life, some sort of god-rejection.

poison kiss, lick my lips,​

love your pain, feed my hurt​

play the game, kill my heart​

take my life, sell it used ​

fucking hard, violent fuel.​

felt it gone, heard it scream​

open hole, die for free.​

bleeding empty, blood is black​

worthless life, desperate fuck.​

cut the razor, bleed me sick​

touch me silent, self defense.​

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what do you think?​

 

depressing!

 

angry..
this is a hard focused poem
but very honist about this painful fear.

i hope this passes and you feel relieved soon

great energy in this too.

love n peace from saff

 

That pretty much sums it up. (scarface accent ----->) Some tymes my friend ju gotda show does cock-ka-roashes how your roll.
one question.
What song best goes with your poem?

 

geez

powerful

 

nine inch nails, "somewhat damaged" is the song i was listening to as i wrote it, so i guess it would be that..

 

thats pretty angry....great writing....please try happiness as a subject! ur a great writer tho!