Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fee, Jan 19, 2005.

  1. fee

    fee Member

    Day in, day out
    twisted thourowly throughout
    I dont believe
    But try to concieve
    I dont know why
    But still I try
    with every yerning moment
    with every wakening day
    Without conserving
    Without deserving
    Trying to do my best
    Trying not like the rest
    But I dont know why

    well I wrote this when I was going throw cancer, multiple surgeries and chemotherapy.
    thats why its kinda depressing
    I can explain any and all of it
    if any of you care for me too ask what something means and I will tell you
    but its highly unlikelly anyone will care to ask
    peace fee
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

    I like the bold lettered assertion at the end! You're a fighter and that's exactly as it should be. Okay, a question: "I don't believe/ but try to conceive" What's it refer to?
  3. fee

    fee Member

    everything I was going through
    I was 16/17 had 4 tumors and 5 surgeries
    to me its was unreal
    couldnt be true
    so I didnt really believe this was happining but had to try too concieve that this was the truth
  4. kjhippielove88

    kjhippielove88 color + rhyme

    i love this poem. i like a poem that can me feel something, whether it be good or bad. A good writer can make you feel anything

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