Rhymes or Reason

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  1. BJintheUK

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    It's late, now there's an opening for a poem, a story, a film, a TV mini-series, or a play. But no, all I said was 'it's late'.

    Never mind, see what the fingers have been up to below! (Now there's a rude thought for you!! :) )

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    Moving fingers!

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    Where the moving finger writes
    there's a smudge of blue
    it looks just like a fingerprint
    except it's smeared and set like glue

    so on we go to the next letter
    it's going to make a word
    or at least that's what I've heard
    so let's hope this one's better

    better that is than the one before
    that took some time to compose
    a bit like a piece of music you know
    all dots and joined up lines I s'pose

    they're all joined up in boxes of lines
    like an essay on ruled paper (feint)
    as they say on the notepads of mine
    but then again perhaps they ain't

    who knows if I nose around a lot
    I might find the bloke who's jotting
    all this stuff down to make a poem
    and as such you'd expect some rhythm

    but sadly that seems lacking here
    although you know I've tried my dear
    I just can't seem to get them out
    those pesky words mess me about
    it makes me want to scream and shout
    but all I ever do is pout

    and stick my tongue out at the paper
    lying there so clean and white
    and though I try with all my might
    I just can't seem to get it right
    but I'm not going to sit here all night
    I've got a bed to go to tonight
    so I'll end it here and say 'Goodnight!'

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    See you Tunes day! :)
     
  2. Candy Gal

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    You will BJ.
    Sweet dreams. X
     
  3. BJintheUK

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    Well, it's dark outside. Night time is here, and so's this ditty all about it.

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    Dark Night

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    The darkness fades as morning comes
    dawn is peeking through the gloom
    soon the day will bluster in
    and force the dark night to become

    shadows

    hidden in the corners
    and behind the walls and doors
    where daylight tries to cower them
    and its laws now enforce

    but still where daylight fails to reach
    the night stays hidden there
    inside drawers and cupboards
    and underneath the stairs

    and anywhere that it can dwell
    until the day recedes
    then it returns both safe and well
    time is all it needs

    for night and darkness are the same
    although we give each its own name
    and when the day ends it reclaims
    its rightful place as king
    and rules till the new day begins

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    Tomorrow is Wodin's Day. I'll bet he's sore at Thor for following him every week since time immemorial! :)
     
  4. BJintheUK

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    My thoughts were drifting like a cloud across the sky, when I suddenly thought....

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    Drifters

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    Out of the cloud and into the sun
    away from the mist and out to the clear
    sliding through air can be so much fun
    and it's something that those who've done it hold dear

    the feel of the wind as it's breeched by the wing
    that cuts through the air with such grace
    the glint of the sunshine reflected on curving
    white surface into the cabin and onto the face
    of the pilot who's watching the sky all around
    as he moves through the air with such ease
    gliding along powered only by weight
    and lifted by thermals that spiral the breeze

    the sound of the air as it rushes on past
    the clear plastic canopy over his head
    tells him his speed whether slow or too fast
    and backed up by the speed gauge that's easily read

    and so he proceeds from his base to his goal
    which may be many hours away
    it all depends on where the wind blows
    and the clouds that provide him the way
    to stay in the air using rising air's heat
    as it spirals aloft to form clouds
    without them the lift will be sparse and quite weak
    and he'll have to come down to the ground

    so when the clouds form a street in the sky
    look for the gliders they could be close by
    circling beneath them as they rise and then fly
    on to the next one to climb
    once more to the cloudbase
    then out to the sunshine
    to make the next hop on the way
    what a wonderful method of passing the day

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    See you Thor's Day! :)
     
  5. Candy Gal

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    Brilliant BJ
     
  6. BJintheUK

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    I was just sitting here thinking (it's not something I do often you understand!) and I thought.....

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    Time to go

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    It's a long way down and even further back up
    when you finally reach the bottom
    at the end of your journey you want to give up
    and don't want to deal with the problem

    the problem of how to escape once more
    when you've served your time in purgatory
    and you're free to go
    but you don't know
    how to climb back to unsullied territory

    for the time you spend will come to an end
    and you'll want to float quickly away
    but you're so far gone
    you can't seem to go on
    not even for just one more day

    so you wait and you wait and procrastinate
    trying to decide what to do
    should you climb up
    or sneeze and then hiccough
    as the fumes begin to get through

    for the dirty grey atmosphere wasn't so bad
    when you had to be there all the time
    but now that you're free
    you can finally see
    the pollution is part of the crime

    the criminal state of paranoia and hate
    that you had to endure for so long
    it's what you were trapped in
    flesh wrapped in weak skin
    but it's not where you really belong

    for the end of your sentence is finally here
    you can fly out from your prison bars
    so discard all your things
    and just spread your wings
    then leap off this world to the stars

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    See you Frixxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxday!! :)
     
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  7. BJintheUK

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    I was reading about the stuff going on in Arizona today, where there's an audit of the Nov, Presidential elections. Apparently the local election officials chose to delete all the databases showing how people voted. Hmmm! Very suspicious. It inspired my latest mental ramblings below.

