Moonglow's Poetry

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  1. Moonglow181

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    Will share some of my older poems here....that I have written quite a few years ago...not any current poetry here.....geez, I was a child when I wrote this one....

    The die is cast
    The sun is yellow
    and very mellow....very mellow...very mellow...
    Life is good
    It can always evolve
    even in a crooked resolve
    for look at that crack in the sidewalk
    a plant grows....
    or is it a weed?
    No difference, my friend, it is still from a seed

    and life strives forth no matter what creed
    the whole is always the sum of its parts
    every conscience born is rooted somewhere
    and every unconscience, too
    Lest not forget the the simpler organisms
    which just live for the sake of life itself
    it is man alone, as far as we know, who strives to organize
    reasons for his existence into some design of guided logic
    For it is man alone who ponders his own existence
    although, we are not too sure what dolphins do
    or whales....
    or anything else....
    It seems they just live
    in total acceptance of their flight and fight
    their fight and flight of life
    a song....a dance....

    If you will, a celebration....
    Not a deliberation....

    Do sharks think of themselves as devils?
    I think not....
    Although, at times, they kill brutally.

    Isn't there comfort in truth, my friend?
    Doesn't it set you free?
    Or are you too removed from your natural world
    to fathom the powers that be?
    This provides no excuse, either, my friend
    For sharks are guided by instincts alone


    Man's power of reason gives him an edge
    an edge that can be softened, blunted and subdued to life's calm
    It's the safety valve....mother nature herself

    For man is the only species that can obliterate all of life as we know it
    Yes, man can be a very self-destructive, war-like creature


    yes, show me your teeth! Your gums!
    The taste of blood sure seems good!
    Drag her to your lair! Tear her apart!
    Unravel her cord! Destroy her to no end!
    until there is nothing left! ....nothing left....
    Because it is the time for your sacrificial lamb
    but who are you sacrificing her to?
    Isn't it the taste of blood you like?

    be honest now....
    the very nature of our barbaric souls
    Take comfort in knowing....
    humankind CAN evolve....if it desires to....
    into something where the taste of blood is repulsive
    and photosynthesis can begin to take place
    and indeed, we can master
    the light of our own existence....
     
  2. AceK

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    Nice poem moonglow!
     
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  3. Moonglow181

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    thanks, Ace...:)
     
  4. Moonglow181

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    Here is a poem I wrote as a teenager.....being kind of funny with it, and letting some comedy through...with no one really in mind then...but I always thought it was how people made you feel that mattered most of all....

    Not Your Type?

    You say I'm not your type
    Well, what can I do? Swipe?
    For a smaller chest?
    What will become of the rest?
    and that my hair isn't long....for cutting it I was wrong
    and I feel funny at my height
    because you're such a pint
    and I don't look up to you
    So what do we do?
    We were born as you and me
    on that...i know you will agree
    on the outside you don't seem
    like the guy of my dream
    just like a book and its cover
    what's right for one is wrong for another
    but I took a look deep inside
    where we really hide
    and it doesn't matter how we look
    just like that cover of the book
    because it is the way I feel when you are near
    and it makes me happy when you are here.....
     
  5. Dejavu

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    :)

    What do dolphins do anyway? lol
     
  6. Moonglow181

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    wrote this one in my teens, as well...in the back woods of my grandparent's cabin in Minnestoa. I miss them and there.....also saw a huge black bear there one year. Scared the crap out of me and I ran all the way back to the cabin...and know it could have caught me had it wanted to now. Heard a bear outside this window the other night about 2 am.....:eek:

    Corner of the World I Found

    Sitting on a quiet, dark, dirt road under the stars
    I can make out the constellations....I can see Mars
    The long winding road is illuminated brightly by the moon
    and the peepers and whippor-wills sing out in tune
    The birch, evergreen and pine trees intertwine and stick
    Creating proud walls all around me so tall and so thick
    Thinking about the pieces of the puzzle of my life
    while the cold of the night cuts into my bones like a knife
    Getting warm by cuddling up into a ball
    trying not to disturb wilderness's beckoning call
    Listening to the raspberry patches sleeping at night
    knowing that they will plump out again to see the light
    The wind sends scents of pine through the air
    as it rushes by me and plays with my hair
    no other human for miles around
    to disturb the corner of the world I found
    and though there aren't any people near
    there is so much life and joy right here....
     
  7. expanse

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    This is all very good! You should never stop.
     
  8. *MAMA*

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    Very nice poems, moon :)
     
  9. Moonglow181

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    Thanks so much, deja vu, expanse and mama....:)
     
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    I like your poetry moonglow!
     
