poem from year two

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by thepixies, May 8, 2004.

  1. thepixies

    thepixies Member

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    i wrote this when i was eight and it makes me feel happy:

    beetles beetles hard and black
    beetles legs go clickety clack
    beetles with shells on their back
    beetle please dont go on the train track


    ive just been looking through my old school books you see
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    beetles are crunchy.
     
  3. A Clockwork Orange*

    A Clockwork Orange* Member

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    good peom about my favourite band
     

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