My Druggy

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Smiling_Rose, Jan 29, 2005.

  1. Smiling_Rose

    Smiling_Rose Member

    Your eyes are yellow,
    Your teeth are brown.
    But your smile is golden and
    Even when you frown,
    I see you glowing,
    From your grey shrivelled skin,
    And I know your still there,
    Smiling from within.


    So I love you, druggy,
    I respect your fuming ways.
    You’re head is through of knowledge,
    Dad,
    I trust you’ll be ok?
     
  2. Burbot

    Burbot Dig my burdei

    haha, i found this quite amusing...
     
  3. imaflake

    imaflake Member

    Is it supposed to be sad or funny? I could recognize to some that it would be sad, but it kinda made me chuckle. You made the old guy seem loveable
     
  4. Smiling_Rose

    Smiling_Rose Member

    well actually i wrote it to be sad, but since you said that it's made me laugh, so either way! i guess it's just like life- you think somethings the end of the world, then the next day you can see the funny side. thanks for the comments:)
     
  5. Moonjava

    Moonjava Senior Member

    i actually read this and thought it was sad. :( Didn't see the humor until the others pointed it out. :)
     

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