Ravage the Savage.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by twist1up4me, Jun 11, 2006.

  1. twist1up4me

    twist1up4me Member

    another nice one ~~~ you are indeed a talented writer....

    peace & love,
  2. steel_bubbles

    steel_bubbles Member

    You are a talented writer
  3. Bedlamite

    Bedlamite Member

    :H I also like this peice very much - it reminds me a bit of both myself and the love of my life...

    ...best I just leave it at that though. Thanx Jester
  4. Bedlamite

    Bedlamite Member

    I'm working on it Jester, and will PM you with the link as soon as its up.
  5. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    i fucking love it ...
  6. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    when you get me a ticket:D, like i have any money.. :rolleyes:
  7. zigzag_rabbit

    zigzag_rabbit Member

    excellent poem, i enjoyed the description and the buildup to the last line. you've got skill

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