Quatrain Quango

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stalk, Jun 20, 2006.

  1. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    i love other peoples' problems
    even feed on them
    ignoring my own
    wouldn't dare solve them
     
  2. Biida

    Biida Member

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    Amen
    Amen
    Amen
    Amen
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    glad you enjoy
    my problems ganja goo
    you must love
    reality tv

    ;)
     
  4. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    HAHA! Good one, Trippin.


    they've filmed it all (every bit)
    no-reality left to capture; not even a tit
    sunglasses, sunflower seeds,
    lawnchair: await the rapture
     
  5. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    since when
    my friend
    were those shows
    ever reality?

    (still, I like that. rapture in a lawn chair or sunflower seed. nice :H )
     
  6. Biida

    Biida Member

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    I lost my fancy footing on a patch of wide-eyed clover,
    While I went a-walking down a dusty, trailing road some blistering day,
    Said the clover, -- rather bitter, -- I'd do well best to better
    Pay attention to where ever I throw my dirty feet around!
     
  7. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    ^haha


    ancient wisdom sounds strange
    new ideas don't resonate
    common sense has lost its logic
    must confusion be my fate?
     
  8. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Vintage spirits age with flavor,

    fine crystalline decanters cradle,

    mindless the senses savor,

    a momentary waft... the wine of Now.
     
  9. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    here we stammer
    sayings caught
    toppling knowledge
    with what we thought
     
  10. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    I surrender-
    let all my molecules topple over on some grass
    where I get an upclose look at two lady bugs
    fucking on a green blade of glass

    lovely
    lovely
    lovely eyes i'll eat them
    I'll suck them from your mouth
     
  11. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    "a mass of gallon sloth
    as flies have walls for feet,
    a rapturous verbatim
    someone said but who's to know?"

    -the mars volta
     
  12. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    kicked in the ass by life
    this swill,
    this horrible cheap shit beer
    sends a bit of comfort

    *

    feeling low, on the deck
    thinking about all my problems
    while a robin hop hop hops up the length of my roof
    I have to laugh.
     
  13. Ganja_Goo_Ninja

    Ganja_Goo_Ninja the penis mightier

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    have i failed to mention
    infinity-times a bogus suspension
    i love you dearly
    but fear your intention
     
  14. Biida

    Biida Member

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    Look! A flying pig!
    Coasting far above the petty streets
    of dingy, littered dingo dens;
    those god damned dogs built their fortress from cement!
     
  15. Leesah

    Leesah Member

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    can you hear me back here
    or are you lost in the maze
    ill stutter my words
    to get you outta that daze
     
  16. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    They called Korea
    the forgotten war.
    But it isn't, because we had M*A*S*H
    Thanks, Alan Alda
     
  17. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    we found a blood-stained knife
    up in the attic
    dog tags
    from last year
     
  18. rastas edible

    rastas edible Member

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    i touched her cheek...
    the side of her smile...
    that place where i drove a nail
    and hung all of my ugly
     
  19. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    It took three hundred CC's
    of Muktuk to subdue
    the Glonk, I couldn't
    fucking believe it
     
  20. rastas edible

    rastas edible Member

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    "I couldn't
    fucking believe it"

    excellent line..
    so raw and owlish...
     

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