Long, black highway

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  1. Irminsul

    Irminsul Valkyrie

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    Me and Billy, roofers of houses
    We met at the local union hall
    And it was like, I'd found my long lost brother
    We drank like fish and we worked like dogs
    Looking back, I knew he'd get me in trouble
    But I ain't have too many friends
    Running up and down that Dixie highway
    We thought the good times would never end

    We chased women and we chased whiskey
    From the Gulf up to Ohio
    Then one night, we ran out of money
    So we robbed us an all night Texaco
    Right in there, I guess the friendship ended
    That's where all the good times fell apart
    I remember, screaming at Billy..
    He should have that kid alone, we should have drove off in the dark

    Down that long, black highway
    There's a deep dark hole
    Down that long, black highway
    There's a lot things you'll never know

    Well we pulled off on a backroad
    I thought to think about what we'd done
    I got out, took a leak and lit a smoke
    But now I'm wishing I had run
    Because Billy, he always was a mean one
    And he was stoned out of his head
    Well I guess, that he quit shooting
    When he thought that I was dead

    I woke up, some time around daylight
    But I didn't live long after that
    I was taken, back up to the highway
    By a ghost, he was wearing a Texaco hat
    Now me and that kid
    We haunt this stretch of highway
    We go and see Billy from time to time
    You know Billy, always acting a little bit crazy
    Well now he's done gone plumb out of his mind!

    Down that long, black highway
    There's a deep dark hole
    Down that long, black highway
    There's a lot of things you'll never know..
     
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  2. Irminsul

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    The lines on my father's face
    Ran deep as the creek beds on our place
    And the river flowed right through his soul
    But I know at times it took its toll
    When the crops would flood we lived on fish
    But never did my father wish
    To leave the land his life flowed from
    The river and my dad were one

    And I'm one of the rivers own
    Its current down inside me strong
    And its up to me to carry on
    Because I'm one of the rivers own

    As a kid I watched the river flow
    Yeah I admired the way it rocked and rolled
    Dad was proud I was a river rat
    But that's where our common grounds ended at
    Because I seen those city lights down stream
    They drew me in when I was seventeen
    I went everywhere that river run
    Yeah me and that river we were one

    Two years ago my dad passed away
    And I'll never forget that mournful day
    Then a lawyer read me out his will
    It said son it's time for you to be still..

    Then a week ago a government man
    Tried to pay me off to flood our land
    And I did just what my dad would have done
    You see me and that river we are one

    And I'm one of the rivers own
    It's current down inside me is strong
    And it's up to me to carry on
    Because I'm one of the rivers own
     
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  3. Irminsul

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    Hello old man have you room for a wanderer?
    Running from his checkered past
    Nahh I ain't your favorite son
    I'd never even tie for last
    You still cuss the dirt and beg for rain
    Stubborn as your son and twice as vein
    Think of all that you had done
    'fore you tell me you ain't wandering none

    Well now your wayward son has come back home
    Whaddya think about me when I was gone?
    Old man when I was on your knee
    You might have known I'd turn out to me like me

    Hello old man the world is strange
    Cut you up and mend you back again
    You got your scars in some forgotten war
    Mine I got on the bar room floor
    Yeah you'd tell me tales when I was a child
    Lord they made me wonder and made me wild
    I guess I had to be like you
    Well there weren't no wars but I made do

    And now your wayward son has come back home
    What did you think about me when I was gone?
    Old man while I was on your knee
    You didn't think I'd turn out to be like me?

    Hello old man life rolls along
    And I'm just trying to reap what you have sewn
    You never wished me well on the night I left
    But in my eyes you saw yourself

    And now your wayward son has come back home
    Did you think much about me while I was gone?
    Old man when I was on your knee
    You should have known turn out, to be like me
    You should have known I'd turn out, to be like you.
     
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    It was a summer evening,
    Old Kaspar's work was done,
    And he before his cottage door
    Was sitting in the sun,
    And by him sported on the green
    His little grandchild Wilhelmine.

    She saw her brother Peterkin
    Roll something large and round,
    Which he beside the rivulet
    In playing there had found;
    He came to ask what he had found,
    That was so large, and smooth, and round.

    Old Kaspar took it from the boy,
    Who stood expectant by;
    And then the old man shook his head,
    And, with a natural sigh,
    "'Tis some poor fellow's skull," said he,
    "Who fell in the great victory.

    "I find them in the garden,
    For there's many here about;
    And often when I go to plough,
    The ploughshare turns them out!
    For many thousand men," said he,
    "Were slain in that great victory."

    "Now tell us what 'twas all about,"
    Young Peterkin, he cries;
    And little Wilhelmine looks up
    With wonder-waiting eyes;
    "Now tell us all about the war,
    And what they fought each other for."

    "It was the English," Kaspar cried,
    "Who put the French to rout;
    But what they fought each other for,
    I could not well make out;
    But everybody said," quoth he,
    "That 'twas a famous victory.

    "My father lived at Blenheim then,
    Yon little stream hard by;
    They burnt his dwelling to the ground,
    And he was forced to fly;
    So with his wife and child he fled,
    Nor had he where to rest his head.

