my thanks

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Auriga, Jan 27, 2005.

  1. Auriga

    Auriga Member

    My Thanks

    I owe thanks to many people for all that they've done for me.
    My heart is just as grateful as any heart can be.
    But a mortal heart is much too small to fully comprehend
    the magnitude of thankfulness due to a trusted friend.
    And while I mean sincerely every word and line and phrase
    that I write at this moment filled with thankfulness and praise,
    the right words seem to hide,
    and I'm helpless to say what I feel inside.
    For little words and phrases seem less than nothingness
    to describe my thoughts and to express my thankfulness.
    I cannot help but wonder if this is another indication,
    one more shred of evidence to the truth of the situation.
    A sign that nothing we can say is ever really complete,
    for even when we try there is only defeat.
    And again I fall to explain these unknown thoughts of mine
    so I must reach to someone Divine,
    Because true communication is reached through God alone.
    for by Him all the thoughts we can't express are understood and made known.
    And He knows the thoughts words could never create,
    and so at this present time may the Lord communicate
    This message of gratitude and thankfulness
    and may He bless you with joy and happiness.
    And may the many, many things that I cannot say
    become a living truth to you this day.

  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

    lots of rhyming couplets. and courier new font. wowser, got to the end of the poem. lifting it up to God. He rocks doesn't He? :D woop. beautiful and sensitive poem man.
  3. Auriga

    Auriga Member


    You're wayyy tooo kind but thank you very much.:)


    PS I love your pics.:) That dress looks great on you...

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