Discussion in 'Hippies' started by Peaceful_breeze, May 20, 2007.

  1. Memories

    for my mother

    As the day ends,
    and the sunsets,
    the night begins,
    it's time to rest,
    let loose of the burdens,
    that rest upon your shoulders,
    let go of the tears,
    put your hair in rollers,
    I will hold you,
    until dawn reaches,
    lay your head in my lap,
    I will rescue you from the leaches,
    the memories that hurt you so,
    the memories,
    you can now let go.

    Brianna Michelle Johnson

    Copyright ©2007 Brianna Michelle Johnson rate my Poem 1-10

  2. sunshine4life

    sunshine4life Member

    Sounds great to use for mothers day. Im just glad my mother wasnt so upset about anything.
  3. Freewheelin Franklin

    Freewheelin Franklin Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter's mine:
  4. wow. i like yours freewheelin! "for those who don't have sane mothers" My madre drinks a whole lot and get's pretty crazy but she makes awesome breakfast! anyways...breeze, yours is good i wish i had the one i made my mom with me but i'm at school so no can do...there's a whole thing for posting your poems and reading others on hip: you should check it out i see your new so you should go there. well see you later and good poem again!
  5. thehippie_08

    thehippie_08 that girl

    whoa..Peaceful_Breeze is really damn peaceful and a good writer. Hope your mother found that peace she was looking for!
  6. Lady Neko

    Lady Neko Member

    that was beautiful

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