Rhymes or Reason

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  1. WOLF ANGEL

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    "I 'Look' from my window, and what can I say?
    The weather like people, - shades of various Grey,
    But nevertheless, life is what it'll be,
    And Hippiness everywhere. - if one takes time to… -'See'"
     
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    I do love this thread
    The words get in my head
    They swirl around when I go to bed. xxxx
     
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  3. BJintheUK

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    Early one again today. I had nothing to do, so I watched the snow falling and penned today's ditty. I don't think it's one of my best, but I think it's appropriate given the weather conditions.

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    White flakes flurry outside the door
    they're getting thicker, more and more
    they fill the sky and hide the floor
    they wash upon the distant shore

    the cold they bring can't be denied
    small animals all rush to hide
    they burrow nests and there abide
    don't venture out but stay inside

    for this is winter's kingdom now
    or thus it would seem anyhow
    no warmth or pity it doeth allow
    all we can do is nod and bow

    to our new monarch seated there
    above our lives on sacred chair
    a throne for season's kings to share
    floating in the purest air

    it shimmers in the coldest light
    it's there in darkness through the night
    and though we tremble at its might
    against its will we try to fight

    with fire and water, earth and air
    burning wood we watch the flare
    of sparks as they rise bright and fair
    into the skies for all to share

    to spread both heat and love around
    although to this cold earth we're bound
    we try our monarch to confound
    earth's atmosphere's a battleground

    we use our wits to overcome
    the season's wrath that's come upon
    us using snow that leaches from
    us our life's joy till we succumb

    to give in to the winter's will
    surrender to the cold and chill
    accept our fate this bitter pill
    and wait with lives on hold until

    the king of spring has ousted winter
    tipping the weather out of kilter
    watching as the ice doeth splinter
    snow melts till the sunlight glitters

    on the thawed and running water
    ever onward over under
    ground and rocks we see it blunder
    till it's gone and we can gather

    in the sun that warms the ground
    we rise and spread our seed around
    nature's charms can then abound
    to give us sustenance profound

    so after winter's work's completed
    by the spring we've been depleted
    then by spring the winter's defeated
    and we can live our lives undaunted

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    It's predicted to stay this cold all week so I'll have to find something else to moan about tomorrow. See you then...! :)
     
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  4. BJintheUK

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    Here's today's offering. It has a name. It's called "The Heron" and is largely imaginary, although I do remember looking out of my bedroom window one morning to see a heron stood in the back garden of my neighbour who has a fish pond. As I watched, he saw me open the curtains, and quickly spread his enormous wings to fly over my garden and off up the hill. It was quite an amazing sight seeing such a large bird take off and lazily flap his way into the distance.

    Anyway, here's today's poem.

    The Heron

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    The heron and I stand perfectly still
    he in the water and me on the hill
    like a reed he's planted his feet in the water
    but even in breezes he never falters
    watching his meal as it continues unknowing
    never a movement do I see him showing

    what is he thinking this predator fair
    tall thin grey presence looming above
    the surface of lakes and of slow flowing rivers
    even though I am cold and cosily wrapped
    he never moves, he never shivers
    he knows that his food is forever trapped
    under the surface of bodies of water
    it's a resource he's learned to efficiently tap
    a lifetime of waiting to catch what he's after

    his eyes see me there as I watch from the bank
    silken grey plumage I can only admire
    then I open my mouth and in seconds he's gone
    along to the next one, the next garden pond
    to stand and to wait like a tall granite statue
    that adorns water features as though cast from a mould
    and enhances the scene as we glance from our windows
    a grey silhouette to add height and give shadow
    if you'd only just seen him you'd think he's not real
    but if you leave him alone your fish he will steal

    so how to engage with the heron I wonder
    I'd like to converse with this majestic bird
    he's lord of his kingdom, of all he surveys
    an opportunist who knows all the watery ways
    but I stand and admire him and study his form
    he's something unusual, away from the norm
    of what I expect to see from my window
    as I gaze out each morning when first I arise

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    See you tomorrow! Oh, by the way, it's snowing outside, did I mention that? No? Well it is, so I'll stay here in the warm, in my dressing gown with my cup of hot coffee, and dream of summer. :)
     
  5. BJintheUK

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    Today I thought about fish again, just like I did yesterday when I wrote the poem about the heron. Only this time I was thinking of sea fish like Cod and Haddock, and wrote a poem about them as we know of them.

