response delusions

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by tourmaline, May 23, 2004.

  1. tourmaline

    tourmaline Member

    march10th/2004

    your closed lips tear open a gaping cravesse
    they scald and burn in non-movement
    attachement won't give up
    no matter how hard i try
    theres nothing i can do

    now i've been thrashed with stationary sinewaves
    and my skin is sensitive to touch
    your ignorant of my toil
    you never even hear

    maybe you block your ears
    maybe theres a reason
    maybe i don't hear
    maybe its the season
    but i've been led this way
    by whatever force is present

    but you won't tell-
    and i'm just left on the street corner
    with nowhere to go
    nowhere to look
    -i just doubt myself
    and think i've been an idiot
    you just confirm it
    like i'm not fit to talk to

    WHY BLOCK ME OUT
    WHAT HAVE I DONE

    I"VE ONLY BEEN WHAT I AM
    DONE WHATS INSIDE

    UNFORTUNATELY I DON"T CHANGE AS FAST AS YOUR DECISION
    I CAN"T GIVE UP MY CARING
    I CAN"T PACK UP AND LEAVE
    AND SURVIVE ON THE ODD GREETING, AS SHALLOW AS YOU MAKE ME FEEL
    YOU DON"T SEE MY COLORS
    YOU DON"T EVEN GLANCE
     
  2. lovely piece
    so full of the path we have to walk when life
    falls apart around us.
    how our hearts and minds can become
    confussed by love or being loved

    i loved this line
    your ignorant of my toil
    you never even hear.

    all we need is to be heard and understood
    in any relationship.....

    this to me brought all the pain together
    how you were not allowed to share your
    feelings and thoughts with this person
    so empty it must have felt..

    love n peace from saff
    keep writing.
     
  3. sunflowerAlys

    sunflowerAlys Member

    maybe maybe maybe


    Deffinately! Deffinately! Deffinately!

    (oops i dotn think i can spell)

    ah well "wondering is more fun with two"
     

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