Rhymes or Reason

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  1. BJintheUK

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    The cold strikes deep into my soles
    my feet seem glued to frosty ground
    my breath like smoke around me curls
    through chatt'ring teeth, an eerie sound

    the winter chills call every year
    they keep us chained inside all day
    but now I think I've found the cure
    at last to help us get away

    and all I need is your warm hand
    to hold in mine and let me know
    you'll help me leave this frozen land
    let's not hold back it's time to go

    so smile my love and hold me close
    there's nowhere we can't go, we're free
    there'll be no chilblains on our toes
    but warmth and comfort soon you'll see

    we rush to close our own front door
    to keep the heat in while we're gone
    then hurry to get in the car
    we're on our way, it won't be long

    just long enough to beat the cold
    as winter wind swirls round our ears
    the new year will be getting old
    when we return and grey skies clear

    the darkling clouds that brought us down
    now roll away to show the blue
    and warm bright sun's a golden crown
    a healing balm for me and you

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    Today was Fry's day, so I hope you all enjoyed your Turkish Delight? :)
     
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  2. Candy Gal

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    MY WINE XXX
     
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  3. fitzgarabaldi

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    I'd like a bit of wot he's got ? =- oh yes got too much heh?
     
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    I love a little tipple
    I guess most people know
    But only at the weekend
    As driving never NO
     
  5. BJintheUK

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    It snowed down our way all last night
    and now the world has all turned white
    it's like a winter wonderland
    but in my mind like pure white sand
    that swirls and sparkles in the sun
    and makes me want to dance and run
    and laugh at everything I see
    a not quite grown up child that's me

    when I was small the world was large
    but as I grew and soon took charge
    of my own fate and future self
    I left some things upon the shelf
    but one thing I couldn't quite forget
    unlike the others who I met
    was how to act and stay so young
    that even when the world was wrong
    I still could sit and quietly ponder
    how strange new things filled me with wonder

    a curiosity so great
    I'd sit and read and stay up late
    until I finally understood
    fresh new things, I felt so good
    that I was proud to shout aloud
    when all alone or in a crowd
    that I had just learned something new
    perhaps you can feel something too?

    a quickening of pulse and mind
    that helps leave troubles far behind
    as you dress up to gad about
    in pure white snow, and laugh and shout
    just like the child we all once were
    as snowballs whistle past your ear
    to split into a whitening dust
    you'll soon be laughing fit to bust
    while happy children scream and shriek
    let's hope it stays around all week!

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    For the sake of the local bird population I'd like to see the snow melt away fairly quickly, but the little boy in me still enjoys looking out of the window at the thick white carpet of untrampled virgin snow. :)
     
  6. fitzgarabaldi

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    nice one cyril!!! Gods way of temporary covering up the worlds blemishes ; so we can all pretend and start again!
     
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  7. fitzgarabaldi

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    Jerusalem in Ukraine

    I came across this dwindling crowd

    Their skins all shrivelled ; rotting shrouds

    they talked 'bout hopeless lives

    Forsaken women ? Forsaken wives?



    They shrieked about their fallen men

    wanted them all back again

    But sometimes Beelzebub he holds sway

    Takes what he can on careless days?



    Some say they fight for glory

    for the mother & father homelands

    They have the same Gods

    bearded priests stand and nod

    shake their smokin prayer pots to God?



    These wars have been played out ; many seasons

    ruled by seven deadly sins

    Unable to share they steal back what was ‘theirs’

    Empire building always part of the wares?



    I recall the wars of the ancients

    When David faced Goliath immense

    He said ‘right’ on my side swung his sling ;silent smile

    brought down satanic strengths consequence?

    fitzgarabaldi © 2022
     
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  8. BJintheUK

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    The daylight fades another night
    comes rolling in to dim the white
    of snow that's lingering around
    it seems to deaden all the sound
    of cars that pass along our street
    and birds that scrabble round to eat
    the food I've spread around the garden
    with luck it won't have time to harden
    into icy frozen nuggets
    that stick and won't slide down their gullets
    before they have a chance to settle
    while I watch and put on the kettle
    then grab a tea bag from the jar
    to make a warming cup of char

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    Wodin's day today, and tomorrow it's Thor's day. I can see why the days got these Viking god's names, the weather reflects them quite well. However, that doesn't explain why we still call them that in the summer! :)
     
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  9. fitzgarabaldi

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    Memoires – do they count?

