Remember when?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bruschetta, Jun 21, 2006.

  1. bruschetta

    bruschetta Member

    mm i like it very much:)

    great great word choice... yet not enough commas, semi colons, etc.... (to slow down the reader and thus enhance nostalgia) keep it up:)

    esp liked:
    "Innocents
    Caress
    Children"
    &
    "A tear hides behind an comforting laugh."
     

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