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    Democratic dreams

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    The vote is called the die is cast
    mistakes were made, but will not last
    all things must be accounted for
    and when they are and payment's passed
    why then the people will assume
    that all is done to bring about
    an equitable peace at last

    a peace that renders war as past
    and promises so much it seems
    that while we strive to climb the hill
    our opportunities reveal
    that though we had all hoped to seal
    the future now and old wounds heal

    our disappointment's not allowed
    to dampen our enthusiasm
    for gaining ground and filling chasms
    of knowledge which can overcome
    our fear of failure, it can't come
    to rule our lives the way it did
    before the ballot boxes lids
    were opened for us all to vote
    and put an end to what we hoped
    was greed, corruption, bribes and graft
    instead we hoped to bring about
    a better way for us to shout
    but will it work we'll never know
    it will take lifetimes till it shows

    meanwhile we hope and pray it may
    continue now along the way
    of peace and knowledge after all
    that help prevent another fall
    from grace into the arms of evil
    no, we wish the second Eve will
    eat the fruit but not then sin
    by letting Adam get within
    her virgin spirit now displayed
    for him to use for sudden gain
    and turn her innocence to pain
    as she discovers much too late
    the serpent wants her for a mate
    but holding in her arms she will
    ensure the serpent never kills
    the pure and tranquil life in Eden
    wherein we would wish to dwell
    and not this current Earthly Hell

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    See you all on Saturn's Day (or Scatterday!) :)
     
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  8. BJintheUK

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    There I was, stood in me garage, putting an engine together, when Boooooooom! Thunder and bloody lightning!! Where on earth did that come from? It was only the one clap though, thank goodness, but after that the rain came, and at times it rained so hard it was splashing in through the garage door and onto my feet! So I wrote this -->

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    Thunderainbow!

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    Rolling thunder, time to get under
    cover till it rolls on by
    the dark clouds gather, we're under the weather
    whether we like it or just want to cry
    it was going to be warm, you know the form
    sunshine and clouds and usually dry
    but then they came and it started to rain
    from an ever darkening sky
    so now we're stuck, just as lightning struck
    and the ground began to shake
    I looked around, but then I found
    a rainbow across from the lake
    reflected in ripples like water fed dimples
    that look like a water borne quake
    when the raindrops hit and the lake surface pits
    to a sound like a mad rattlesnake
    but the droplets of water by the rainbow are altered
    to droplets of cascading colour
    they fall in a torrent both hard yet transparent
    without them it would certainly be duller
    with just the dark clouds the sky is a shroud
    it covers all that we can see
    I hope it's just passing, and won't be too lasting
    or the day'll be a write off for me

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    See you tomorrow, and let's hope it's a bit drier than today. :)
     
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  9. Candy Gal

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    i AM stealing that poem for Rainbows bar. xxx
     
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  10. BJintheUK

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    Short one tonight. I thought I'd take a break.

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    Time for tea!

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    "Time for a break!" the old man said
    and slowly putting down his tools
    he took two steps back from his bench
    it was one of his unspoken rules

    to stand away from where his work was
    when he chose to rest a while
    then filling the kettle and putting it on
    the stove his grimace turned to a smile

    at that moment the kitchen door
    burst open and in strode his busy wife
    "Ee wants to know when it'll be ready!"
    she said as he stood sharpening a knife

    at this he gripped his chin and thought
    'Hmm I know, I'll have some fun'
    "Tell 'im it'll be ready Wednesday" he said
    "but don't you tell 'im exactly which one!"

    they stood and smirked at one another
    in the kitchen by the sink
    and as the kettle boiled away
    there was the sound of tea cups clinking

    time to savour, time to rest
    enjoy the flavour, it's the best
    a cup of tea when all is told
    there's nothing better to behold
    so take a break from all your woes
    put on the kettle, sit down here
    and when you hear the wistle blow
    it's time for tea, a drop of cheer

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    Mooooonday tomorrow, and back to work for some, but mustn't forget to have a break every now and then. :)
     
  11. Candy Gal

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    Wonderful as always BJ x
     
  12. BJintheUK

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    There I was working away in my shed, when all of a sudden there it was, gone! It had gone all dark outside. Where'd the day go I wondered?

