Rhymes or Reason

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  1. Candy Gal

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    Sorry I missed a couple. I have caught up now and thank you. xxx
     
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    April First today, and did you know that's no joke? It really is April First! No kidding!! :)

    Anyway, here's today's ditty

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    Brass in pocket

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    The sound of metal chinks in cloth
    the change that inhabits the pocket
    shrapnel to pay for goods and what not
    from ice cream to even a locket

    depends on the cost of what's offered
    deciding which way is the best
    to dig out the card to hand over
    or count out some coins to invest

    the value of money's ever changing
    and the meaning changes apace
    the big coins of old are now gone
    and small ones have taken their place

    there are now moves afoot to discontinue
    the penny as tender that's legal
    but when you have need
    to spend one you'll see
    that a penny is still pretty vital

    so don't think that plastic's the way
    to purchase your stuff every day
    even though it's so easy
    some times it's so busy
    that cash is the best way to pay

    always try to keep coins in your pockets
    and a pound coin's the one that's so sound
    at the mart you'll be sorry
    if you can't get a trolley
    and you lug all your shopping around

    there is always the aspect of tax
    the tax man wants part of the action
    but if you've paid with cash
    from your own private stash
    then he won't know to feel the attraction

    of a private sale just between two
    an exchange of some kind they both feel
    is a trade that they both want to do
    that's a fair and appropriate deal

    so don't be so quick to ditch cash
    your plastic would burn in a flash
    but the coins in your pocket
    are solid don't mock it
    they'll always be there when banks crash

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    The second tomorrow, and there's no shame in coming second (said the actress to the Bishop!). Ooer Matron! :)
     
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    Brilliant as always. X
     
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  4. BJintheUK

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    Don't ask me where this came from, but the words below just fell out of my head this morning, and on to the page in front of me. Much to my horror!

    Anyway, don't get too upset by the ode, odious though it may be to some. It's only words after all.

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    The curse of the fall

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    Where is the peace and where is the war
    for here is the torture and there the mansion
    so speak and tell, clear the conscience
    unburden the breast and spare the soul
    of pain unbound as yet by moral deed
    and spread as though by heavy demon seed
    to seek out new and unfound virgin lands
    where in the darkness all the sky and sand
    are frozen in the everlasting spell
    of one who comes direct to you from Hell

    the one who enters all there is to be
    and tempts us all when we are feeling low
    and there demands of us that we
    worship the feet of him, the one who knows
    the ecstasy and agony of war
    who felt the warming glow of steady peace
    yet choosing war for his own pleasure
    takes it all and claims it for
    the everlasting beast

    the beast that is inside us one and all
    the beast that renders flesh from bone and blood
    the beast that survived the greatest fall
    the beast that still survived the deepest flood
    for he is mighty, evil though he be
    and ever questing for more to enslave
    and gain more power over thee
    and thus begin to fight with those entranced
    for though he is of nothing more than air
    he keeps us in his thrall and curse forever

    he tramps us down into the sodden loam
    to crawl and breed and grow his crop to harvest
    for he is not a light or beaming arc
    a sun to rise and thrust away the dark
    he is but of the darkness made himself
    to scuttle and insinuate his seed
    into our minds and there to oft partake
    of all our dreams and hopes of future self

    so now we know of whom we are the soil
    the teeming ground wherein the seeds are sown
    to germinate and fill the earth with ever growing life
    and give to him his tithe of living death
    for though we strive to be the best we can
    and fight to free us from the worst of sins
    inside us all the evil demon lurks
    and guides our actions when we least expect

    but though he fills our souls with fear and dread
    and though he fills the cemetaries with dead
    we struggle on beneath his spreading cloud
    and fight for all our freedoms
    to free us from the demons
    the hateful frightened demons in our heads

    the heads that often overrule our hearts
    and though we may sometimes be true to both
    when they're at odds we don't know which is true
    and which is prejudice
    it all comes down to this
    will love or hate decide the fates for you?

