ode to you

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by steffan, May 25, 2006.

  1. steffan

    steffan puffin

    what game do i play now?
    lonlyness and bordom
    what path do i walk
    alone in the dark

    do you see me
    miles from here
    can you feel me
    comming in clear?

    not a fool
    fumbling mad man
    not a tool
    tell ME who i am
    !

    do you see my face
    think that is me
    or can you trace
    path of the free

     
  2. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

    good meter and rhythm. nice and concise... enjoyed very much!
     
  3. steffan

    steffan puffin

    huh, thanks, i was about to delete this too, a drunk ass top of my head poem yaknow, but i think i'll leave it now
     
  4. lady_dreamcatcher

    lady_dreamcatcher Local Cannibal

    ha! i've actually found that some of my best stuff was produced while i was either drunk, high, or both. lol *shrug* no worries, mate.
     

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