     
  5. Moro

    Moro Member

    wow, that was so awsome. it makes so much sense and is written so beautifully.
    ~Moro
     
  6. Billy Brown

    Billy Brown Member

    thanks everyone.
     

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