Luminous! Embracing The Darkness!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by osiris, May 8, 2004.

  1. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    It is not the ideals that are at fault,
    but the ideologies that subvert them .
    So many shit-stained mouths, eagerly awaiting
    their dues within superficially contrived hierarchies.

    I know as I fade away, I permeate the murderous fate
    and transform from the ashes of hate, a new love insatiate.

    Deny the indoctrination of the dirty divination!
    Piss on the prophets and their puppet masters!

    No more side show to distract us
    from the task at hand! Luminous!

    Embracing the darkness!

    ("I" am the light that shines through "it"!)
     
  2. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    edited this
    i'm new
    aren;t we all
     
  3. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    clever, fun, anarchy!
     
  4. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    my ma always said, anarchy is as anarchy does.

    much love :)
     
  5. chandra anjali

    chandra anjali Member

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    :) i like it a lot.
     
  6. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    :) this is a wonderful view on all life
    how you roll this in to such a lovely piece
    reminds me of a deep longing to be part of life too

    thank you for post
    love n peace from saff
     
  7. Sebbi

    Sebbi Senior Member

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    5!!!


    Or should it be 6!
     
  8. osiris

    osiris Senior Member

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    you'll never catch me, double-o-sebbi!

    I AM THE GRANDMASTER!

    lol.

    much love :)
     
  9. herbivore

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  10. VanAstral

    VanAstral Member

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    osiris is dead, killed by his brother
    very sad,
    might've been reborn, though,
    i don't know how long that takes.
     
  11. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    Just wanted to let you know I enjoyed this piece, ty~*
     
  12. skyfire

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    i love the assonance in these lines...very clever...
     

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