    I got memories in my Head
    That I hoped I never loose
    But when I regurgitate sometimes
    They can give me violent blues

    I can almost touch the past
    And some say ‘well really it’s still there’
    And if I go back to hallowed places
    Yea I can kick up some old dirt

    Some say that all the tenses
    Are really woven all together
    Well I can get the point of that
    But right now it’s stormy weather

    I wanna see and feel
    Those cobbled streets again
    And shout out across at neighbours
    And most of all the family glen

    We had so many chances once
    But left them on back burners
    And now when I wanna talk
    The echos are just yearners

    I remember Ma tried to hold it all
    Said “Let’s just stay together”
    But Da said ‘No just let them go
    They need some stormy weather’

    And now our stories some untold
    We’ve got clipped advert versions
    If you wanna take off; go to the moon?
    Then prepare for shows ‘closed curtains’

    fitzgarabaldi © 2022
     
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  10. BJintheUK

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    Past successes are all gone
    but still the life force lingers on
    the pulse still beats within the heart
    that's not yet deigned to fall apart
    and pounding blood flows through the ears
    just as it's done for many years

    and so my friends I am still here
    to blunder through the pain and tears
    but also through the joy and laughter
    till I reach my own hereafter

    but till then I'll try to write
    the words that help us to unite
    the things that matter to us all
    until that final curtain call

    when will that be you might well ask
    but that's a monumental task
    to find out when it's time to leave
    so you can all stand by and grieve

    the memory of me once gone
    who knows it might not be too long
    until you hear me start to snuffle
    and off this mortal coil then shuffle

    but that's the fate that waits for all
    of us down here, the siren call
    of angels with their trumpets bright
    who must lead us into the light

    to meet our maker, then to tell
    our tales of life both heav'n and hell
    and then await His final choice
    He clears His throat then starts to voice
    His judgement for us each and all
    some will be saved but some must fall

    for good may win and badness fail
    the bad will rot in hellish gaol
    while all the good souls born of Man
    live with their God, if they can

    and those who didn't care either way
    will never see the light of day
    but wander through the cosmic night
    forever banished from His sight

    the sceptics and agnostics who
    couldn't see the message, sent to
    them from up above our world
    will now know as they slowly curl
    into the foetal shape like babes
    to sleep in darkness all their days

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    Bit sombre for a Frixxxxxxday, but not to worry, it's due to thaw out over the weekend, and the snow and cold will fade away as the temperature rises to around 13 degrees C early next week. Phew! We'll be sweltering over Christmas at this rate. :)
     
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  11. BJintheUK

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    What to say, she's gone away
    our daughter's off to France
    her hubby's there so no despair
    at the ferry's slow advance

    while overnight, with all its might
    the ferry moves her close
    to where he waits behind the gates
    of the house that they both chose

    and when it docks she'll wind the car clock
    forward by an hour
    then turn the key, drive off to see
    just where she's heading for

    coz she's been stuck without much luck
    with us for several months
    while letters flew she had to chew
    her nails down more than once

    until at last the die was cast
    her visa then came through
    so now she's gone to sail upon
    the ferry, with its crew

    across La Manche, to Northern France
    and there she'll drive away
    in Brittany she hopes to be
    with hubby that same day

    and then next week they're off to seek
    his parents for Christmas cheer
    though part of me is sad to see
    she won't be with us here

    but no regrets, just don't forget
    your mum and dad, so long
    coz though we love to have you here
    we know where you belong

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    Yep! Off she went this afternoon into the rainy gloom, to head for Portsmouth and the ferry. She made it with just minutes to spare and is now settled into her cabin for the overnight crossing. Tomorrow she will finally be home with her husband and the cat in their own house in Brittany. It's been a long three months for all of us as the bureaucracy ground slowly through the process of issuing her spousal visa (she's English and her husband is French). However, it arrived yesterday morning, so she's packed a few things and gone, just in time for Christmas!
     
