As I had some time on my hands this evening I thought I'd have a go at a sonnet. According to Stephen Fry in his book "The Ode Less Travelled" no-one can really call themselves a poet unless they've produced a sonnet or two. So in the slightly adapted immortal words of Fagin, "I've got to schtick a sonnet or two, ooh, I've got to schtick a sonnet or twooo!" However, apparently what I've written is a hybrid between a Petrarchan sonnet and a Shakespearean sonnet. It seems the Petrarchan sonnet has a rhyming scheme in the 'Octave' (first 8 lines) of ABBA-ABBA, then for the 'Sestet' (last 6 lines) of CDECDE. But mine has a rhyming scheme of ABBA-CDDC for the Octave, then EFEFGG for the Sestet. Which is closer to the Shakespearean form that rhymes as ABAB- CDCD for the Octave, and EFEFGG for the Sestet. So there! Take that oh non-believers out there, who thought I was nothing more than a Rhymin' Simon. See? I can produce the real stuff when I need to! .................................................... Got a sonnet under my bonnet! ------------------------------------------------------ Of all the lovely things that I could do and all the pleasing things I'd like to say I'd smile and say them to you anyway and I'd like to do them all in time with you the only place I really want to be and if you're here I truly must admit I know that my whole life would be complete if I could make you want to stay with me; the trouble is that you are never here you're many miles away from where I'm sitting and though I'm thinking of you now my dear for you in your four walls there's no beginning no start to our romance, our love affair instead I'll just sit here and shed a tear ------------------------------------------------------ So you see, I'm a poet, but I didn't know it, till just now that is.
It's getting late again, and I'm getting bum ache from sitting here at the PC and staring at these two screens. It's also getting harder and harder to think of things to write about, and today's ode is about that very subject. .................................... Poeting's hard ------------------------------------------------------ If I could only learn to find how poetry occurs perhaps I'd soon be rhyming like a poet but until then I guess for me it's totally absurd to think that I'll be good enough to show it so on I blunder smashing words like finely made bone china into such a vast and shapeless heap and though I try to write some odes and make them ever finer I don't think that they're good enough to keep Instead I'll read the book I've bought that tells how rhyming's done and hope I'll find some inspiration there coz right now all I'm getting is an aching back and bum and that's not much to write about and share another day draws to a close the clock keeps ticking onward I'm getting brain ache from all the hard graft of trying to find things to write, it should be quite straightforward but somehow all my rhymes just seem so daft I can't find out how to include such poetic words as "Heav'n" or other words that drop a vowel or two all I can think to rhyme with it is something like "North Devon" but that's a place I've almost never been to although I'm from the West myself I didn't travel much until I moved away from home that is so I was now a long way east of Mendip Hills and such and wasn't keen to go except on business I did once go to Exmoor though, where I had a job to do but that was over in three days or less and though I thought of touring I was really passing through so I never did get suitably impressed as soon as it was over I headed out back East back to my home and family just here and soon forgot the windswept hills as well if I am honest I gave them up for comfort and a beer but now I'm sat here wondering and feeling quite bereft of what to write to end this ode of mine except for me to say that there is simply nothing left for me to do but end it on a rhyme ------------------------------------------------------ See ya!
Well, I looked outside just now and there was a crescent moon hanging by invisible threads on its back high in the sky. So I thought I'd write about it. .................................... Crescent Moon ---------------------------------------------------- Oh, crescent moon so wild and free pray tell what can I make of thee? a silver line across the darkened sky curved like a horn, ballooned yet pointed what do we see, where can you be? you hide your essence in the shadow yet show your quarter long and narrow as though in picture's lines negated with body dark and shadow lit many a dream hangs by your light romantic trysts by pale moonlight yet hunters use you for their gain and bombers fly through war insane to find their targets to destroy does it make you weep to think that by your light so many've perished or that romantic lovers lie and make sweet love while you stand by look down and smile from up above with luminescence for to see the laughing sparkle in a lover's eye we feel blessed when in the dark you shine your silver light so stark yet from our enemies dark hides us while to our homes you gently guide us now to bed to dream some more so till tomorrow then, amore! ---------------------------------------------------- Saturday lie in tomorrow, so plenty of time to dream tonight!
