My Poem!!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ekoostikhookahchick, May 19, 2004.

  1. ekoostikhookahchick

    ekoostikhookahchick Member

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    Mysterious Adventure
    Wide departure of sparkling skies shades of brown
    four by four rounding up the left wood
    blazing barrels of ash floating into the brown
    tired tents sensing the surrounding silence of mother earth
    blossom bits of bright magnolia canop underfoot
    hair blowing steady favoring forward the giant lanky trees
    creatures stirring by the rocky rafts of cool sand water
    rotating waves bring back the days of when it was similar
    never recklessly resting the earth has yet to slumber
    days to days its back questioning what trip will come again
    Opinions anyone!??!=)
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    wow this took me on a path of
    longing finding and also being at one
    with all you write of life.
    to breathe deep and see all.....

    i wonder what the day will bring for you in the morning.

    love n peace from saff

    thank you for posting.
  3. Fractual_

    Fractual_ cosmos factory

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  4. Jess

    Jess Member

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    I no ive fucked things up i was in the wrong but u not speaking 2 me is punishment going on way 2 long,u have no idea how bad i feel i want 2 make things right,this is hurting me everyday and every f**ken night!Ive been told 2 let it go,let it pass by but i no its pathetic,all i want 2 do is cry!Cry 4 the friend ive lost,the mistake ive made, im so sorry baby please dont hate!

    I love u Seth,always
  5. squawkers7

    squawkers7 radical rebel

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