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    The light shines out to split the darkness
    the white light sways from side to side
    it lets all others know of someone
    making way across the waves
    the trusting souls aboard the vessel
    hope that others see the glow
    and move aside to let them through
    bringing their precious cargo home

    the masthead light shines out for all
    to see the trawler as she sails
    to port from where she's caught her haul
    through heavy seas and squalls and gales
    with fish to feed the hungry mouths
    that wait upon the far flung quays
    they count the hours till she's arriving
    as she ploughs through unforgiving
    cold and ever changing seas

    at last the harbour light is seen
    from bridge and fo'c'sle as she rises
    breaching horses white with spray
    to forge her slow but steady way
    until the harbour wall is passed
    and underfoot the deck grows still
    gulls above them wheel and dive
    hoping for some scraps to steal

    the crew are busy now with hatches
    preparing to offload the catch
    to sell and tag and then to load them
    soon they'll all be on their way
    to far off towns and other places
    speeding down the motorway
    there to fill our waiting tums
    with chips and sausage
    here they come

    all battered up and fried with love
    steam rises to the flues above
    and into paper bags they're scooped
    with salt and vinegar, then wrapped
    dripping oil from their deep frying
    happy smiles, there's no denying
    the tradition that we all hold dear

    in olden times the preacher told us
    no meat on Fridays could we relish
    can you imagine such a thing
    but from that came our favourite dish
    of chipped potatos fried with fish

    it's filling and it's nourishing
    and through it all the price is right
    now there's competition from such as chicken
    to fill our bellies overnight
    but still it's common for us to wish
    to fry then eat our chips with fish

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    I wonder what my mind will catch tomorrow? I'll have to spread my nets far and wide to catch something interesting to write about. :)
     
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  6. BJintheUK

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    One for the history buffs today. I don't know why, but Covid put me in mind of what happened all across Asia in the 14th century, when Gengis Khan swept across the steppes to conquer all of Asia and Eastern Europe, massacring untold numbers along the way.

    The Mongol Hordes

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    The thunder of hooves from over the hill
    sounded the immediate warning
    "The Mongols are coming!" some shouted in fear
    it seemed that a new age was dawning
    so we sat and we waited and pondered our fate
    as we knew they were nearly upon us
    for though we have walls and a big iron gate
    we can't fight these invaders so callous

    the little men riding their war equipped ponies
    eventually hove into view
    we looked at them then as they swept down the hill
    and hoped that they'd pass right on through
    for these little men dressed in their furs and their boots
    could sweep all before them we'd heard
    they could kill you and eat you right out from inside
    but I thought that such claims were absurd
    so our leaders went out there on foot for to talk
    and engage with these strange little men
    but they killed them with arrows then rode them all down
    and came at us causing such mayhem

    the battle was lost before it began
    we never stood even the remotest of chances
    of winning against such devils as these
    who were armed with both bows and with lances
    so those of us left at the end of the day
    were all rounded up into the square
    though we could not make out a word they did say
    they started to execute most of us there
    but while they were at it they asked of the captives
    what living they made in the town
    and those who were actors were spared from the sword
    the cruel Khan likes his fun in the round
    so the actors all acted out plays that they knew
    hoping to live one more day
    and those of us working to keep the show going
    have been spared in a similar way

    but these monsters of men have now killed us all
    by sealing our underground streams
    that watered our crops for the past thousand years
    making farming a successful routine
    these devils don't understand farming at all
    they're herders by nature at home
    so they devastate all that they don't understand
    and then pass on forever to roam

    those of us left here to rot in our fields
    will all starve as we watch our crops die
    there's no point in trying to rebuild our farms
    so instead we all pray to the sky
    for God has deserted us, why we don't know
    perhaps we displeased him some way
    so he's punished us now as he's brought us all low
    and our future is what we must pay
    by next year there'll be no-one alive here at all
    the land can't support us you see
    so we'll all waste away and our villages fall
    and our people will no longer be
    the farmers and keepers and the fruit of this land
    a blessing that keeps us all shackled
    and in years to come writers will not understand
    our plight at the hands of these devils

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    So that's today's offering. Let's hope I find something a little more lighthearted to write about tomorrow. :) By the way, don't forget tomorrow is palindrome day, when the date will be 12022021.
     