Late again, but it's Saturday, so I'm allowed to stay up late. That's my excuse anyway. Meanwhile here's a poem that uses lots of rhymes throughout. ...................... Sound bites! ------------------------------------------------ Another day another way to know that I've created I sit and ponder then I wonder is that what I intended it takes a while for me to smile it's rather complicated but given time I'll find the rhyme that fits, it's what I needed the words are there, they're everywhere and yet I get frustrated and though I try I wonder why I feel that I've exceeded my brain's word count, I can't work out it seems to have receded until one day I guess I'll say I've finally conceded I've given up, brain shrivelled up I've failed in my mission I'd hoped to write an ode that might be full of wit and passion breakthrough to you and take you to a wondrous secret mansion where you could play your time away it soon might be the fashion though tough it might just be enough to change our disposition to entertain with no more pain what a pleasant proposition? ------------------------------------------------ Let's hope it's a bit warmer tomorrow. The sun was nice today, but the wind was cold. Brrrr!
Earlier today, as I'm doing the laundry and have to stay in to wait for it to finish. Anyway, here's a thought about what's on the other side of sunshine. ...................................... Sunrise, something dies ----------------------------------------------- The rising sun is a loaded gun as it sweeps across the land the bright white rays of the brand new day betray the small dark places where the prey has tried to hide away the hungry hunters seek them out starvation's what it's all about they need their fresh and tasty meat their morning hunger to defeat and keep them moving on their feet lithe and sleek and quick and fleet and so they catch the young at play that have no chance to run away instead these creatures come what may become the first course of the day and when they're done all blood wiped clean the hunters stalk what else they've seen that spurs their spit to drool from jaws and activates their twitching claws it's one of nature's inate laws that those who can will kill and eat the weakest while the strong compete to find the greatest of the pride the smallest will just run and hide for they won't fight if to decide the leader of the hunting tribe whose job it is help provide the members with their daily diet protein rich still on the bone a catch a day is what's required they hunt in teams not all alone for one on one may not be wise the hunter could be the one who dies and so instead a leader leads the others who do what is needed circling unsuspecting prey to make sure they can't get away and when the trap is fully set it's sprung and then the team expect the creature in the trap to try and race to freedom for their lives but if the trap's been set out well the victim soon will face their hell the hell of knowing what awaits when exhaustion soon dictates that speed alone won't set them free instead they'll be brought down and swiftly killed then eaten by the hunters who can then laze by still waters happy with their stomachs full grateful for the sunshine's haul ----------------------------------------------- Back to work tomorrow, for some. Not for me though, I've got too much to do to even think about work this week.
Today I thought I'd try to do what Stephen Fry did in his book. He did an acrostic, but made it spell out words both at the beginning and the end of each line. So I've done the same. ................................. Acrostic(h) in time ------------------------------------------------------------- Pat was a girl but she was no wimp ambitious she wanted to write a novella to some she was a sharp knife with withering wit a ruler of men like ancient andromeda chanting the rhythms that keep us in sync and all the time inside a wonderful aura killing the time that passes as we speak ethereal songs that flow throughout time The above was an acrostic that spelled out 'Patacake' at both ends of the lines ------------------------------------------------------------- Well, it's a bit short I know, but that's it for today. See you tomorrow.
Quiet day today after yesterday's exertions redoing the white lines up at our airfield. So today I just had a nice long shower, followed by a snooze in my chair. Then HORROR! We've got nothing for tea!! So after that it was all limbs to the pump to get something prepared for when they get home and wonder what there is to eat. .............................. Afternoon delight! -------------------------------------------------------- Where did the day go? Honestly! I sat in comfort in my chair there's no reason form me to hurry but suddenly the day's not there all those hours lost to time while I slept through the afternoon then suddenly it's late and I'm busy cooking, they'll be here soon the family that is, they'll soon be home to eat like a flock of famished gannets I'll have to get my skates on some if it's gonna be ready for their palates the smell of onions frying nicely while I cry, (I did the peeling!) green beans and carrots neatly diced all topped with spuds while the meat is sealing now quickly find the casserole to dump the whole concoction into set the oven on the dial control pop it in and let it cook through finally it's time to eat and I'm quite hungry too it appears how did that pile get on my plate? I'll just have to make it disappear so down it goes and now I'm thirsty time to put the kettle on cooking is such thirsty work it's brewing time, so what's now on the telly after dinner's finished we'll do the plates in an hour or two let's sit back and quietly digest all the food I've cooked for you -------------------------------------------------------- See you tomorrow, after I've done the shopping that is!