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    Well, I'm glad that's out of my head, even though if you read it, it's now in yours instead.

    Happy Easter everyone! :)
     
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  5. BJintheUK

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    After yesterday's rather heavy subject I thought I'd bring it back to something a little less depressing. So today's ode is about all the small things and the work they do.

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    The mighty minnow

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    The tiny minnow darts from growing reeds
    and quickly swims to where it wants to feed
    the underwater worm that's just below
    notices the water's broken flow
    and bites back down into the oozing mud
    escaping what is happening above
    within the stream of water as it wanders
    from hill down to the coast and there to squander
    its load of sediment that carries fresher nourishment
    to all the fish that live within the river delta

    meanwhile upon the meadow
    where the cows and sheep all graze
    and where the pigs will wallow
    in the warming summer haze
    the water they expend will slowly seep
    through the soil until it reaches
    the banks of streams and rivers
    and there it gently leaches
    into the mud below

    the mud where underwater worms
    will tunnel through the ground
    and as they do the water follows
    where they split the clay
    to break up all the solids
    and though some of it will stay
    some will rise into the current
    there to wash away
    and join the constant moving tide
    that ever flows abroad
    to join with ocean forces where the land meets with the sea
    to feed the shoals of smaller fishes
    who then feed the larger fish
    and following the tale
    they become food for passing whales
    eventually

    the fresh water that's now mixing with the salt
    will swirl around the rocky bed below
    and some will lift evaporated to form clouds above
    then rain on greening hills where the grass is growing still
    that feeds the grazing livestock who then fertilise the meadows
    through which all the trickling streams flow
    where the tiny minnows feed
    and even smaller swimmers breed
    that all do their tiny best
    to keep this world alive
    allowing us to thrive
    as though this hive of industry
    was created just for you and me
    but we don't seem to understand
    how important all this is

    but perhaps now those who know
    will explain the constant flow
    to our children as they grow
    and the cycle won't be broken
    but instead will always roll
    ever turning like the soil
    as though nothing ever changed in nature's kingdom
    and with good fortune nothing ever will

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    See you tomorrow. :)
     
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    wONDERFUL as always xxx
     
  7. BJintheUK

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    Struggled this evening to put a poem together as we've had a domestic crisis to deal with today. The sealant round the bath has been leaking, and this morning we noticed a puddle on the bathroom floor. So I spent most of the day on my knees under the bath, trying to find out where the water was coming from. Found out eventually, and now I'm stripping back all the sealant so that I can start again and reseal it. I can't really complain though, because it's about twenty years since I last did it, so we've had our money's worth out of those two or three tubes of bath sealant.

    Anyway, here's today's attempt at amateur poetry. With luck and many years of practice I might even make it to novice level.

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    The mighty pen

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    It's not an easy thing to do when rhyming is the thing
    it's much more difficult than said when trying to begin
    for even simple poems can be hard to get to start
    and though you try until you cry your ideas to impart
    you struggle with your muddled mind your thoughts to put in line
    it's hard to get your broken shards to mark the beat in time
    but try you must so put your trust into the great hereafter
    then dip your pen and scratch your chin your confidence to bolster
    and look the paper in the eye to let it know who's master
    then write a word, a starting word and soon you'll think much faster
    as inspiration takes a hold and soon the rhyming flows
    the dark ink shows and as it grows your muse you'll have to ask her
    to give you phrases that embrace a meaning for your missive
    it won't be long, and it's not wrong to hope it is exclusive
    for only you can write the thoughts that wander through your mind
    some are happy, some are sad, but never leave behind
    a fragment of a thought unwritten till it fades away
    but add it to the list of things that you've heard people say
    as they expound with subtle sound in quiet conversation
    their notions and emotions as they sit in cogitation
    so you should try to not deny their velvet voiced expressions
    that slowly fill your head until you're full of admiration
    for all the things they've said that helped to give you motivation
    to write your poem, now I'm going to give you confirmation
    that it's all done the time has come to put your weapon down
    the mighty pen has won again and now it's gone to ground
    but when you need to mount your steed to battle words once more
    that's when your pen will rise again and help your thoughts mature