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  7. BJintheUK

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    And here we are folks! It's Palindrome Day!! 12022021

    As far as I know the next one will be 22022022, in just over a year's time. So these don't come around very often. The one after that will be the 03022030, which will be eight years after the previous one. Essentially, for this century only people born in February will have palindrome birthdays, and only those born between the tenth and nineteenth of the month for years ending with a one. After that the date becomes 20/02/ and the year would have had to be 2002 for it to be a palindrome. So some of those dates in the 20's have already gone. Here's a not very exhaustive list of the one's I've worked out so far. I've marked the ones that have already passed in red and the ones yet to come in green and today's date in blue.

    01022010 Feb 1st, 2010
    02022020 Feb 2nd, 2020

    03022030 Feb 3rd, 2030
    04022040 Feb 4th, 2040
    05022050 Feb 5th, 2050
    06022060 Feb 6th, 2060
    07022070 Feb 7th, 2070
    08022080 Feb 8th, 2080
    09022090 Feb 9th, 2090

    10022001 Feb 10th, 2001
    11022011 Feb 11th, 2011

    12022021 Feb 12th, 2021

    13022031 Feb 13th, 2031
    14022041 Feb 14th, 2041
    15022051 Feb 15th, 2051
    16022061 Feb 16th, 2061
    17022071 Feb 17th, 2071
    18022081 Feb 18th, 2081
    19022091 Feb 19th, 2091

    20022002 Feb 20th, 2002
    21022012 Feb 21st, 2012

    22022022 Feb 22nd, 2022
    23022032 Feb 23rd, 2032
    24022042 Feb 24th, 2042
    25022052 Feb 25th, 2052
    26022062 Feb 26th, 2062
    27022072 Feb 27th, 2072
    28022082 Feb 28th, 2082

    29022092 Feb 29th, 2092 (if there is a leap year in 2092 that is!)

    After this century, in the next century (2100) only those born in December will have palindromic birthdays. For example, 01/12/2110 and so on. After that the next palindromic dates will be in March in the year 3001 i.e (10033001). So none for nearly 900 years after this century.

    As for people like me, born in the last century, there weren't any previously because there were only three numbers in the first till the tenth century (001 - 999). So someone like me born in 1950 wouuld have to wait for a while, e.g. 10099001, 11099011, 12099021, etc. But that won't be till the ninetieth century! So rather a long wait.

    Is it anyone's birthday today? If so then don't forget to remind them that just this once in their lives, their birthday is a palindrome. Can anyone knock up a quick rhyme for that? I can't think of one off hand, but give me a couple of hours and I'll see what I can do.
     
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    Oh now I am confused.
     
  9. BJintheUK

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    Okay, so it's late and I'm tired, and I almost dried up while trying to write today's ode, but I managed to get a few lines together. They're not brilliant, but they'll do for now. At least that's my excuse, what's yours?

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    The huge wings swept across the sky
    the dark shape shadow'd all below
    and as the monster passed me by
    I wondered if I'd live to know
    what it was it sought there
    as it flew across the blue
    I was angry at its passing
    seething as its trail it blazed
    the black eyes seeking out things
    larger than me as I stood there
    a tiny dot beneath its gaze

    the dragon's eye passed over me as though I wasn't there
    it teetered on the cusp of seeing everything so clear
    the day was just beginning but for me it nearly ended
    as the darkness brought a shiver from my toes up to my head

    the dragon had come back again to terrorise the people
    who'd known of its existence, but never met before
    those innocents who'd lived their lives free from such a threat
    now knew that all the tales they'd heard no longer were obscure
    for now the dragon took it's flight to look for living food
    it needed to regain its strength and foul was its mood
    so on it flew across the land until it found its goal
    a herd of cattle grazing peacefully poor unsuspecting souls

    the dragon landed near the meadow where they grazed in peace
    then took the cattle one by one, a veritable feast
    and when its hunger was assuaged it leapt aloft once more
    to terrorise the populace and enter into lore
    but meanwhile as I watched him turn and fly toward the hill
    where I stood and waited for him anger burning still
    the dragon didn't notice me as I notched up an arrow
    then as he drew near I took aim at his chest strong but narrow
    until he was there right above me
    as I loosed my string
    and as I watched the arrow crossed the space twixt me and him

