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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Jun 28, 2006.

  1. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    the cost of seeing you is too high
    but yet I keep paying for the ride
    tickets seem to be running low
    do you even care?
    the ride is too hectic and crazy
    With many highs and lows
    and wild barrelling turns
    do you even care?
    i want to keep riding with you
    i love you very much
    enough to ride this roller coaster
    do you even care?

    just a thought about a recent situation... does anyone have any thoughts of their own about this? Input would be much appreciated

    peace and love
     
  2. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    An ode to you

    one day we were walking together
    another moment you were gone
    although it hurt for a while
    i learned it was best for us
    we are going to be stronger
    our relationship will be stable
    always remember, i love you
    for or inspite of your faults
    and mine together we are crazy
    but that's how we work until
    now because we will be stable soon
    gneiss is what our relationship will be

    just another... any thoughts?
     
  3. i like the "always remember.." part. do you write of someone in particular?
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Yeah, they're about my bf. he inspires a lot of my poetry.

    peace and love
     
  5. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    What becomes of a shattered heart?
    Where do the pieces fall?
    What happens to that broken heart?
    Will it mend after time
    Or will it fester and boil?
    Even if it heals, it will never be the same
    There will always be a part missing.

    peace and love
     
  6. CrucifiedDreams

    CrucifiedDreams Members

    I like the last one the most :) Good suff, sorry things are not so good for you.
     
  7. indian~summer

    indian~summer yo ho & a bottle of yum

    i like the first one the best i think, i love the feel of the rhythm in it, but the other too are really good as well :)
     
  8. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Here's a new one

    Hold

    i call you up
    and get put on hold
    by you
    this isn't the first
    it isn't the last
    time this will
    happen to me
    why am i putting up with
    being on hold
    with you

    thanks for the comments. i appreciate them a lot!

    peace and love
     
  9. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    To my beautiful muse
    who makes me feel
    i love you so much
    you dont even know
    and i hope you care
    because if you dont
    then my life is a lie
    that i have lived before
     
  10. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    the love we have is strong
    but is love enough?
    is there something more
    i hate to draw upon
    someone else's words
    but the phrase
    bipolar opposites attract
    fit more than you
    could ever think
    or know

    we love so much
    maybe too much
    passion isn't lacking
    but patience is
    with each other
    and our faults
    one day this shit
    will be far behind

    peace and love
     
  11. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    I find that I write a lot of poetry inspired by whatever is going on around me. As you can see, I have had a conflict with my bf and expanded upon that pain. Now that we are better, I look for other areas in my life, such as geology class, and write poems about that.

    How do you guys get inspired to write?

    peace and love
     
  12. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    My question is still open to responses....

    Here's another

    Can you see the light?

    lost in this space
    in this place
    wandering alone
    the only one w/ a clue
    so many far away
    completely blind
    can i help
    or should i?
    i dont have the
    answers either
    but i can
    see the light
     
  13. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Life

    sometimes i feel so alone
    so lost, so scared
    feelings trace to
    my childhood
    no trust, no love
    allowed for me
    should i be mad
    or should i be glad?
    you made me
    the person i am
    today
     
  14. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    My newest

    you make me feel
    unlike anyone
    the only one
    did you care
    or did you lie
    what was going
    through your head
    not much
    from what i hear
    good bye for good
    bad news for now
     
  15. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    I love you, I hate you
    better off as friends with benefits
    but what if I need more?

    No answers here
    Only more questions
    What is best for me?

    I need you, I don't
    What is going on?
    Feelings so strong

    Overpower my brain
    I love you, I hate you
    What can I say?
     
  16. dietcoketree

    dietcoketree Member

    i kind of feel like we are going through the same thing.

    i had a boyfriend that i feel very much in love with (my first love), but it was doomed from the beginning because we had an age difference, and no one approved. that identifies with your first poem. we recently broke up and things have never been harder for me to just get over all i wish that could have been.

    message me if youd like.
     
  17. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Loving life, living life
    hanging around
    opening myself up

    to all the possibilities
    but no one to answer to
    and no one to hold me

    seems like a fair trade off
    freedom for security
    security for freedom

    opening my mind
    my life to the world
    what it has to teach me
     
  18. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Writing in emotions
    Just hanging around
    Daydreaming away
    Playing with words
    And on words
    Changing meanings
    Making new starts
    Ending old ones
    Tying loose ends
     
  19. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    walking with you
    always two feet ahead
    should have known back then

    this shit isn't goin' to fly
    we may love each other
    but you hurt me to bad

    pain will always be a factor
    but enough is enough
    too many negatives

    while too few positives
    with you I am not alone
    maybe its time to be
     
  20. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

    Some things gotta change
    don't know if I'ld be better
    with or without you

    I love you but sometimes
    you treat me like shit
    it's the end of that

    What can I do
    what can I say
    When you won't change

    your hurtful ways
    maybe it's time I
    change my ways...
     

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