My Feeble Attempt at Writing

Sorry I missed the last coupla postings...I've had a wierd and fockered few months. I liked it, the second stanza is my fav. The word now twice in the first is a bit redundant, maybe always and forever or some such instead. Still not keen on the last stanza but thats because I'm never fond of the biblical tones in poetry. Glad to see yah posting, it would be a shame to have yah stop, Love&Light~*