My Poem!!

Mysterious Adventure​

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Wide departure of sparkling skies shades of brown​

four by four rounding up the left wood​

blazing barrels of ash floating into the brown​

tired tents sensing the surrounding silence of mother earth​

blossom bits of bright magnolia canop underfoot​

hair blowing steady favoring forward the giant lanky trees​

creatures stirring by the rocky rafts of cool sand water​

rotating waves bring back the days of when it was similar​

never recklessly resting the earth has yet to slumber​

days to days its back questioning what trip will come again​

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Opinions anyone!??!=)​

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wow this took me on a path of
longing finding and also being at one
with all you write of life.
to breathe deep and see all.....

i wonder what the day will bring for you in the morning.

love n peace from saff

thank you for posting.

 

nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

I no ive fucked things up i was in the wrong but u not speaking 2 me is punishment going on way 2 long,u have no idea how bad i feel i want 2 make things right,this is hurting me everyday and every f**ken night!Ive been told 2 let it go,let it pass by but i no its pathetic,all i want 2 do is cry!Cry 4 the friend ive lost,the mistake ive made, im so sorry baby please dont hate!

I love u Seth,always

 

If you like poetry then I have 3 poems on another site www.poemranker.com