And I once knew him... Oh, how I knew him tangled up in my heart With those dirty eyes and dirty lips I slipped into his bedroom In the hours of night I let him inside me At the first hint of light all we knew was lost My thoughts on love... redefined... For him... I'd be a poor mans wife And he once forgot me...
~* Nice one! Enjoyed this thanks so much. Fav Lines.*~ At the first hint of light all we knew was lost
lovely, lovely, awesome. great images, great lines... "I'll be a poor man's wife." I've felt that way, thank you for putting it into words.
This was top class, I...wow. Can I get back to you on this one? Also, in your signature, you have 'barefootanddancingdreamer'. Is that your old name/ persona? If so, do you remember me? Hope to embrace you! Firebell (the one of long ago...)
Yep, it's me! I sure do remember you Firebelle. You were my favourite poet! Plus, we share the same name. Kim, you already knew I was an idgit!! I love you. Thanks for all the comments. I appreciate them.
I been having a continual stream of fluffy brain moments too evidently. How the hell did I miss barefootdancingdreamer..right under the post, lmao~! I think we oughta have a spring break gathering here at the house btw!! bhaskar would be on school break...get you and cloudie...and try to drag a few others like stellablue, or at least her other half, ect! have a tent city in the yard, and the shed is all cleaned out too. Open house!
That sounds great! I don't know about getting Stellablue to come, but we can sure try! Let me know when you plan on it and whatnot. I'll be there!
Yay you do remember me! Hannah, twin names twin souls! Aww and I was never your favourite poet, you silly! I wish I could have written a poem like the one in this post...my poetry is just a load of fluff really. Love you lots XxX
Yes. Everything, before right now, was fake, and eveyrthing, after now, is oh so real[snake-like trailers in voicesssses]. Except when now becomes fake. hehehe.
Now your poem was real.... Now is just defining my own space in time so I can say, hey, now I know your for real.... LoL Now I am having known nothing before I knew that.Each moment created anew. The potential of absolutely everything we could do.
Since you asked and I am now thinking interested... My thoughts on love... redefined... For him... I'd be a poor mans wife And he once forgot me... So I remember, now, what hit me, is that $$$ is not-reality. Perhaps, when we begin to love, for real now, we lose value, but gain creative power. I have no value or $$$ Now I am creative.... So I am moved... now to the stars again LoL
I don't think we lose value when we begin to love. I think thats when we gain value. We are at our best point when we are in love. For real. One thing I have come to realize though, I do not write when I am in a relationship. Werid huh?