    I saw the sharp point as it touched his scales and went straight in
    to skewer his heart into knots and burst his lungs therein
    with thunder from his throat he fell onto the land below
    and shook it like an earthquake as his dying breath he bellowed
    then lying on the wide green sward he writhed there in great pain
    until his life had ebbed away and I was sure I'd slain
    the dragon now he's gone forever into story land
    towering monster though he was I think I understand
    his reasons for the terror that he caused for everyone
    but now that he's passed into legend
    there'll never be another one

    and though he was a mortal beast his story lingered on
    and generations of small children, wide eyed every one
    listened as their parents told of such a beast of old
    and those who heard the tales went pale
    their blood was running cold

    but into bed they soon were put to dream of better things
    like unicorns and fairies
    and mermaids wearing golden rings
    who combed their hair on shining rocks
    risen from the deep blue sea
    sirens charming sailors
    on passing galleons sailing free
    laden down with gold and jewels bound for the Spanish Main
    adventures to engage them all as in their beds they lay
    stories to divert their dreams until the brand new day

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    See you tomorrow, when it won't be a palindrome, but just another day. Night night!
     
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  10. BJintheUK

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    Sorry it's a bit late, but below is the poem for the 13th, even though it's now the early hours of the 14th. Happy Valentine's Day!

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    The gentle breeze inflates the sails
    the thirty footer rides the swell
    the creaking of the deck beneath
    the sailor's feet brings into mind
    the movement of the sea as though
    it were alive to those who know
    the secrets of the rising tides
    the hidden caves and gullies worn
    into the rocks that hem the ocean
    to the shapes we see on maps
    those lines of coast some curved some straight
    that we all see from on dry land

    the interface between two worlds
    where surf and breakers spray and swirl
    and help us all become aware
    of different rules that pertain there
    beneath the surface in the depths
    where fish and mammals share the space
    they coexist in tense but equal
    relevance both keeping pace
    with undercurrents tides and waves
    that help migrating shoals to save
    on energy as they slowly swim
    from reef to bay and there within
    their nat'ral habitat they thrive

    while up above the breezes drive
    our vessels through the peaks and troughs
    from port to port to load and drop
    cargoes of many shapes and sizes
    and all manner of things that man devises
    crewed by sailors walking decks
    that creak beneath them as they move
    till into harbour where water's smooth
    to moor their hulls to harbour walls
    now safe from natures storms and squalls

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    Let's hope I can put up the poem for the 14th on the 14th, and not on the 15th. :)
     
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    Hello all, I hope you're having a happy Valentine's Day? Today's ditty is a bit of a downer, as it reminds us that not everyone can join in with the celebrations.

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    The tramp

    'It's Valentine's Day' the ad proudly announced
    'So buy flowers and a card for your loved one!'
    I looked in the window at the bright red display
    then without looking back I walked slowly away
    you see this day for me can be like no other
    I have no friends and certainly no lover
    I live on the streets of the cold hearted city
    with no-one to turn to in my hour of need
    I have nothing to cling to but don't want your pity
    instead give me credence and reader take heed
    for the world is a cold place with no-one to love
    no warmth and no comfort do I see in this place
    I cannot see friendship displayed on the face
    of the people I meet
    and pass on the street

    I beg them for pennies their souls I entreat
    to feed me and clothe me and give me some solace
    but all I get back is the feeling I've no place
    in this world of theirs as they walk arm in arm
    their shield is the love that protects them from harm
    it's what excludes me, I shuffle along
    as I hum to myself a sad lonely song
    of coldness and weariness and longing to feel
    the warmth of soft skin, not the coldness of steel
    for all that I have is a cot where I lay
    and curse at the troubles that led me astray
    to lose my conviction, to fall to despair
    that the hope of redemption could help me repair
    the damage that's done to my immortal soul
    so I stay here and suffer as life takes it's toll
    never more will I feel humanity's love
    but will wait till I'm called to account from above

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    Sorry about the depressing tone of the pome, let's hope I can write something more uplifting tomorrow. :)
     
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  12. Candy Gal

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    I love them all.
     
