Love Song

I wrote this to get back my girlfriend. I'm not a good singer but fuck it. The camera died before the end but I've yet to have a chance to re-record.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=5b02adDL0Rg

 

Why can't people just record with a microphone anymore????

I only have 56k

 

Fuckin agreed. I'd never show off a song I'd written with a video. That's even if I could upload it in less than a day and a half. Record audio, dude. ô d o.

 

Did she take you back?

The guitar wasn't bad, but I wasn't really diggin the lyrics.

 

she must be pretty easy if she did...

 

Well, that was a nice thing to say.

 

If you're looking for a critique, try writing out the lyrics for us.

 

well...its kind of cute and the guitar was pretty nice.

 

I don't have money for recording equipment.


Here are the lyrics:

Baby please
just hear me through
I want one thing
that thign is you

Yes i know
i fucked things up
but i cannot
just give up

You are my love
you are my girl
you bring me joy
you complete my world

baby please
come back to me
I love you more
than anything


Yes I cant sing
but i have to try
because how i feel
just wont die

baby please
come back to me
i love you more
than anything


baby please
come back to me
i love you more
than anything

i will do
what it takes
to win you back
and end this break





Sappy yes but i wrote what i felt.

 

that's all that matters, man.

 

no kidding. people that say "thats cliche" just piss me off

 

It is cliche.


But, if you won her back, congrats.

 

Yeah. Not written very well either

 

Well considering it's only my second actual song I've written, I find it to be pretty decent. ANd yeah it's not chalked up full of innuendos and hidden meaning but I'm not going to write something if its not what I feel.