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    Night and day

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    Where is the day now the night is here
    it's run away from the darkness
    there's nothing to see and little to hear
    when the sun's gone the world is just heartless

    all the movement and life has deserted us now
    all that's left is the overcast shadow
    the night has taken all that was out on show
    and left us with little to follow
    so we rest and relax and get some shut eye
    now the time for sleep has arrived
    we can drift away from it all in our dreams
    and tomorrow we'll wake more alive

    the two halves of the day are so different
    if it weren't for the lamps that we've made
    at night we'd do nothing but lay down to sleep
    but instead we can lengthen the day
    by staying up late, going out to see friends
    having a meal or a drink at the pub
    we can all carry on till our energy ends
    or go on through the night at a club

    yet when morning comes to visit once more
    we wake up as though from a trance
    have breakfast get dressed and then rush out the door
    with nary a back looking glance
    the day has returned and while the sun burns
    we're busy about all our business
    and though it feels right to enjoy the light
    working still makes us feel restless
    so we wait for the night, the absence of light
    that will signal the evening's begun
    we'll go our own way, no more work we'll just play
    till tomorrow's return of the sun

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    Tunes day tomorrow. That should be 'mus'ical. Let's hope we're a'mus'ed. :)
     
  13. Candy Gal

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    Wonderful as always BJ.
     
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  14. BJintheUK

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    Early one today, but then again, it's about morning, so it's appropriate.

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    Reflections of the morning

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    I looked across to see your face
    you looked angelic lying there
    in lingerie all edged with lace
    your long and lustrous wavy hair
    spread across the soft white pillow
    no other with you can compare
    your slender fingers like a willow
    resting on the duvet cover

    the subtle light of early morning
    comes through the window making play
    with shadows to cast shapes adorning
    walls like building out of clay
    a moving picture we can see
    if when we open bleary eyes
    we look up at the walls around us
    curiousity makes us rise
    to find the source of inspiration
    for these shadow puppets all
    that dance upon the surface of
    our brightly painted bedroom walls

    but now you're stirring as you wake
    I see you smile though still quite sleepy
    knowing that you need to slake
    your thirst you sit and drinking deeply
    empty your glass of sparkling water
    on the bedside table there
    then turning to me I see laughter
    in your eyes as you watch me stare
    and in return I smile at you as
    you poke out your tongue in jest
    and try to grab you by your arm
    but accidentally touch your breast
    you pout as though you've been offended
    but I see from your wicked grin
    that nothing further from the truth
    could be the thoughts that move within
    the pretty head upon your shoulders
    lovely shoulders as they be
    and wrap them up in my embrace
    as you in turn now embrace me

    and so another day begins for us
    two lovers lying here
    another day of peace and leisure
    experiencing both together
    hoping that these days will never
    end in tragedy or fear
    for life's a gift that we've been given
    to enjoy and share between
    the pair of us as long as we live
    then remember all that's been
    before and since we got together
    all those many years ago

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    See you on Widness day! No, they didn't name a day after a rugby team!! No, surely that should be Wodin's Day, but then why call it Wed nes day? Perhaps people got married on that day? Who knows! :)
     
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  15. Candy Gal

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    Always love your poems BJ XXXX
     
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  16. BJintheUK

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    Ran out of words this evening, so the ode's not very good.

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    Word Blind

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    Staring at the clean white page
    where to begin, what to write
    when to start, who to write about
    and why?

    surely there's a point to it all?
    an all consuming passion that rules
    all of us and when it hits it's cruel
    compliance is forced upon us
    it wheedles its way into our thoughts
    it separates out our weaker selves
    it takes control and makes us act
    I tell you this and that's a fact!

    so don't just sit there, write something!
    it doesn't need to be good, but
    it needs to be long
    no, not belong! but be looooong
    you know not short, not middling
    not mildly weak and piddling
    but long and strong, don't sit there fiddling
    get creating don't think I'm berating you
    I just want to get the juices flowing
    get those words aflowing
    and pretty soon you'll be knowing
    all there is to know, and all there is to show
    just let those babies go
    and watch as the wordcount grows

    and when all is said and done
    and all your inspiration's gone
    there's nothing left to act upon
    that's the time to put your laptop down
    turn it off and go to town
    do some shopping, walk around
    but get away from all headache making
    tension rising, bellyaching
    nervous tics and constant shaking
    fear of failure related mental breakdown

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    See you Turn's day, T'were's day, Thorn's day, or whatever you wish. :)
     
  17. Candy Gal

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    Thank you BJ.
    I am away for a week from tomorrow.
    Don't think I won't miss your poems. xxx
     
  18. BJintheUK

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    Didn't get to write my ode till very late tonight, so it's after midnight and I've only just finished it. Anyway, here it is.