  13. BJintheUK

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    Early one today. I couldn't sleep so got up and came down for a coffee, and while I was at it decided to write a few lines.
    Here they are, and I hope they're more positive than yesterday's offering.

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    She snuggles beside me here on our bed
    and I cuddle her back feeling love's beating heart
    her long tresses brush at the side of my head
    as they cascade and tumble about in the dark
    I smell her aroma a heady cocktail
    of perfume and pheromones mixed all as one
    that she's warmed and exhuded from every pore
    of her beautiful body as we dance till the dawn

    for time's of the essence and fleeting for us
    we never have long to enjoy our embrace
    we hurry to reach for the heaven we seek
    as we both must return to humanity's race
    the race that we run every day of our lives
    competition for places in God's own domain
    the preacher exhorts us to toil and to strive
    till we reach paradise where we all can remain

    in peace and in love and the joining with others
    to give thanks for our blessings
    give thanks for our being
    give thanks for the bodies we live all our lives in
    for they are the vessels we must all inhabit
    where all we experience will happen to us
    where we can feel joy and loss, hatred and pain

    a huge cosmic train we must ride till the end
    to find out if we've won or must go back again
    it's a seminal lottery that we don't control
    and the tickets are handed to us when we're born
    will we win plenty of talents with grace
    or be condemned to exist both alone and forlorn
    will we be judged to be born fair of face
    or work to be pretty and our bodies adorn
    with paint and with jewellery to garner attention
    from those we would be with if only we could
    thank goodness I've found one to share my affection
    and love me the rest of my time here on earth

    so we cuddle each other beneath the warm duvet
    we feel through our bodies our love without shame
    the heat of pure lust that fades back to just embers
    that still can flare up to a bright glowing flame
    when the passion of moments can lift us once more
    and we dance to the music our bodies both feel
    as we move to the rhythm way out on the dancefloor
    of life as it turns on the great roulette wheel

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    Have a good one! :)
     
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    Oh I love that romantic one. x
     
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    Happy Shrove Tuesday everyone! That's Pancake Day to you and me.

    Today's pome isn't about pancakes, just thought I'd let you know that. Instead it's called Night Watch.

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    Night watch

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    The dark sky like ink stains the heavens
    with pin holes of light shining through
    the silver grey moon hangs motionless
    while the rippled glass lake reflects
    bright diamond drip effects
    pleasing delights
    to push back the black night

    meanwhile moonshadows dapple the darkness
    pick out shapes marked by shade on the trees
    that line the lake shore
    a new place to explore
    for small creatures that emerge at twilight

    the dew slowly forms as the time marches on
    black grass becomes grey to our sight
    by morning it shines in the new light of day
    as the tired moonlight
    now a wearisome sight
    fades away as it loses its fight

    with the sun that's revealed in its glory
    to carry the dew drops up on high
    and form clouds that obscure
    the pale sunlight and form
    fluffy vapour that litters the sky

    clouds that are scattered across the deep blue
    of the vaulted abyss that's above
    our hard working eyes
    must strain if they rise
    to admire such a glorious sight

    for the hours count the toll that's been taken
    and our eyelids grow heavy at last
    we yawn and we sigh
    now we must say goodbye
    but we'll wake for our vigil tonight

    to stand in the gathering darkness
    as the sun dips below the world's edge
    and take up our station
    protecting our nation
    from those who'd invade overnight

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    Wednesday tomorrow and half the week gone already. Just another three days and it'll be the weekend again. :)
     
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    I want to buy your book. xxx
     
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    Well! Today's the beginning of Lent. It's Ash Wednesday, when a priest somewhere is supposed to mark a cross on our foreheads with ashes (the biblical sign of death). And for the next 46 days we're supposed to go without food, drink, or any other earthly enjoyments, till Easter is upon us and our time of want is ended. However, this year I'm afraid that Lent has been overtaken by Lockdown, and that's likely to continue well after Easter, so batten down the hatches, don't go looking for matches, and only expect despatches for the next three months or so!

