"searching"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ~piscean]-[delusions, May 21, 2004.

  1. ~ p i s c e a n ]-[ d e l u s i o n s ~ my poetry ~ searching

    embracing the desire to find what is within
    living inside of dreams, safe from reality again
    confronted with feelings of all that can be felt
    and trying to play whatever hand i am dealt

    i've found my purpose and know why am i here
    yet the future remains a blur and quite unclear
    all of the wisdom i have aquired through the years
    and all of the sadness which has brought many tears

    past experiences leaving a life with many fears
    and all to quickly am i left with fewer years
    witnessing the beauty of earth and all it contains
    only to realize for all the good there are far more pains

    its all to common to see things which are negative
    so i continue pushing further to find the positive

    my heart is crying inside for something to share
    so empty inside at times, yet it continues to care
    i often wonder how i manage to find piece of mind
    our world around us destroyed thanks to mankind
    where can i run and hide away
    where i can be safe and always stay
    nothing to hurt me, somebody to save me
    coming together from pain we are free
    yet still i continue to spend my life alone
    for the one for me has yet to make herself known

    imagination is a beautiful gift with all it lets you see
    for when your mind can wander you are truly free
    finding comfort in this life and looking for security
    all seem like impossible goals to aquire to me

    so what else is left for me to discover
    more mysteries than ill ever uncover
    ill continue to keep pushing further ahead
    for if i didn't i think my soul would be dead

    my heart is crying inside for something to share
    so empty inside at times, yet it continues to care
    i often wonder how i manage to find piece of mind
    our world around us destroyed thanks to mankind
    where can i run and hide away
    where i can be safe and always stay
    nothing to hurt me, somebody to save me
    coming together from pain we are free
    yet still i continue to spend my life alone
    for the one for me has yet to make herself known

    this life has considerately destroyed many of my hopes
    i just want to be untied and free from all the ropes
    consistently battered from every direction and being held down
    all too often do these things turn a smile into a frown

    how i made the wrong turns i will never know
    and back to the beginning i am unable to go
    is there still hope for me, after all is said and done
    i like to keep on thinking that my life has just begun

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  2. wow

    how you have given so much to this piece

    i love the way you allow each feeling to follow on from the last
    like life
    maybe we all should allow ourselves to look deep inside
    to remember who we are now and the future us...

    thank you for this post
    lovely
    love npeace from saff
    glad you know your self now..
     
  3. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

    that was tops! good work,


    "only to realize for all the good there are far more pains"
    are there? I hope not.


    "i like to keep on thinking that my life has just begun"
    good ending! it's nice to see hope.
     

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