P.L.V.'s Death

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chica17, Jan 22, 2005.

  1. chica17

    chica17 Guest

    Flowing tears.
    Greatest fears.

    Worst pain.
    No sanity gained.

    So hurtful.
    His place so wonderful.

    In God's realm now.
    Or maybe turned into a meow-meow?

    Cry like the rain.
    Was I ever really sane?

    Love you always.
    Miss you for many days.

    In loving memory,
    I will always miss you, see?
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

    i'm not sure if i get it yet...



    *reads again*

    the simplistic way you wrote this is cool coz it leaves it open for anyones individual interpretation. could be someone dead or just missing/lost perhaps. the 'meow-meow' bit kinda hints hidden pain and regression into self... reincarnation? *hugs* good writing.
     
  3. imaflake

    imaflake Member

    Hmmm... I don't really understand it. I like the way it wasn't overly wordy though. Keep up the good work
     

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