    Anyway, here's today's lament from the heart of an old man.

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    The morning light hurts my dry rheumy eyes
    the duvet lies hot and crumpled by my side
    I sit up aware of the ache in my hip
    then I turn to my glass and thirstily sip
    some water that's sat there since late in the night
    when I woke to my throat like dry sand on the plain
    so I filled up a glass with Adam's cool ale
    and slowly ascended the stairs once again

    but now I am sitting and shitting astride
    the white shiney bowl as I do every morn
    as I unload I grab at the plastic fantastic
    battery powered shaver, I'll soon be quite shorn
    of my overnight growth
    as I swear out an oath
    for the spinning blade's caught a strong hair on my cheek
    and it's jammed for a second
    a very long second
    till I can unjam it once more to proceed

    and then I complete my morning ablutions
    my morning devotions performed for the gods
    so that they may look down on this poor decayed sinner
    and give absolution for what I've done wrong
    during life that I've lived for my three score and ten now
    I've finished my sentence when will I be free
    from the prison of life that now keeps me enslaved
    to my body that's systematically destroying me

    for I no longer can be the lover of old
    who gathered the girls about me as needed
    and shared with them pleasures
    as we'd grapple and prance
    now my shrinking old body that struggles and wheezes
    can no longer manage the vigorous dance
    the rhythm that gives life its ultimate meaning
    the metronome beat of the whole human race

    for now I've become an old biddy fiddler
    who cannot perform even actions so base
    or so virile as those whom I once was among
    those thrusting young steeds and glittering fillies
    who dance in the fields as they sing their new song
    of love and of lust, the field of the lilies
    who blossom then fade as cruel time passes on

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    I wonder what Thursday's called? Lent 2? Sounds like a sequel. :)
     
  18. Candy Gal

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    What s fantastic contribution. X
     
  19. BJintheUK

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    Today's Thursday, or Thrustday if your name's Candy Gal.

    Anyway, here's today's tale.

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    The moon, dark water, a tree and an owl
    all ingredients for a story but who does the telling
    my mind's eye grows large as it thrashes around
    looking for metaphors to pin it all down
    into words and with meaning that some will find matter
    as they traverse the chasm of time on their hands

    a dark heady mix like a bowlful of batter
    to pour into pancakes
    just like your mum makes
    but watch out for mistakes
    as the mixture might splatter
    when into the skillet of iron it's poured
    to bubble and rise despite having no yeast

    and in seconds the newly formed pancake needs tossing
    make sure that you don't let it fly to the ceiling
    but comes back to earth all inverted and reeling
    to lie in the hot pan once more while it's frying
    then on to the plate slid, for lemon and sugar
    to sweeten the mixture and help it go down

    but back to our story of darkness and intrigue
    a suitable subject for stories of horror
    a suspensful spoonful of tales of the night
    that involve lakes and moonlight
    and owls that take flight
    and give the unwary reader a fright

    as the story progresses
    the reader it stresses
    till they beg for release from the words that invite
    them to panic and run
    from the villain's great gun
    that he fires just for fun
    till the deed it is done
    and the dark power that is
    has now claimed what is his
    and the tale at the crisis
    has given us goosebumps

    we shiver like Mugwumps
    the earlier name for the Mamas and Papas
    who didn't like Mondays
    that ended one sad way
    a depressing and dark day
    that washed all the fun away
    and left them bereft
    as though victims of theft
    of a life that consists of
    just work and a gist of
    enjoyment for those who
    can fight off the demons through
    wit and with guile
    with panache and with style
    till the story's great hero
    can vanquish his worst foe
    and we can all then go
    to lay down our heads for
    to sleep in our beds, Phew!

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    Friday tomorrow. Friday is fish, is everybody 'appy, you bet your life we are! :)
     
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    Always brilliant. xxx

    Tomorrow is FRIXDAY btw. xxx
     

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