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    I hope I have more time to spend tomorrow, as it feels rushed this evening. See you then. :)
     
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  8. BJintheUK

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    Bit tired today. I spent all afternoon trying to knock tiles off the bathroom wall. Whoever put them up must have used superglue and epoxy mixed with high strength concrete. The bloody things won't come off! It took hours of hard work and very aching arms to get most of them off, but there's still three and a bit tiles to smash off the concrete backing. So it's all to do tomorrow. Doh! Wish I'd never tried to get the bloody tiles off in the first place, but now we've started we have to finish, so I'll just have to carry on till they're all off.

    Anyway, here's something different.

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    Dreaming

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    Her long hair spreads across the pillow
    she breathes so quietly in her sleep
    as gentle breeze sways the willow boughs
    I see her eyelids flutter dreaming
    wondrous dreams of pure enchantment
    adventures in a hidden world
    that only she can find when day's end
    comes to take her to her bed

    At six years old the dreams are vivid
    all the shapes and colours there
    invite them all, the bold and timid
    to the party for to play
    until the dawn of a brand new day

    when through the curtains daylight peeps
    across the floor night's shadow creeps
    until at last it's gone and now
    it's time for breakfast, so hurry
    down to the kitchen and grab your bowl
    pour the milk till it's so full
    the morning flakes are in danger of spilling
    but once all eaten they're so filling

    then back you go to clean your teeth
    don your clothes and brush your hair
    and grab your bag then out the door
    it's off to school to learn some more

    more facts and figures to fill your head
    at playtime have a morning snack
    all this work is just so tiring
    never mind it'll soon be lunch
    then more new lessons to watch and learn
    lots of writing fingers aching
    pencil's getting blunt and messy
    never mind it's time for home

    soon homework's done and dinner's eaten
    time to play some little games
    then all too soon it's time for sleep
    so get undressed and try to keep
    the memories of what you did
    as under the duvet you now slide

    with head on pillow eyelids heavy
    soon those eyes are closed, you're ready
    now to dream and end your day
    and there to join your friends and play

    meanwhile on the pillow rests
    your long hair as you quietly breathe
    like gentle breeze sways the willow boughs
    your eyelids flutter as you dream
    adventures in your hidden world

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    See you tomorrow. :)
     
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    Wonderful as always Bj.xxxxx
     
  10. BJintheUK

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    Bit tired this evening. Been working in the bathroom again today to try and make it usable till we can get the whole thing redone properly. More expense! Never mind, it's about time we had the bathroom updated. I've forgotten when we last updated anything in there, and we've been living in the house for over thirty years. Anyway, here's the word.

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    The Word

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    First there was the word and the word was all there was
    it sat alone upon the page and wondered at its purpose
    so it spoke itself out loudly to gather some attention
    hoping to find another word that would add a new dimension

    for long long minutes the word spoke out but no-one did reply
    until just as the word gave up it suddenly heard a cry
    as more words came to join it an inexhaustible supply
    and soon there were so many words gathering nearby
    the word now wondered where they'd been when it had first appeared
    and worried that unless it spoke they would soon disappear

    so now it cleared its throat so that it could make a speech
    but then it had a problem, it ran into a glitch
    the word was just a single word, it couldn't act as more
    and though it wanted to explain it really wasn't sure
    for just one word cannot convey a complex thought or feeling
    as though it were a sentence or a story full of meaning

    and so it had to signal to the others on the line
    to form a proper sentence that would let the words combine
    into a longer story that might garner many readers
    stories of adventure or perhaps of horrid murders

    and all this from a single word that found itself alone
    and called for help from other words to form a cornerstone
    a cornerstone of knowledge imparted from the page
    to help us learn new meanings for our lives at every stage
    as they appear before our eyes in every written passage

    so when you see a single word with nothing else around
    remember that it won't be long before they will abound
    just take your time and wait awhile to watch the words come out
    and grow into a story, it's what the world's about

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    See you tomorrow! :)
     
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  11. BJintheUK

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    Not much to write about this evening, but I shot a few words onto the page to give you something to target in your reading list.

