Love Song

Discussion in 'Performing Arts' started by Peace, Jun 20, 2006.

  1. Peace

    Peace In complete harmony.

    I wrote this to get back my girlfriend. I'm not a good singer but fuck it. The camera died before the end but I've yet to have a chance to re-record.

    http://youtube.com/watch?v=5b02adDL0Rg
     
  2. Politics are awesome

    Politics are awesome Politics suck

    Why can't people just record with a microphone anymore????

    I only have 56k :(
     
  3. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

    Fuckin agreed. I'd never show off a song I'd written with a video. That's even if I could upload it in less than a day and a half. Record audio, dude. ô d o.
     
  4. SLammon420

    SLammon420 Senior Member

    Did she take you back?

    The guitar wasn't bad, but I wasn't really diggin the lyrics.
     
  5. ssreetnulov

    ssreetnulov Member

    she must be pretty easy if she did...
     
  6. SLammon420

    SLammon420 Senior Member

    Well, that was a nice thing to say.
     
  7. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

    If you're looking for a critique, try writing out the lyrics for us.
     
  8. rhasta.penguin

    rhasta.penguin No more hippy...ugh

    well...its kind of cute :p and the guitar was pretty nice.
     
  9. Peace

    Peace In complete harmony.

    I don't have money for recording equipment.


    Here are the lyrics:

    Baby please
    just hear me through
    I want one thing
    that thign is you

    Yes i know
    i fucked things up
    but i cannot
    just give up

    You are my love
    you are my girl
    you bring me joy
    you complete my world

    baby please
    come back to me
    I love you more
    than anything


    Yes I cant sing
    but i have to try
    because how i feel
    just wont die

    baby please
    come back to me
    i love you more
    than anything


    baby please
    come back to me
    i love you more
    than anything

    i will do
    what it takes
    to win you back
    and end this break





    Sappy yes but i wrote what i felt.
     
  10. SLammon420

    SLammon420 Senior Member

    that's all that matters, man.
     
  11. bassplaya

    bassplaya Member

    no kidding. people that say "thats cliche" just piss me off
     
  12. Politics are awesome

    Politics are awesome Politics suck

    It is cliche.


    But, if you won her back, congrats. :p
     
  13. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

    Yeah. Not written very well either :rolleyes:
     
  14. Peace

    Peace In complete harmony.

    Well considering it's only my second actual song I've written, I find it to be pretty decent. ANd yeah it's not chalked up full of innuendos and hidden meaning but I'm not going to write something if its not what I feel.
     

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