i like them alot the untitled one is really good #15 and the last one you did the whole thing i really like it
No no no, you misunderstood what I said. I understood why you used the periods, and I think that was clever and creative. It was just hard on the eyes, is all. Just giving you a pro and con And yes, I think it was a good idea to retype it the same, it wouldn't have been the same material without it, and wouldn't have made sense without the periods. It was a bit hard for me to follow, but I really liked the almost "innocent" creativity in it, using the periods for the space bar. It was almost kid-friendly that way. It was like a drawing, but words instead of pictures, does that make any sense?? I wasn't saying I didn't like it... and I read through the poem well enough to understand why you used periods :sunglasse