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    The pub

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    In days of yore long years before history was wrote
    you could eat a meal
    and have a drink
    and all for less than a groat
    and a comely wench would serve your bench
    and all seated thereon in the pub
    with home brewed ale
    all fresh, not stale
    and lovely wholesome grub

    it's where it all happened, people lived
    when not at work or home
    or on the roads transporting loads
    t'was a welcome sight to behold
    at the end of a long hard working day
    it helped to lift the feet
    on tired legs
    that weighed like kegs
    of stones when all you want is sleep

    the roadside inn was the centre
    of evening life in the towns
    and certain pubs
    involving smuggled goods
    became of some renown
    in my home town of Bristol
    there is still one such place
    the Llandoger Trow on King Street
    that almost vanished without trace
    but thankfully it's been saved
    so future generations
    can visit there
    and stop to stare
    at the history of our nation

    built back in 1664
    it was said to have been
    the place where Daniel Dafoe met Selkirk
    and Robinson Crusoe was brought into being
    and furthermore to add to the old pub's fame
    it's believed the Spyglass pub in Treasure Island
    is also one and the same
    for the Trow was first owned by a sailor
    Captain Hawkins was his name
    he'd sailed a flat-bottomed trow across
    the Severn in his time
    it's thought he called the pub Llandoger
    from a village in South Wales
    called Llandogo, it's on the River Wye
    and could be from where he hailed

    we'll never know for certain but the name is sure unique
    it rolls quite nicely off the tongue
    although I guess it's hard for some
    but not for me I'm glad to say
    and though I've left Bristol I'm not far away
    just one hundred and twenty miles that's all
    it takes a couple of hours by car
    but back when the Trow was first built
    it would have taken longer by far
    around two days by mail coach
    or nearly a week on a wagon
    and every day along the way
    there were inns that sold
    their beer in flagons
    a welcome drink to settle the nerves
    and relax the aching bones
    of those who travelled far
    along the highways from their homes

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    I think it's unfinished, but I have to go to bed, got work in the morning. See you Frixxxxxxxxxxxxday! :)
     
  19. BJintheUK

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    Just a short one today. It's very late and I'm quite tired from working out in the bad weather.

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    Old dogs

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    The old black dog sniffs his way round
    the long standing haunts of his daily stroll
    the aromas all mixed some weak some strong
    tell him who else has been out and on patrol
    so he sniffs and shuffles and wags his old tail
    it's getting hard to see, so he uses other senses
    with arthritis now hurting his joints
    he knows in a fight he'd be defenceless

    but nowadays going out is becoming a chore
    and his owner isn't so youthful either
    it's not like it used to be all those years before
    when the two of them jogged out much further

    so now the two old men of their different species
    shuffle together along the old road
    who knows how much longer they'll relive past glories
    or when they'll be too old to carry the load

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    See you all on Saturn's Day! :)
     
  20. BJintheUK

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    Dunno about you, but I always get worried this time of year about bumping into a hungry bumble bee and getting him angry enough to sting me.

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    Selling bee

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    The name on the card read Mr Jones
    I wondered if his name was Tom
    it wasn't but never mind I suppose
    it was just a long shot that was wrong

    the man it turned out was a salesman
    not the singer I'd hoped it would be
    and he was looking to make a sale
    and he hoped his mark would be me

    well sorry to disappoint, but I don't
    want what he's selling you see
    I can't really imagine what I'd want
    with a six foot stuffed bumble bee

    it's okay as a toy for someone I s'pose
    but I don't need that kind of toy
    it's the sort of thing that gives nightmares
    especially if you're a little boy

    and when I was young as a boy I was stung
    by a bee and it left me with a phobia
    of yellow and black in stripes on the back
    of anything that flies, it's almost a mania

    so I'm careful in Spring to make sure I don't step
    on small yellow flowers in the garden
    who knows I might step on a bee so I creep
    around looking down, coz I haven't forgotten

    I might get over it all one fine day
    but I really don't think that I can
    so I'll just keep on looking every which way
    when I'm out it's my safety plan

    as to the bloke called Jones well it seems
    that he's not very good as a salesman
    he didn't manage to sell his huge scary bees
    and he failed to make any commission

    so he's gone on his way to the jobcentre
    to see what else he can find
    I wish him every success in his search
    as I don't want to see him wasting his time

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    Back tomorrow by popular demand. Back of the queue that is! :)
     

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