Rhymes or Reason

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  1. Uhardrodnme

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    I know, without asking,
    exactly what he wants,
    and make it clear
    that what he sees and wants
    is what I so! want to give!
     
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    And as we peer so very deep,
    each into the other's eyes,
    we become same-sex lovers --
    he my dominant male,
    I his willing mistress for life.
     
  3. Uhardrodnme

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    And oh! how I love
    the men who make it happen --
    who keep calling,
    and cumming back for more;
    To hear the ringing of my phone,
    whisper, "Yes, I'm here alone ...!"
    and wait, without breathing,
    for his knock upon my door'
     
  4. Uhardrodnme

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    To meet him there (a married man!),
    and open my mouth wide
    as he lowers
    his hungry lips to mine,
    Moaning into his mouth
    as his fingers slip into
    my panties, to take possession
    of whatever they may find
     
  5. fitzgarabaldi

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    yes yes can we have the last stanza - i can't hold my frenzy back it is frenzying again!
     
  6. Candy Gal

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    Advent Calendar
    BY GJERTRUD SCHNACKENBERG
    Bethlehem in Germany,
    Glitter on the sloping roofs,
    Breadcrumbs on the windowsills,
    Candles in the Christmas trees,
    Hearths with pairs of empty shoes:
    Panels of Nativity
    Open paper scenes where doors
    Open into other scenes,
    Some recounted, some foretold.
    Blizzard-sprinkled flakes of gold
    Gleam from small interiors,
    Picture-boxes in the stars
    Open up like cupboard doors
    In a cabinet Jesus built.

    Southern German villagers,
    Peasants in the mica frost,
    See the comet streaming down,
    Heavenly faces, each alone,
    Faces lifted, startled, lost,
    As if lightning lit the town.

    Sitting in an upstairs window
    Patiently the village scholar
    Raises his nearsighted face,
    Interrupted by the star.
    Left and right his hands lie stricken
    Useless on his heavy book.
    When I lift the paper door
    In the ceiling of his study
    One canary-angel glimmers,
    Flitting in the candelabra,
    Peers and quizzes him: Rabbi,
    What are the spheres surmounted by?
    But his lips are motionless.
    Child, what are you asking for?
    Look, he gazes past the roofs,
    Gazes where the bitter North,
    Stretched across the empty place,
    Opens door by door by door.

    This is childhood's shrunken door.
    When I touch the glittering crumbs,
    When I cry to be admitted,
    No one answers, no one comes.

    And the tailor's needle flashes
    In midair with thread pulled tight,
    Stitching a baptismal gown.
    But the gown, the seventh door,
    Turns up an interior
    Hidden from the tailor's eyes:
    Baby presents like the boxes
    Angels hold on streets and stairways,
    Wooden soldier, wooden sword,
    Chocolate coins in crinkled gold,
    Hints of something bought and sold,
    Hints of murder in the stars.
    Baby's gown is sown with glitter
    Spread across the tailor's lap.
    Up above his painted ceiling
    Baby mouse's skeleton
    Crumbles in the mouse's trap.

    Leaning from the cliff of heaven,
    Indicating whom he weeps for,
    Joseph lifts his lamp above
    The infant like a candle-crown.
    Let my fingers touch the silence
    Where the infant's father cries.
    Give me entrance to the village
    From my childhood where the doorways
    Open pictures in the skies.
    But when all the doors are open,
    No one sees that I've returned.
    When I cry to be admitted,
    No one answers, no one comes.
    Clinging to my fingers only
    Pain, like glitter bits adhering,
    When I touch the shining crumbs.
     
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  7. fitzgarabaldi

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    I'll have wot ever she's drinkin!!
     
  8. fitzgarabaldi

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    Xmas Loneliness

    He was born lonely

    in a manger

    to a puzzled mum and da

    she said “I’m still a virgin

    He said “I know exactly who you are”



    He was born to be a loner

    walks the streets with stranglers for friends

    but he stirred up passion for a while

    and died lonely on a cross



    He had sorta laid a pattern

    as he wondered through the east

    cured a few; floored a few

    and called twelve for easter feast



    they sat and ate and laughed a while

    you could see their puzzled faces smile

    as he broke the bread and drank the wine

    said “they will take me, but I’m always thine?”



    he carried cross on bended back

    whipped by soldiers bemused on crack!

    Then they nailed him through the palms

    and the feet ; his outstretched arms



    just a few around the cross

    mainly women and mother engrossed

    Centurian to guard the nearly corpse

    he blessed the beggars hangin lost



    And then he cried out “father it is done”

    not my will but thine may come

    body laid in sacred tomb

    dressed by females in this room



    sadness fell upon them all

    the man they loved and challenged all

    and then said thy will not mine be done

    To the father from holy son



    there was gloom for three whole days

    the light of lights had gone not saved

    but then now we know what miracles are

    approached the tomb from afar

    rolled away a stone and found

    empty tomb Christ walked around



    Reported seen by his own men

    who stuttered and saw glory mend

    He had demonstrated death on cross

    But said Christ is risen ; through off your dross

    © fitzgarabaldi 2022 - merry xmas
     
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    That is so poignant and brilliant xxxx
     
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  10. fitzgarabaldi

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    I'm charmed! xx - that was off the hoof
     
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    More I need more. xxx
     
  12. Candy Gal

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    I like it when you’re naughty, I like it when you’re nice. I like it when your kisses have That little touch of spice.
     