Early one today. It's lovely and sunny outside, but not very warm. Never mind. ....................................... The beginning of the end --------------------------------------------- Her kiss was as sweet as it ever had been but he knew deep down in his heart that although she was his forever queen it wouldn't be long till they'd part t'was her beautiful eyes that betrayed her her touch though still soft now displayed her wish to be broken away from his arms and by such a token she'd cause only harm to the loving that always had kept them both warm and safely entwined where they both felt quite calm it all seemed so false now the die had been cast for though it would take time it could never last till the play of emotions that kept them together would seem like a beast at the end of its tether that thrashed and contorted to try to break free from the drudge of relationship hell like the toll of an old iron bell that echoes around ancient halls as the faithful to worship it calls the clapper that swings for both birthing and marriage also rings out for the funeral carriage no respecter of persons is he from the belfry the ringers can see the land all around that is barren or sound and on which new shoots of life can be found for the circle of living, of loving and giving is always unbroken, but oh for lovers it's not always so the heat of the lust that we hope becomes trust but doesn't always guarantee that such is the way it will be and so just as time passes on the loving they've shared now has gone and soon to the memory will be consigned as they both look elsewhere for someone to rely on to fill in the emptiness that they both feel it seems such a shame that it's ended right now but their love's run its course till it faded and how it's gone not with a bang but like a faint shadow that goes when the sun becomes pale and shallow as clouds hide its brightness and dull down the day till the gentle breeze blows and they scurry away to leave us the blue and the sun's golden rays they don't cure the heartbreak but help us to see that the pain of rejection eventually will fade like a headache that's soothed by the sea and the constant reply of the waves that break on the shingles, though single they save their strength for returning into the great deep where the ocean will nurture their secrets and keep the motion of ages that stirs in our hearts the longing for love, as what keeps us apart is the fear that we'll lose by giving away our emotions to someone who may not repay the depth of devotion that we feel for them a bright shining light like a candlelit flame --------------------------------------------- See you tomorrow!
Earlyish today, but I still struggled to find summat to write about. So here's today's subject. ............................. Today's subject ------------------------------------------------- So what gorgeous pictures will I conjure up when I flex my fingers this morning will a new form of vision come bubbling up one that sparkles like a new idea forming or will I end up with flat open prose that leaves you all shouting out "boring!" that is the question I need to be able to answer in lines of pure diction you see as I sit here and think at the table to write them I must make decisions and decisions are the hardest of parts how should I make it sound real do I try for romance and write of the heart or do I write about food and my meals or perhaps nature, red in tooth and in claw that creates an image of cruelty but it's not my intention to make it so raw that you're shocked by the pain of reality no really I think that I should knuckle down and write about something mundane you know like friendship or mates or the like or the people who live down the lane those strange old people who wander around like ghosts in the morning and evening going to who knows where with no sound not even the sound of them breathing they never acknowledge me when they pass by I think they're on some other plane as they stare into space from their rheumy old eyes that see nothing they want or can gain from looking at me as I saunter along with eyes and ears all agog looking for subjects to write that belong in my poem a day catalogue ------------------------------------------------- See you Frixxxxxday. It's Shakespeare's birthday tomorrow. I wonder If I'll be bard from it?