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    Collateral damage

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    The sound of thunder rolls away
    the flash like lightning shines
    the clap sends shockwaves rippling out
    by darkness now defined

    as from the barrel issues forth
    the ball of solid steel
    that flies as though it's drawn to North
    like a magnet given wheels

    the ball arcs high into the air
    it whistles as it flies
    for all those within range to hear
    until it falls to earth

    the sounds of battle rage around
    the howitzer's report
    the smoke that followed out the ball
    now keeps the gun obscured

    from those who'd fire back and seek
    to end the gunners' lives
    for firing on their comrades
    who have managed to survive
    so far among the killing and
    the dying all around
    yet now as cannon fodder stand
    to give their lives as ground

    and all because the men in charge
    want gains to show their bosses
    they really don't care what it costs
    they write off all the losses

    as though they were just numbers
    like bullets from a gun
    who only matter when it comes
    to totting up who's won

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    See you tomorrow. :)
     
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  12. BJintheUK

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    Just posted up a bunch of linked haiku's in the haiku thread. I'll post them here now as a taster for perhaps an extended version later.

    Haiku's

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    Outside it's raining
    yesterday it snowed so hard
    the ground is soaking

    the cold seems to be
    here to stay another week
    I don't like the cold

    perhaps with luck the
    weather gods will holiday
    somewhere else anon

    till then I'll stay in
    warm and cosy here within
    my old dressing gown

    and wait till the sun
    visits us once more by day
    to dry the wet ground

    at last the children
    can play out of doors and sing
    and I can relax

    so keep to the script
    don't hide in the crypt my friend
    but stay till the end

    the end is in sight
    this eternal night will end
    when Spring has arrived

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    See you later! :)
     
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    OK, so here's the extended version of the haikus.

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    Haiku to you!

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    Outside it's raining
    yesterday it snowed so hard
    the ground is soaking

    the cold seems to be
    here to stay another week
    I don't like the cold

    perhaps with luck the
    weather gods will holiday
    somewhere else anon

    till then I'll stay in
    warm and cosy here within
    my old dressing gown

    my back aches so much
    I need to keep warm and dry
    munching painkillers

    while still sitting here
    watching the weather outside
    drying as I watch

    I'll wait till the sun
    visits us once more each day
    to dry the wet ground

    at last the children
    can play out of doors and sing
    and I can relax

    so keep to the script
    don't hide in the crypt my friend
    but stay till the end

    the end of the tale
    the story of how things are
    so soon to be told

    the end is in sight
    this eternal night will end
    now Spring has arrived

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    That's it for now. Tomorrow then?? :)
     
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    BRILLIANT AS ALWAYS my lovely. xxx
     
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    Early one today. As it's sunny outside (but not for long according to the forecast!) I was inspired to write about a sunny day.

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    Decisions decisions

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    The morning sun shone through the curtains
    "It's a lovely day outside" he said
    then rolling from his bed he reached across
    and pulled the curtains far apart to let more sunlight in
    the warmth and brightness lifted up his heart

    "It does me good to see the sun" he muttered to himself
    then turned to wake his partner soundly sleeping
    she hid her face behind her hand to shield her hurting eyes
    then smiled at the new day now appearing

    so up they got and breakfasted and then the man declared
    "I think it's time we moved along my dear!"
    "Why?" she said, "What's wrong with this place?" nodding with her head
    and pointed through the door to what was near

    for they were next to a silver stream that bubbled as it ran
    through meadows lush with grass of vivid green
    "There's nothing wrong with here" he said as the scenery he scanned
    "but we've seen all there is that can be seen"