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  13. fitzgarabaldi

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    you like it off the hoof then?

    I met her under gaslight
    she was standing in the gloom
    I stopped said 'ya lookin cold out here'
    'for tonight d'ya need a room?'

    she starred into my face a while
    and then gave just a hint of smile
    said 'are you soldier ; sailor ; friend?'
    She made me smile I said ' lets just bend'!

    I held out my arm the old style now
    she smiled again this time a bow
    and then slid in that arm
    its the connection that always has the charm!

    © fitz 2022
     
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  14. fitzgarabaldi

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    I met her under gaslight
    she was standing in the gloom
    I stopped said 'ya lookin cold out here'
    'for tonight d'ya need a room?'

    she starred into my face a while
    and then gave just a hint of smile
    said 'are you soldier ; sailor ; friend?'
    She made me smile I said ' lets just bend'!

    I held out my arm the old style now
    she smiled again this time a bow
    and then slid in that arm
    its the connection that always has the charm!

    we climbed the stairs I let her in
    she murmured 'wow this looks like seventh sin?"
    I said yea ya gotta 'cuse the mess
    for dinner had no time to dress!

    she curtsied once said your excused
    now where's the powder room for muse
    I nodded to the door marked 'sin bin'
    she said well suppose I'd better read some news?

    tbc
     
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    The night was black the moon was white
    it shone with radiance so bright
    it hurt my eyes to look for long
    I almost felt It was so wrong
    to gaze with longing oh so pure
    to touch the face that is I'm sure
    not really there at all but just
    a gathering of lunar dust

    but dust is not the same as dirt
    and so its feelings can't be hurt
    if we compare it needlessly
    to golden sunshine that we see
    in glorious full featured colour
    no my friend the moon's another
    monochromal entity
    that draws the eyes of you and me
    we sit and wonder if we can
    really get a pale moontan
    a moonburn that will turn us white
    if we sit here and bathe all night

    so look away my palefaced friend
    before this poem's reached the end
    of words and rhymes that fill the page
    and fuel a preturnatural rage
    a silent fuming turning white
    the knuckles of a fist so tight
    that any second now it might
    fly out to turn your black hair white
    and leave you terrified and shocked
    to lose the colour of your locks
    but all of this can only be
    if you moongaze all night with me

    ----------------------------------------------------------

    Full moon out there tonight I see, perhaps I'd better draw the curtains. Trouble is, I've never been much of an artist, so drawing curtains is like drawing money from the bank, alas another impossible task!

    Thornsy day tomorrow. Look sharp!, but sleep tight, and don't you let the moonbeams bite! :) :)
     
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    Love it xxx
     
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    It is full moon. Xxx
     
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  18. fitzgarabaldi

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    nice one BJ!
     
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  19. fitzgarabaldi

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    I met her under gaslight
    she was standing in the gloom
    I stopped said 'ya lookin cold out here'
    'for tonight d'ya need a room?'

    she starred into my face a while
    and then gave just a hint of smile
    said 'are you soldier ; sailor ; friend?'
    She made me smile I said ' lets just bend'!

    I held out my arm the old style now
    she smiled again this time a bow
    and then slid in that arm
    its the connection that always has the charm!

    we climbed the stairs I let her in
    she murmured 'wow this looks like seventh sin?"
    I said yea ya gotta 'cuse the mess
    for dinner had no time to dress!

    she curtsied once said your excused
    now where's the powder room for muse
    I nodded to the door marked 'sin bin'
    she said well suppose I'd better read some news?



    I heard her moaning;groanin out loud cry

    I called you ok hun ; she moaned yea just getting high

    sometimes the needles just go blunt

    and then I heard her murmur c…?



    well it’s not me to pry I just offered rest

    she can take care of the rest

    she’s a big girl now as Da would say

    she hit the road so has to pay?



    She came out smilin ; grinning too

    said “wow honey in here you’ve got some zoo!”

    then she rolled a mean cheroot sat down and said

    Well honey shoot!



    Well I’m just some sorta steady guy

    don’t get too nosey askin whys

    then I turned on some low sweet tune

    she gurgled ‘now that is sweet hun – over the moon!



    It all went sorta quiet and moody

    then she made a move that screwed me

    came across sat on my lap

    and snuggled in real close – I just was zapped!



    She started humming to the tune

    asked me ‘honey tell me about the moon’

    does is really spin some magic

    I murmured ‘ just give it time babe it gets more tragic!

    © fitz 3033 [fliew to the moon]
     
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    OOOH XXXX
     

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