It's St George's Day today, and the Bard's birthday, and Barbarah's birthday (an old girlfriend!). So I thought I'd have a rant about, well nothing really. Anyway, here it is. ..................................... Rant for the day --------------------------------------------------- It was late morning, around seven o'clock I walked into town to see what was what spotting the postman doing his rounds I asked if he had any letters he answered me 'Yes, I have letters for all but none for you that I can recall' then he looked in his bag just to check and make sure before shaking his head 'Sorry!' he said and walked off so I wandered on down to the coffee dispenser and ordered my normal morningtime brew and with latte in hand I looked at the papers then sat in the park and the headlines perused there was nothing of interest there on the sheets so I guess that no fights had occurred on the streets but for all that they know there might be some discreet comings and goings all throughout the night but away from the journalist's beady eyed sight so what happened and where would not come to light unless and of course the perps had recourse to tell him of what had gone down in the seedier parts of this dirty old town but for now we don't know coz it's all underground where the real and important stuff happens and the girls and their pimps don't feel challenged by hacks who go snooping for headlines and scoops that sell papers next day on the news stand by now it was getting near eight of the clock and so far I'd done nowt but drink coffee it was time to go home and sit myself down to write out some more lines of copy I wonder what stories I can make up to attract the curious reader? the one who will buy and not just walk by when they see the sensational leader on the paper I write for, the morning gazette you know the one, it's the cheapest one yet that has all of the news and stories galore of the seedier side with buckets of gore that indulge their all their fancies like never before and titillate those with a penchant for more of the same kind of rubbish picked up from the floor so that they can feel righteous and loudly deplore the way that this country is going it's the way that the water is flowing from the tap to the sewer to the old from the newer yet still they want stories so lewd of people who died in the nude like the late Ms Monroe, who everyone knows was the person Jack Kennedy was screwing but who cares it's all in the archives shining light on those people with dark lives who lived in the past and who's lives went so fast that we don't get an honest perspective instead we read only selective tales of the dirty the low and the flirty who are nearly all now on the wrong side of thirty yet still they want to feel young as though for them Spring has just sprung and the sap is still rising it's not really surprising they read all they can, they're desparate fans of the print that I put out surmising about motive and action it's just a distraction from their normal inaction and gives satisfaction in a kind of vicarious way both yesterday and today so they can while away their time till they pop they can never stop to read any real news at all but just eyeball and then be appalled at the dirt from the gutter it's not talk it's just mutter and we all know it's really just utter invention, the words only leave an impression of the truth when it's not, but it's certainly got something that pulls you all in like a whirlpool that sucks as it spins and rakes in the profits for hacks and street prophets who proselytise on the walls, yet tell you nothing at all of what really matters, they're all just mad hatters sitting at the tea party from Hell I'm sure if you read you can tell the slick from the wise, the one's whose own lives have been lived like the stories they sell I sometimes think they should all wear a bell and announce 'I'm unclean' as though they all smell and the stench that they leave might help you percieve they're not worth listening to, as they try to bamboozle you with stories like these of corruption and sleaze when all that we need in the papers we read is the truth as it is, with no spin and no fizz no opinion or take, no indignance that's fake just the unvarnished truth for a change it covers a very broad range and although we might first think it strange I'm sure we'd get used to it quickly we're not all so dim or so thick we can't think for ourselves or leave on the shelves the dross that would render us sickly --------------------------------------------------- See you tomorrow!
Another long one I'm afraid. I got carried away a bit, so you'll have to sit and get yourself comfortable before proceeding or you could end up with a back that's exceedingly sore, then you won't want to read anymore. ........................................ Thank you for the day(s) ------------------------------------------------- Well, the Bard had his day, and so did St George now it's the turn of everyone else to have theirs so who wants to go first and claim their day, hmm? it won't cost a thing though you might want to share if it's all too much bother to have your own day you could always just use someone else's and add on your name to the list, and I'd say it's a shoe in you'll soon on that basis be famous for all of a quarter of an hour or so Andy Warhol once told us though he was famous for quite a while more doing Campbell's soup prints on his canvas he nevertheless ended up being shot although I believe he recovered so perhaps being famous like him is just not all it's cracked up to be I've discovered instead perhaps one would prefer anonymity but really, would you, or not? I'm not sure I want to be famous per se but I don't want to quietly rot away in old age with no-one to know about all the things that I've done I don't like to show all my talents at once but perhaps some of them should be known as I'm sure some of yours should be too coz if I'm not to die completely unknown then I think we should decide on who is to get higher billing and who gets the lower you above me or me above you erm, and even an alternate cover would be to have both our names over everyone else like books on a shelf that don't really stack all that well but totter and lean but can still be seen and if we're both lucky might sell coz I'd like to be rich as I'm sure do we all but the famous bit could be a chore it's good to have money to go to the mall but you don't want