    "So where do you think we should go?" she asked him with a frown
    "We might have seen the sights, but that's not all,
    the people of the village are so friendly I have found,
    much more than any others I recall"

    "Yes I agree they are quite friendly, generous too it seems,
    I've found both work and comradeship, and that is what I mean,
    it soon would be a prison, with ever open doors,
    and us unable to go through for fear of what we'd lose"

    "It's true it would a prison make, a life long one at that,
    we'd leave it in a pine box come the day,
    so I agree you're right to say it's time that we moved on,
    let's gather up our things and be away"

    and so they hitched the horse and cleared the fire of its embers
    then packed away their precious pots and pans
    and soon were once more on the road and no-one now remembers
    the travellers in the gypsy caravan

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    Have a good one. It's Frixxxxxxxday don't forget, so that means lots of xxxxxx ing! :)
     
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    Not been well today. I couldn't sleep last night and got the shakes, so I had to get up and have a sandwich. After that I managed to sleep, until my right hip woke me up this morning. Ouch! So I've had to sleep half the day away, but with what's left I've spent a few minutes putting together today's ode.

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    Changes

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    "I'll rise to the occasion!" he said looking at the mountain
    but being only ten years old it wasn't such a boast
    however, over the next few years he shot up like a fountain
    puberty came and puberty went
    exams were passed and then at last
    to university he was sent

    and now he could really stretch himself to rise above his peers
    he studied hard to gain his grades and did so without fear
    of ever being beaten or gainsaid in his subjects
    until at last his finals passed
    his race was won and clear

    a bright career now beckoned for this first class man of letters
    he'd done his best to show the rest that he was blessed and better
    and interviews now followed from requests by this go-getter
    but here he found he hit a snag no-one wanted a trend setter

    his bold ideas were anathema to those whom he'd applied to
    they only needed clay from which to mold the candidate who
    fitted in with their ideas and then ticked all the boxes
    so bright as buttons geniuses weren't hunted down like foxes
    but instead were turned away to go and seek out other means
    to earn a crust and gain the trust
    of those who must employ them
    and just give orders to their teams

    so at last he found a niche, it wasn't what he wanted
    instead he had to knuckle down and not be the exhalted one
    but with a frown
    he kept his head down
    working like a beaver
    to build the dream as one of a team
    in time he became their leader

    and so he found his childhood boast had really come to pass
    he'd risen to the occasion and recognition followed on at last
    now he could hold his head up high
    when he saw how far he'd climbed for
    to reach the highest grade in whatever he'd applied for

    "I think I've risen far enough" he whispered to himself
    then slowly easing, quietly teasing
    his career he was silently freezing
    till in its place was an empty space
    he turned his face away with grace
    to seek another goal to chase and mountains to attempt
    for the saying really is true that; 'familiarity breeds contempt'

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    See you tomorrow. :)
     
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    Late one tonight, and not at all well thought out either. It's all I had time to do as I've got lots of other stuff going on right now.

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    The Adventure

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    I'm getting tired and need to sleep
    but never mind I'm sure it'll keep
    the story I was going to tell you
    that if you heard you might enjoy

    still, I'm sure you can wait till tomorrow
    there's no rush I'm sure that you'll agree
    the story's really not much of a tale
    it's just another adventure you see
    about a boy and a girl who meet
    and how they eventually become free

    free from oppression, free from anger
    free from depression and free to roam
    across the open plains and steppes
    to somewhere they can choose as home

    so join with me and hold my hand
    I'll show you how it all pans out
    as we go exploring through this land
    and I'll explain what it's all about

    there was a boy and he had a dream
    to meet a girl to call his own
    but though he searched he could never seem
    to find her, she remained unkown

    and so he went on his great journey
    searching every town and city
    talking to everyone he met
    hoping that he'd find the one
    the one he's meant for in his dreams
    but somehow though he went for miles
    he couldn't find her so it seemed