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  12. BJintheUK

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    Funny old thoughts

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    T'was the day before New Year and the rain was coming down
    I thought I'd do some shopping, and perhaps go into town
    but the thought of getting wet soon made me throw away that wish
    instead I'll stay at home and try to cook a tasty dish

    from all the different leftovers "curried sprout pie anyone?"
    to desserts from all the rest
    I'm sure the gannets will all scoff until they've done their best
    to eat me out of house and home, I'm sure you know the score
    and when they've stuffed themselves quite full they'll still look out for more

    but "That's shallot" he used to say, Ted Ray that is, the comic
    he's long gone now of course but in his day he was quite a tonic
    his radio show always made me laugh when rain just poured outside
    it's sad he can no longer "Ray's a laugh", not since he died
    and all the other funny men I still can hear their voices
    and when I do something inside of me I find rejoices

    for they were fun and brought me sun when rainclouds gathered round
    I often wish I could still hear that warm inviting sound
    of Sidney Mincing standing there, covered all in rags
    while Ted Ray made me laugh as he told never ending gags
    about the little man who had the strangest of emporia
    the laughter I had then still gives me unexplained euphoria

    so welcome to my world of oldies who still 'Carry on'
    'Beyond our Ken' to 'Round the Horne' and finish with a song
    or like old Ted who played his fiddle and bowed to end his act
    I'd like to hear them all again right now, and that's a fact

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    Happy New Year!
     
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  13. fitzgarabaldi

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    HAPPY NEW YEAR ‘23

    happy new year for who as ‘23 we wish in
    just you and yours and kith and kin?
    lets wish real hard and through our prays
    Include all breathing life that’s mother earth

    the wounded and the fallen
    in war torn fields not far
    the oppressed in brutal regimes
    their villages/homes left scared?

    For those show on the Amnesty page
    freedoms brutally torn
    street dwellers in our cities
    perhaps ‘free’ but have no real home?

    Those animals caged and tortured
    to make a dime or two
    or forest homes just torn apart
    quick riches to accrue?

    To all who cannot say that I am truly free
    safe; dry and warm ; nurtured and fed
    Can’t cry I’m free ; I’m truly free

    © fitzgarabaldi 2022/23
     
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    WOW LOVE IT XXXX
     
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    Well done, I know you have New Year
     
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    Candy posted, to my delight: "I'd like to hear them all again right now, and that's a fact."

    My reply:
    I wonder how many of these oldies were recorded. If they were like radio broadcasts, you could likely download them off of archive.org or some similar site. Just load'em up on your computer or flash drive and run'em to your merry little heart's content!
     
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    That is true xxx
     
  18. BJintheUK

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    Winter Days
    09/01/2023

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    The cold sharp beauty of the sun
    the clear blue skies that daily glow
    the rustling of the bare brown limbs
    the chill as winter breezes blow
    I know the cold inside my bones
    the tightness here inside my chest
    my aching muscles let me know
    my aging body needs to rest

    but all the while as I sit here
    the world keeps turning there outside
    the birds and other creatures fear
    for life and limb, and some have died
    lost in winter's yearly chill
    lost the battle fought each day
    to keep on pushing up that hill
    to find their place of rest, then lay
    within the warm and cozy bosom
    mother nature feeds her young
    they suckle at the teat of life
    then fly the nest to sing their song
    the song of life, eternal chorus
    hark I hear them on the wing
    they brighten up the cold days for us
    hoping they'll soon herald spring

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    Happy Moonday everyone. It was full moon the other night, and when I got up at 4am to get a painkiller for my back, I looked out of the front door to be blinded by the intense brightness of the moon. I reckon I'd have got a moontan if I'd gone outside, but it was cold and I wasn't wearing much, so didn't venture beyond my own front door. Perhaps one day I'll be in warmer climes and be able to go moon bathing! That would be a first, and I wonder if I'd get moon burnt? What does moon burn look like? Would I go brown, or pure white? Answers on a postcard please to....:)

    P.S. Please excuse the artistic licence in the poem, I know that birds aren't mammals and don't suckle, but it's a poem not a science documentary!
     
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    ABSOLUTELY love it xxx
     
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  20. fitzgarabaldi

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    great stuff has a very strong feel of Thomas Hardy about it a poet whom I think has describe the english countryside so distinctly - have you read him?
     
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