your fans queueing out of the door you'd never get any of your shopping instead you'd have to stump up for someone else to get all your things but that doesn't allow any detours when a sudden quick glance could find that you fancy a trinket that shines with unusual lines a unique thing that could bring you some pleasure to hold in your hand and feel as you stand in front of the mirror to treasure yourself with the jewellery worn pride of place see the smile of ownership spread over your face to know that you own an item so rare that only you noticed it languishing there in the odd little corner shop tucked out of sight it's the one at the back two doors down on the right but then who am I to decide you should try it when you have your own sense of worth and only if you find a dearth of things that you want would you be confident to enter the shop and then buy it but all this is getting us nowhere when our day is not yesterday but today or tomorrow a day we can borrow to bestow on ourselves and lift us from sorrow so who needs a saint or a bard surely it can't be that hard to rhyme a few words it does seem absurd to give someone a day from just what you've heard of a play or two written in language so hard that you have to slow down and read it out loud to try to decipher what the playwright was proud to put onto paper, with him as creator and dreamscapes all acted with aplomb for the caper and comedy scenes that were written to cater for England's queen Bess and her tastes and when she was gone for her successor James who came down from Scotland to carry the flame of monarchy onwards and so it remains where now a second Elizabeth reigns or to canonise people who lived in the past for killing a dragon as legend would have it then build metal statues like it really happened when we know that for certain never once was a dragon in danger from George or his trusty great steed but pehaps in the country there was felt a great need for a hero of sorts who'd ride out on his horse and take a big chance with a shield and a lance to save all the countryside's inhabitants from the savage attentions of our own inventions a moral achievement that keeps us enthralled and a day's just a seventh of a week after all so perhaps we can spare them an hour or two remembered by us as individuals who gave us a gift, and a national lift and before it gets late let's all celebrate two legends of history though it's a mystery never mind Agatha will give us a clue to resolving the question, the question of who they both were, as even now it's uncertain if they really existed or were just invented to help our country succeed and were only fulfilling a need ------------------------------------------------- See you tomorrow!
Bit later tonight, but it's been busy here, trying to find our way around the piles of stuff we're sorting out before we can even think of selling. That's at least two years away, but till then we have to stay, so cleaning out the cupboards is the order of the day. Meanwhile, the subject, or should that be object, of tonight's poem is someone who's already moved on, and is now moving in, to his new abode. ................... Moving in ------------------------------------------------- "Let's fire up the boiler and let her rip!" and with that he turned the plastic dial then with his other hand he clicked the button to light the pilot flame the sound of whooshing quickly sounded as the flame of blue was neatly framed in the window of the burner cage where the pilot flame now faintly glowed in minutes we could hear the rush of water moving in the pipes and soon a ticking noise as well as warming water flowed to fill the stone cold radiators hanging and with the sound of them all banging from speeding warmth inside the lagging round the pipes though now it's sagging and on passing people's trousers snagging the radiators soon began to spread some warmth around the room "At last some heat!" he said with pride "Last night I thought I must've died! It was so cold here in this place I swear there were icicles on my face!" I thought it ridiculous but didn't say it to think he could have frozen solid but then I laughed to think such things I'm sure he must have thought me horrid never mind I'm sure he'll live and in fact I'm pretty sure he'll give his time and money to this old house now he's finally moving in amid all the creaking and banging din of loosened floorboards and central heating where these two old mates are meeting comrades in this fine old building keep together ever fielding the ravages of passing time to keep away the ice and rime and let the mice all run and scurry around in such a fearful hurry as though their lives depended on it but leaving behind a trail of shit and the faint but sickly smell of urine soaked for years in rotting boards from countless generations living behind the flaking skirting boards now assails his questing nose as warmth begins to settle in and brings the aroma far too close for comfort, and then looking grim "Yeuck!" he said, "What is that stench?" and looking round he eyed the walls to see from where the smell was coming into these dust laden halls but now as heat began to rise through all the wayward nooks and crannies the dust of ages flew aloft the hardened angles soon looked soft as grey white particles were flowing and piles of dirty snow were showing new perspectives to each vista like a medieval cloister arched and dark yet with light corners here and there with buttressed borders pale and withered in the light of another moonlit night so now he sneezed and started cursing with some tissues his sore eyes nursing "I can't help it if I'm allergic to this dust!" his spit ascerbic then sneezed till a nasal vessel burst and blood poured from his throbbing nostrils as tears streamed from his bloodshot pupils he said "I guess I bought a pup" I replied "No, and in time things will look up this place is bound to rise in value so just sit back, move in and then you'll soon appreciate the good side of it when you sell it for a profit!" "I guess you're right" he said at last and then together we both laughed and standing there both silver grey as moonlight chased the night away we both shook hands and started grinning the radiators all were winning the battle of the damp and rot and he realised just what he'd got ------------------------------------------------- See you Moonday! Oh, and it's a full moon tonight as well. Wooooh!!
