Misinterpreted Betrayal

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Morningmist, Jan 10, 2005.

  1. Morningmist

    Morningmist Member

    tear on a lash as if in repose
    decision to be made

    disperse back into which it had sprung
    or be emotion's sacrifice

    you, of lightness and love,
    bearer of no pain

    emotional, physical, spiritual
    gasp
     
  2. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

    Tender and fragile, light enough to miss if you blink too fast.
    An elegant expression of a subtle feeling.
     
  3. imaflake

    imaflake Member

    Oh Wow!! I never realized until this very moment that I have experienced that feeling so many times, whether to hold the tear back or show your emotions.... Now that is poetry. You enabled me to recognize something in myself I had never seen before. Bravo!!
     
  4. Morningmist

    Morningmist Member

    thanks for the responses, i truly appreciate them
     

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