prowling panther pixie

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Dec 29, 2004.

  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

    I.
    can I capture you, interested
    at being here, on this line
    or this one?

    it’s critical you remain, rapt,
    to phonetic formation
    revealing romanticism,

    and not become distracted
    by clever breaks, syntax lapse,
    or subject adjustment.

    Focus.

    II.
    you can’t focus chromatic time.
    it streaks the picture capturing
    her bedroom hunger lunging
    out two viridian eyes.

    seriously… she's giggling
    just thinking about it,
    visualizing virtuosity…

    this prowling panther pixie.
    this sleek, little lotus blossom
    crawling closer, closing in,
    toned for athletic activity
    and smiling
    oh so fucking wickedly

    alright, alright…
    get ready get set go

    III.
    dynamite describes the passionate pant
    of sultry breath she shivers out, into my ear,
    that causes combined convulsions,
    and allows a fleeting foretaste
    of perfect, azure nirvana.

    I’ll linger in her lively spice awhile
    edge my fingers between peppered freckles
    marveling at the slick trail fashioned
    by those faint, almost invisible hairs.

    we’ve nixed reality, annulled our position,
    forgotten all but this recent, blooming event.
    there is no tomorrow beyond these pillows,
    it’s just her and I, entwined; content.
     
  2. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Damn, that was orgasmic fulmah! :eek:
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

    Exellent, very well written. You draw the reader into the astral plane.
     

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