none of it made a difference

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by dreamergirl, Jan 16, 2005.

  1. dreamergirl

    dreamergirl Member

    Once twice and again the world closes in
    Beautiful people fight for their lives loosing more than their share
    Shame and pride rot their ambitions
    Filth covers the lovers eyes and all is black and red
    Animals curl in corners of weary trust
    Betrayal hits those who obey the hardest
    Cluttered laziness deminishes the importance of their intellegence
    Anxioty rages through their veins while they intoxicate their minds
    External pleasure is placed above internal happiness
    And in the end they find out none of it made a difference
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

    Like your ending line! Reminds me of Cohen and that awesome closing: Something forgets us/ Perfectly.
  3. dreamergirl

    dreamergirl Member

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