Poem called "Steps"

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by DrewSpeaksTrue, Oct 16, 2013.

  1. DrewSpeaksTrue

    DrewSpeaksTrue Member

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    As I sit here in my chair
    Time seems almost still
    I've been here so long
    but I feel so weary, like I'm growing old
    I do not move, not one bit
    I imagine roots growing from my feet
    Tearing through my shoes
    Cracking though hard tile
    Coursing through cold soil
    far beyond buried treasures lost.
    If a mirror could reveal the soul
    I wonder if my hair would be grey or white
    would I see wrinkles around my eyes or blue veins in my hands
    20 years have passed, like grains of desert sand
    Carried by the winds
    Thrown to the celestial sky
    How old am I again?
    I remember now, I'm quite young
    with far to go, with my long path to tread
    Not knowing what loves will blossom
    Ignorant of heartbreaks ahead
    Unaware of summers ephemeral pleasures
    Winters scars
    Letters saved, or burned, or lost
    Or warm words carried in the heart
    Like the bread of life to let the spirit live
    Old memories of a fading kiss
    Hidden in the deepest shadows of the mind, to be treated like a sacred relic
    Yes, I'm young - Naive of what lay ahead
    Excited in my inexperience
    But a little worn from travelling this far
    tired of goodbyes, fleeting friends and passing cities
    I dont know if any of them remember me or if I left my mark
    Maybe its better to not look behind
    Out of fear I'll turn into a pillar of salt
    I will look ahead and carry on
    Travelling until this road is done
    And finally when I reach the end
    Maybe, just, maybe then
    I might trace back those old steps again
    :sunny:
     
  2. usedtobehoney

    usedtobehoney Senior Member

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    You got a strong start here.
     
  3. Indy Hippy

    Indy Hippy Zen & Bearded

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    Pretty beautiful man. I love the word usage, evokes colors in my mind and I'm not even in one of my vibes.
     

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