pretty crazy imagery in this one

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Crystaleyez, May 14, 2004.

  1. Crystaleyez

    Crystaleyez Member

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    I love you guys. I'm planting trees waaaay up north now so I'm not in much. I liiked your song Cirhosis. I like to write songs to. :p Thanx for all the positive feed back from the rest.

    OK rythym hmmmm....Its a rap so it should have rythym

    Feel the sublime vibe
    open your mind to the world tribe
    as fact and fiction blend blend bleeding hearts mend
    minds bend
    but seldom breeeaaak
    just give your head a shake
    tell me your story
    I can feel your pain from here
    I'm always here to lend an ear
    my shoulders soaked with tears
    soooo
    conquer your fears
    push out your pain'
    ghost mistakes forever slain
    when life starts to get you down
    you gotta learn to get down
    smile and laugh and dance and sing
    theres bliss in everything
    joy can find you anyplace anytime
    its all about your state of mind
     

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