  11. Moonglow181

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    Thank you, Meliai! :)
     
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    Winter's icy fingers clench the earth while
    winter holds the earth with white hands
    Life freezes for a moment in space....

    A tree's sinewy arm cracks a splintery
    fracture in the still ness while
    a wolf's hungry howl echoes an aching madness
    Life screams for a moment in space

    An icy wind bites holes in a frozen earth
    a blanket of snow falls to cover the wounds
    Life hurts for a moment in space

    Night falls and stars twinkle a quiet lullabye
    while strong bodies lull the weak to sleep
    Life rests for a moment in space

    Spring comes and kisses the earth's cracked lips
    while a warmth seeps through the earth's fractured bones
    Life loves for a moment in space

    The earth melts and becomes a soft moss cushioned bed
    while pulsating life forces create a dewey breath
    Life creates a garden in space....

    Life springs eternal in space....
     
  13. Moonglow181

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    Wrote this in 2008, when Puki pug died from heat exhauston.....

    Dearest Puki.....

    Our little beam of light
    Where did you go?
    So dark here at night
    Without you, wish you could know....

    How much we miss you
    In the shadows in the dark
    We need you to come on through
    We miss your song, your way, your bark

    You always waited, patiently, for your turn
    For someone to love you and share you with you
    And now that is all we yearn
    And how we wish we knew

    You'd be here no more one day too soon
    And leave us with too much regret
    Under this reflecting moon
    That can't ever forget

    In life you were a twinkler, a dear
    You always had the kindest eyes
    Puki, we wish you were still here
    Instead of a star shining in the skies.....
     
  14. Moonglow181

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    Roses and Lollipops

    Roses new; lollipops old
    Summers warm; winters cold
    Mixed bouquet; thing of beauty unfold
    Blazed with heat; chilled with cold

    Pink lollipop lullabye; you're a child
    Of love intense; manner mild
    Pink roses growing soft and wild
    Sweet woman; wild child

    Green lollipop days; a summered field
    Sun in your hair; a golden shield
    You touched a rose stem; pain you feeled
    Memories green; a woman shall yield

    You tasted the sun with lollipops yellow
    It sank within your mouth; lemony mellow
    Yellow hair, yellow eyes; small child of yellows
    A yellow rose bud grows and mellows

    Virginal days; childhood fantasies
    White rose petals free in the breeze
    You fell and scraped your creamy knees
    White petals whispered baby breaths in the breeze

    Peach rose, peach skin; lollipop dream
    Your soft velvet skin; peaches and cream
    Are childhood memories as they seem?
    Or is it a peach petaled lollipop dream?

    Cherry lollipops; you remember the best
    Santa and ticycle; your crimson red dress
    The reds of summer; fire in your chest
    Cherry lollipops are what you liked best

    Red roses; the woman you became
    Loving by nature; growing untame
    Childhood reds still seem the same
    A perfect red rose you became.

    A kaleidoscope of roses and lollipops sweet
    You're a child woman; a she complete
    Chilled winters melted to summer's soft heat
    A kaleidoscope of roses and lollipops sweet

    Roses new; lollipops old
    Summers warm; winters cold
    Mixed bouquet; thing of beauty unfold
    Blazed with heat; chilled with cold.

    Pink lollipop lullabye; you're a child
    Of love intense; manner mild
    Pink rose growing soft and wild
    Sweet woman; wild child....
     
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    He found her in a coat of woven gold
    and with meditated care, slowly undid diamond buttons
    and gently broke her winter costume which melted into tears
    Then he washed her wounds with spring
    and cloaked her in a robe of earth
    and placed a wreath of stars upon her head.....

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  16. Moonglow181

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    Silver Wings

    Sleepy outline of a twilight moon
    A luminous stitch of a dream to come soon
    Sewn together in a sweet summered tune
    With spattered drops of honeyed June

    An embroidered butterfly in pastels three
    Winged melon and pink and satin white free
    Stitched in an undaunted orchid fantasy
    Thin summered threads and a butterfly free....

    A luminous stitch hums a lullabye
    laced in blue velvet stitches of sky
    Melony pink sweet butterfly fly high
    to stitch a gold dream in a soft lullabye

    Sleepy moon spreads its wings in pastel dew
    to touch a butterfly; luminous and silvery new
    With a sweeped caress, a crescent butterfly grew
    In silver wings, stars stitched themselves through....
     
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    I love this in every way.
     
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  18. Moonglow181

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    ^Thank (you) so much! :)
     
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    Place is filth
    pure heart cannot survive
    pure heart cannot thrive
    Vampire followed me here
    sucked what i held dear
    what i held near
    leaving me me more alone than I have ever been
    I cannot play the game
    you are all the same
    you won
    I one
     
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    Love the poem and painting big time :)
     
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