    "With fire and sword the country round
    Was wasted far and wide,
    And many a childing mother then,
    And new-born baby died;
    But things like that, you know, must be
    At every famous victory.

    "They say it was a shocking sight
    After the field was won;
    For many thousand bodies here
    Lay rotting in the sun;
    But things like that, you know, must be
    After a famous victory.

    "Great praise the Duke of Marlbro' won,
    And our good Prince Eugene."
    "Why, 'twas a very wicked thing!"
    Said little Wilhelmine.
    "Nay... nay... my little girl," quoth he,
    "It was a famous victory.

    "And everybody praised the Duke
    Who this great fight did win."
    "But what good came of it at last?"
    Quoth little Peterkin.
    "Why that I cannot tell," said he,
    "But 'twas a famous victory."
     
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  5. Irminsul

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    If I were you
    Then I would gladly loan to me a dollar or two so I could eat
    Yeah and maybe get just one good night of sleep
    But I'm not
    And I'm stranded like a castaway in this town
    And you seem so unwilling to help a fellow when he's down
    If I were you
    That's what I'd do

    If I were you
    I wouldn't be out on these streets the whole night through
    Yeah I'd have a job and a pretty wife that I could come home to
    But I don't
    And I have twenty cents left to my name
    And you're the only one left here that I have to blame
    If I were you
    That's what I'd do

    And sir it's my way to take from you the things I haven't earned.
    I wish I could go back and heed the lessons I have learned
    But I can't
    So you'll gladly put your money in this sack
    Yes sir this thing is loaded and I have the hammer back
    If I were you
    That's what I'd do
     
  6. Eric!

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    Sad but real
     
  7. Irminsul

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    It'd been snowing all day when I got home
    The fire was and the cabin was cold
    I poured some stale coffee from the pot
    The longer I waited the snow got higher
    I had to split some wood and build a fire
    And she told me she'd be gone
    I forgot.

    I'd seen it snow that hard before
    I couldn't see the cabin from the stable door
    And that mare she always rode was in the stall
    The law couldn't come until the weather broke
    My heart was pounding in my throat
    I searched called her name until it was raw

    I never should have brought her here
    Living is hard this time of year
    Trying to keep food and fire until winters done
    Some times she'd gaze out on the plain
    With a look that I couldn't name
    And I'd wonder if she'd stay to spring time had come

    I found her on the first warm day
    The rain had washed the snow away
    She'd gone for wood and lost her way back home
    Now I ain't the kind that believes in ghosts
    But some nights I get pretty close
    When that North Dakota winter moans
     
  8. Irminsul

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    Yeah, i can feel a very realistic scenario. I really enjoy the ending though because it's exactly what I'd do and my attitude. I'd become that ghost that becomes a real pain in the ass.

    I actually think I should build on it, maybe write a book or a screen play? It's better than most shite they're putting out there.
     
  9. Eric!

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    Oh yes, definitely build on it. It's a story that a lot of folks are very familiar with and have seen it happen or know someone it's happened to. I like it.
     
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    This one also could be a good screenplay film. This next one is, about the time I killed a guy that killed my brother. :smirk:

    I was eighteen, my brother was twenty one
    One Saturday evening when all the work was done
    We went down to the river, had some trot line to run
    My brother Walter was in a fight the week before
    Knocked a boy named Wilson through the pool hall door
    And they said you don't mess with Wilson unless you wanted war
    I back the boat in the water and I made the engine run
    I loaded the lantern against the sinking sun
    And my brother Walter was loading his gun

    And we went down the river..

    Down past the coal dock we were running our line
    Hear some drunken boaters racing up behind
    It's Wilson and his cousin, they had trouble on their mind
    They passed on by us probably gone to tend their pod
    We headed up the river with the fish we'd caught
    But before we made the landing, I thought I heard a shot

    Back down the river..

    My brother Walter fell over the side
    I couldn't find him no matter how I tried
    And I looked along the bank
    I couldn't find where they'd hide
    They dragged the river they searched up and down
    Couldn't find his body so they decided that he drowned
    But I knew better and Wilson bragged around town
    So one night I floated down right above Wilson's shack
    I hid in the wood until I saw him walk out back
    I put a bullet in his head, dropped him in his tracks

    And we went down the river..

    Down below the tressel where the water run slow
    I chained him to an anvil and then I let him go
    And five years later, I ain't told a soul
    And I ain't done much fishing I hardly wet a line
    The death of my brother still weighs heavy on my mind
    I been thinking Wilson's cousin had better find a place to hide

    Cause I'm going down the river..
     
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  11. Eric!

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    I like this one too. How long does it take you to create these poems?
     
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    Oh, they aren't mine lol. It's just song writing. I probably should have said that. Though I do have some whoppers I could share. :)

    These all come from my favorite singer songwriter Chris Knight. I was sharing his works because I felt it important to post written literature that wasn't all fancy poems and that you can write a really good poem or song with just basic lyrics and stuff.
     
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    Oh ok
     

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