....on a dark starry night I started breathing you... desiring you.... longing for a little caress of you... on a dark starry night my heart slipped downhill no breakes for an aid on a dark starry night celestial angels begun to sing the most precious melody of Love.. on a dark starry night my dreams came to Earth and me to Heaven I'm Italian and of course my english is really poor for poetry... and I also feel many discrepancies in rhythm and metric of this poem... but it's just was I am feeling right now for a wonderful angel from moscow I felt in Love at first sight... and I want to remember the night we met in this way... Kisses to all the Loving Souls!!!!
I think you did a fine job capturing the moment. The last stanza was my favorite. I love that feeling
gotta love how people start off their stories in like an action word. On a dark scary night See it gets you to read more.
thx friends.... the lovely person whom this poem is dedicates appreciated it as well... defining it "fascinating song of our souls" eehh... LOVE is so amazing....