I read the words 'River Song' somewhere, so decided to write a few words along those lines. .............................. Song of the river ------------------------------------------------------ The song of the river is quiet yet sweet as it gurgles among the willows that drag their long curving tendrils that sway where they meet with tips in the water like fingers that sag under overhung branches with long leaves of green to shade the quiet water from sun's brightest light and help it remain cool from dawn until night where the fishes can hide although in plain sight the small darting fish that inhabit the stream such as minnows and stickleback's bright silvered scales that flash as they move in the clear running water they live in close harmony tied to the place where they hatched from their spawning to join with their race these creatures and more bring life to the river a whole ecosystem that passes us by as we walk along grassy slopes under the shade of the willow and others that dapple the sunlight and sparkle the ripples that catch our attention as they constantly move in the warm summer breeze enjoying the song of the water that flows and rustles the leaves on the long willow boughs we watch as the kingfisher dives to retrieve small fish or large insects it's stalked from above to feed it's own young who huddle at rest at the end of a tunnel in a sandy walled nest dug out of the bank of the river where it bends to meander along and slowly pass through another wild-flower filled and sun-drenched meadow where fat Jersey cattle lay down in the grass in the midday sun's heat that beats down from above then driven by thirst they stroll down to the stream to drink the cool water and hide in the shade of the large weeping willow that grows by the banks of the stream as it trickles and sings in the reeds the song of the river that flows ever onward from its source in the higher ground down to the sea over rocks and small pebbles or sometimes just mud yet always in motion, it stirs our emotions it makes a connection although an abstraction it's another dimension that creates an impression a sense of occasion, of something that matters as sunlight and shade like the sounds that it scatters we hear and we see and we're sure that we know when we hear the soft song of the river that flows ------------------------------------------------------ See you tomorrow!
Bit of a struggle this evening. My back has been hurting so much I couldn't concentrate. I had to change the flooring in my trailer today, and although I took painkillers to keep the pain levels bearable, this evening my back hasn't let me rest at all. Anyway, enough about me, here's a dittie about a couple having a tiff. ............................................. Men can be so maddening! ----------------------------------------------------- "Oh, yeah, I remember that!" he said and turning with a smile he sniffed and coughed and nodded his head and shut up for a while she looked across to see his face to find out what he's thinking but the blank eyed stare he wore against the world just left her seething 'How can he do that?' she thought although she didn't say it "It's just not fair!" she muttered and in her mind replayed it the conversation they'd just had that really had upset her to think that he'd known all along he'd win her when he first met her even though at first she'd found him weird or a little odd at least and with his scruffy unkempt beard he looked a little like a beast a beast from prehistoric times you know the shaggy kind all hair and madly staring eyes who scratches his behind then belches loudly when he eats and bolts down all his food you really couldn't call him neat or tidy, he's just rude rude of manner, rude of speech he always gets just what he needs he really is a most annoying creature in every thought and every deed and then to go and top it all he smirked and acted silly he knew she wanted him to fall but he wasn't going quietly he'd stay his own man, always was she knew he always would be she might as well admit the truth relax and just be happy so now she finally resigned to going with the flow "You really drive me mad at times!" he smiled and said, "I know! But still you love me all the same and you know that it's true I may be just a bum at heart but I'll always love you!" at that she laughed and flung her arms around his neck and kissed him "Hey not so hard, you'll do me harm!" but she wasn't really listening instead the thoughts inside her head at last began to focus into a growing love that sheds all doubt as being pointless and so these lovers end their tiff with hugs and lots of kisses if they don't stop it won't be long till they're Mister and Missus ----------------------------------------------------- See you tomorrow!