If you're looking for some constructive critisism: Some of your stuff is a tad too cliche; avoid ying-yangs and the likes and stick with your abstract exploration of flowing lines, you defineatly have a unique talent to develop!!! I understand all you're work is very personal, but from the perspective of the observer when I see these 2 pieces I say to myself "this is the message, this this is what he has to share". In my mind the mark of a great artists is the ability to offer something that nobody else can.