    instead all he found was heartache
    loneliness that filled his soul
    an emptiness a migraine headache
    a painfulness that took its toll

    but one day when all hope was gone
    he sadly sat and in despair
    then happened to look up and there
    she was the girl with eyes that shone

    she smiled and sat down next to him
    as though she'd known him all his life
    he looked agog and wondered then
    if she would one day be his wife

    so hand in hand and side by side
    they walked on out to seek their fate
    taking on the world together
    a new life to investigate

    but as it's late I won't continue
    I'm too tired to carry on
    perhaps I'll tell you more tomorrow
    if by then I haven't forgotten

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    See you. :)
     
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    I love them all Bj xxxx
     
  19. BJintheUK

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    Late(ish) one today. I had a busy day doing rebores on two tractors! Now I'm relaxing at last. AaaaHHH! I think I'm a god, laying back on my cloud and looking down at the world. Now there's a coincidence. My poem's all about gods too.

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    Gods

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    I want to be a god I do
    a sacred superman to you
    I'd sit up high and looking down
    I'd stare at you and wear a frown
    I'd make you all bow down and pray
    and if you don't I'll look away
    and then you'll all be really sorry
    and bring me presents on a lorry
    lots of stuff you'd offer me
    like well cooked meat and jars of honey
    hoping that I'd eat the meat
    and after that I'd have a sweet
    a piece of bread soaked in the honey
    a gift that's worth much more than money
    coz all the money that there is
    couldn't buy indulgencies
    if I get angry with you all
    I'll turn your faces to the wall
    and then I'd really tell you off
    and rant and rave until I cough
    but then I'll have some soothing honey
    my sore throat won't be so runny
    in fact I might just think it's funny
    and then I'd make the weather sunny
    so you all burn and go bright red
    and be all sore with aching heads
    and then I'll smile and laugh instead
    to see you all quite sick in bed
    you see I am a vengeful god
    in fact I'm a really nasty sod
    I like to give you lots of orders
    and make you stay within tight borders
    and sing to me most every day
    and worship me in every way
    until you die and then at last
    you've got away once you have passed

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    See you tomorrow, if it comes that is! :)
     
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    Tired today, and achy from the work I did yesterday, and the stuff I did this afternoon. Got more work tomorrow as well! I don't have time for this, I'm supposed to be retired, but I never get a day in edgeways where I'm not expected to be somewhere or do something for someone else. The main problem is I haven't had the time to do any shopping, and we'd run out of just about everything, bread, butter, milk, ham, eggs. You name it, we didn't have it. So today's poem is about just that, shopping.

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    Shopping

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    Ah shopping, now there's a thought
    if ever something made me fraught
    it's something learned not something taught
    and not a nasty bug I've caught

    some people shop to pass the time
    but me I'd rather have a coffee
    or do some writing that's sublime
    not waste my dreams on what to get me

    just to spend and spend again
    appears to be the modern way
    of showing that you never work
    but lunch and shop the hours away

    well that's okay if you don't care
    and chatter just to pass the hours
    but me I think it's just hot air
    that swirls round shopping mall towers

    passing gossip mouth to ear
    and on to someone else to spread
    the rumour mill still works my dear
    alive and kicking in your head

    and all the time the cash is flowing
    out of pocket into till
    until your basket's overflowing
    and you decide you've had your fill

    your fill of wasting hours and hours
    of time that you could use to make
    useful things for those around you
    or at least to bake a cake

    okay you needed fresh food items
    flour and eggs to make your mix
    but that's no reason to waste the day
    as into every shop you flit

    anyway it's getting late now
    the shops are shut it's time for bed
    so go and rest and get prostrate
    remember all the things I've said

    like keep your money till it's needed
    don't just fritter it away
    but store it in the piggy bank
    to use it on a rainy day

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    I hope it's not raining tomorrow. I don't want to have to spend all the money in my piggy bank. Boo Hoo! Oink Oink! :)
     
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